Lethal Lyricist League Week 1: Cred vs Bomb Bar'd(NEEDS ONE MORE VOTE)

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

DUE DATE
Due Dates is THURSDAY MIDNIGHT P.S.T.



No Show
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Additional Stipulations





- Voting -
Each week, each competitor will be required to vote on at least 3 Battles.
Championship & Contenders Matches are required to be voted on by everyone.
Failure to comply, will result in vote deductions (1 link = 1 deducted vote).


- Extension Request -
All Extension Request must be submitted no later than 24 hours before deadline.
If your opponent has already dropped their verse, they can either accept or deny your request.
If your opponent has not dropped their verse, both will be granted extension IF your opponent agrees.

LASTE MINUTE EXTENSIONS
We are willing to make exceptions on some occassions but no matter the exception it will always be up to your opponent.



- Pic Battle Option -
If you want to do a pic battle, you and your opponent must agree in the check-ins

[Bomb Bard]

check going 10 early @Cred

[Cred]

Cash.

[Cred]

I beat ur bitches pussy to death! U only go hard in the chat
It's always a Game of Survival once I put that Ark in her back
Bomb bar'd me wit dat? Twin Beams to ur chest leave u breathless
Them 2 Dots leave ur mid-section slanted like the sign for percentage
A family guy vs the gun bar king? Dawg u won't even land a bar
Catch u eating dinner wit ur kids n fire thru dat table like ur avatar
Punch 'em in the face n if he don't fall from this mean hit
I'm coming right back with the same hook. That's a remix
That Beam got the best aim. Talk crazy n ur meetin the pump
Ur mouth 'll get the Red dot then the Smoke like u hitting a blunt

@Bomb Bar'd

[Bomb Bard]

Yo... I tried to get back on last night and ask for the ext. shit wouldn't work and shits still barely working. I can write a verse up today's when I get to a comp if not take the ns. Cred msg me on NC

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

Yo... I tried to get back on last night and ask for the ext. shit wouldn't work and shits still barely working. I can write a verse up today's when I get to a comp if not take the ns. Cred msg me on NC

You have until today.

[Bomb Bard]

on it

[Bomb Bard]

This fgt should’a Died awhile ago, look….

Cuz my punches are over your head… along with vultures and flies

Ironically my punches went over ur head… n so did da fuckin vultures n flies

you look to go in hard but leaving W/a broken jaw,..Bomb a monster
It aint CRAZY to side eye Amen when we read ya verse & find a Bar thats BONKERS^^^
Biting Dre got you death row - You trap? I’ll roll in & leave ya crew knocked
let Afeni on ya head till you RIP in the same place as the Mom of Tupac
you not welcome to open doors here, punches aint jus dentin ya dome
they warn I'll shoot first Foyer safety..than put 2 in ya head as you Enter ya home
you so tied to gun bars - no generics... this easily deaden dude
I can show you the ropes, which goes round ya neck til you stop beathing & ya head is blue
i'll Chop ya body up till its gone, fuck what god is thinking
when I’m asked bout death I sacred…jus to keep secrets on how his body missing


open for votes

[Joe Boston]

Cred

Percentage
Avatar references are wack but yours,was pretty cool

Bomb
Foyer was cool
Afeni but u worded it kinda ass

Wow cant believe how many played concepts from both.bomb overall had a tad better consistency if cred had one more haymaker wouldve got it

V/bomb

[Smog]

Cred

Opener was light.. Percentage was nice..the act joint was ooook..remix is too played n didn't really like how u worded that closer, overall ur pretty creative with ur shit man thought that percentage was dope


Vs

Bomb

Opener was ok but someone allready used those quotes on him...2pac was iight the play was cool...foyer was nice...show u the ropes is too played...closer was ehh coulda been better n plus I've seen sacred on him, overall I like the approach here started off personal which is dope


This is pretty close both had a couple weak joints n a played bar I just feel bomb was more direct n tryin ta attack personally which gives him the edge imo.. Creds doper than that tho so we'll see

Vote bomb

[A. Diction]

I beat ur bitches pussy to death! U only go hard in the chat
It's always a Game of Survival once I put that Ark in her back
--- nice......
Bomb bar'd me wit dat? Twin Beams to ur chest leave u breathless
Them 2 Dots leave ur mid-section slanted like the sign for percentage
--- cool.......
A family guy vs the gun bar king? Dawg u won't even land a bar
Catch u eating dinner wit ur kids n fire thru dat table like ur avatar
--- not a fan of avy punches but this isn't a complete miss.......
Punch 'em in the face n if he don't fall from this mean hit
I'm coming right back with the same hook. That's a remix
--- never seen this so it's fire to me.........
That Beam got the best aim. Talk crazy n ur meetin the pump
Ur mouth 'll get the Red dot then the Smoke like u hitting a blunt
--- concept is super played but the wording helped a lot..........


Vs


you look to go in hard but leaving W/a broken jaw,..Bomb a monster
It aint CRAZY to side eye Amen when we read ya verse & find a Bar thats BONKERS^^^
--- ehh... Overworded but decent......
Biting Dre got you death row - You trap? I’ll roll in & leave ya crew knocked
let Afeni on ya head till you RIP in the same place as the Mom of Tupac
--- nahh..........
you not welcome to open doors here, punches aint jus dentin ya dome
they warn I'll shoot first Foyer safety..than put 2 in ya head as you Enter ya home
--- almost. Overworded again...........
you so tied to gun bars - no generics... this easily deaden dude
I can show you the ropes, which goes round ya neck til you stop beathing & ya head is blue
--- 2008...........
i'll Chop ya body up till its gone, fuck what god is thinking
when I’m asked bout death I sacred…jus to keep secrets on how his body missing
--- played, nothing original here. U gonna use a common name play u gotta have a fresh flip.........




Overall: creds verse was a lot cleaner and he had the better hits. Bomb had too many misses and his lines were over worded and came off jumbled up.



V. Cred

[Letterman]

Bomb bar'd me wit dat? Twin Beams to ur chest leave u breathless
Them 2 Dots leave ur mid-section slanted like the sign for percentage
A family guy vs the gun bar king? Dawg u won't even land a bar
Catch u eating dinner wit ur kids n fire thru dat table like ur avatar

Vs

you look to go in hard but leaving W/a broken jaw,..Bomb a monster
It aint CRAZY to side eye Amen when we read ya verse & find a Bar thats BONKERS^^^

Only think that hit from bomb was the opener. Cred had 2 although I was on the fence about the percentage one. He edged this battle tho

v/Cred

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

@Killing Spree

[Cockies]

Cred got it

Vote cred

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

@Fern @alphadog hit me with a vote in here