LLL Round 8: Upgrade (0-0) vs itsLEG1ON (0-0)[upgrade wins]

[Fresh]

DUE DATE
Due Dates is FRIDAY MIDNIGHT P.S.T.
Voting Due SUNDAY MIDNIGHT P.S.T.



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- Pic Battle Option -
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@Upgrade
@itsLEG1ON

[Upgrade]

Yep

[itsLEG1ON]

here

[itsLEG1ON]

@Upgrade yo 10 is cool right?

[Upgrade]

@Upgrade yo 10 is cool right?

Yep, I got 10 ready

[Upgrade]

Seems like a great battle site here

Joe u ain't foolin anyone lol

Makes fun of other ppl for spending too much time on here

Name change to Joe Boston @Fresh u ban my old account nice

ItsLEG1ON

I don't write threats I post promises, better not have any holes in ya lines N bring ur A game
So, you best patch ur verse...or I'll leave u with 1 instead of an eye like your user name
Gonna do RB a favor and chase this wack fuck out don't fight bro just comply
Cuz You're an average Joe B, so leave! and if u come back nigga... You're lamer than that guy
U try n act Act cool and collected, but with some heat on you.. You'll be a mess Bruh
I know you're a bitch.. Once I put the piece to ya head you'll start speaking fluent in jeshka
Stop yapping about gun clapping or fucking hoes we know you're lying to get recognition
See you aren't smooth or a sharpshooter, although that is the only way ud force a bitch into submission
You're trash af, been an influx of no shows lately that have caused LLL to diminish
Everyone is wondering if legion will last in the league..I'm just certain that's where he'll finish

Appreciate the week off fresh

[itsLEG1ON]

mb was out of the house all day had this ready but didn't know if you wanted more than 10

Bro why you stalking me every day I’m online
Upgrade sounds fucking nerdy your mother love me long time
Doritos and Mountain Dew caking over your keyboard
I’ll nail your bitch in the ass and start calling her Eeyore
I’ll bet you a rat, sounding like a teacher’s pet
Gay ass faggot I got a rainbow shell for you no easter egg
Nobody’s better off after hearing you, what you upgrading?
The case your parents make against you rapping for an occupation?
Cause every time you rap they just think about the fortune
That they could’ve saved if they had just gotten that abortion

[Smog]

Upgrade

Opener
Nigga
Closer

^ I liked those coulda been tightened up a lil but still thought they were nice.. That jeshka shit is played n I've seen sharpshooter pretty much referenced the same too.. Overall cool verse

Legion

Really the only joint I liked of urs was rainbow shell man the rest really had no connection.. Maybe a lil creativity woulda made um hit.. They came off plain but wit a lil work ull be fine...

Upgrade got this easy Imo pretty solid verse legion just gotta get the feel of things n he'll be iight..
Props on showing

Upgrade

[Surplus]

Vote - upgrade

Upgrade, your closer was dope, rest of the verse was good. Consistent. Only critic I'd give is to shorten your lines a little bit, just felt like you were packing way too much into a line, makes it hard as a reader to stay with the rhythm, nice verse though

Legion, not bad for a newcomer but definitely some work to be done. Some of your lines were really soft. I'd say you need to work on concepts and creativity. Good flow though, definitely have potential to get better as ya move forward.

[War Shack]

Upgrade had the jeshka line n sharp shooter line i liked. Luckily i peeped a jeshka post so i caught that immediately. Legion has a rough idea but he has to work on forming n landing more creative punches. Clear sweep for Upgrade

Vote Upgrade

[Rich Porter]

U try n act Act cool and collected, but with some heat on you.. You'll be a mess Bruh
I know you're a bitch.. Once I put the piece to ya head you'll start speaking fluent in jeshka
Stop yapping about gun clapping or fucking hoes we know you're lying to get recognition
See you aren't smooth or a sharpshooter, although that is the only way ud force a bitch into submission

vs

I’ll bet you a rat, sounding like a teacher’s pet
Gay ass faggot I got a rainbow shell for you no easter egg


Eyeore line could've been deep too if the set up wasn't so bad lol. This battle was pretty decent imo with the quotes from above. I'm digging both styles, legion just needs to tighten up that wording. Upgrade had a cleaner worded verse and punches I liked more.

Vote - Upgrade

[KnowP]

upgrade wins