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The Law
Forge
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@Forge you got 48hrs to get two voting links homie
Originally Posted by Forge
It’s Ironic he couldn’t set up the thread n explode through them gold gates
Since against my Lining, he was already sewing his own fate!
Law got em in lockdown and he’ll try to show his pride in bars
But if it’s “Forge n a dope verse”, he took a page from a lyin’ heart
So keep trying brah, cause the shit you ‘garner’ up will look like a freebies thrown
and I’ll have to shutdown this ‘alias’ quicker than the tv show
It’s all a act.. He ain’t dropping dimes that could stand in my pasture
So how you breaking grahams for cheese when you could barely handle the cracka
He’s no facter! Claiming he gonna smash KS’s mom? Quit replying tacky
Cause I’ll use forge’s hammer to smash his own mom worse than tyler hadley
You’ll find her napping, covered in blood, looking like a resident evil classic
Then toss her in with forge, so the rest of RB can see the ashes!!
Last edited by Spree; August 3rd, 2016 at 01:13 PM
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u hate voted me in that battle bitch, ur tactics a joke
cause lawful of shit n it should be considered a crime for this faggot to vote.
tell ur whole squad they pussy, then slash each whores neck
i'll dismember's of ur crew, cut off all there limbs an drop"em at ya door step.
u lost ur virginity to a huge girl, thats always workin dick
funny that sluts your first mate, the bitch is the size of a merchant ship
catch u while ur all dressed up, start airing ya wit a shotty
i'll put a hollow in lawsuit, shit'll cause a defamation of character to ur body.
i'll kill everyone in ur crib while ur out, clean cut a neck
when u interpols of blood are every where,
...it'll take a country of police to help clean up the mess.
ur verses dont make sense, u'll get torched quick
nothing about u's natural law, it'll be a phenomenon if u won wit that forced shit
Last edited by KnowP; August 3rd, 2016 at 12:38 PM
It’s Ironic he couldn’t set up the thread n explode through them gold gates
Since against my Lining, he was already sewing his own fate!
>> light starter 0.25
Law got em in lockdown and he’ll try to show his pride in bars
But if it’s “Forge n a dope verse”, he took a page from a lyin’ heart
>> another light bar 0.25
So keep trying brah, cause the shit you ‘garner’ up will look like a freebies thrown
and I’ll have to shutdown this ‘alias’ quicker than the tv show
>> niice 0.50
It’s all a act.. He ain’t dropping dimes that could stand in my pasture
So how you breaking grahams for cheese when you could barely handle the cracka
>> dope 0.50
He’s no facter! Claiming he gonna smash KS’s mom? Quit replying tacky
Cause I’ll use forge’s hammer to smash his own mom worse than tyler hadley
>> light 0.25
You’ll find her napping, covered in blood, looking like a resident evil classic
Then toss her in with forge, so the rest of RB can see the ashes!!
>> didnt like this finish 0.0
Total: 1.75
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u hate voted me in that battle bitch, ur tactics a joke
cause lawful of shit n it should be considered a crime for this faggot to vote.
>> lol good start 0.50
tell ur whole squad they pussy, then slash each whores neck
i'll dismember's of ur crew, cut off all there limbs an drop"em at ya door step.
>> not feelin this one bro 0.0
u lost ur virginity to a huge girl, thats always workin dick
funny that sluts your first mate, the bitch is the size of a merchant ship
>> no 0.0
catch u while ur all dressed up, start airing ya wit a shotty
i'll put a hollow in lawsuit, shit'll cause a defamation of character to ur body.
>> niice 0.50
i'll kill everyone in ur crib while ur out, clean cut a neck
when u interpols of blood are every where,
...it'll take a country of police to help clean up the mess.
>> okay 0.25
ur verses dont make sense, u'll get torched quick
nothing about u's natural law, it'll be a phenomenon if u won wit that forced shit
>> ok finish 0.25
Total: 1.50
V/ law (super slight edge - forge had some good nameflips but just had one more misses than law had, but if he replaced it wit another bar, i would of gave it to forge but good battle yall)
It’s all a act.. He ain’t dropping dimes that could stand in my pasture
So how you breaking grahams for cheese when you could barely handle the cracka
-THIS WAS HOT
VS
u hate voted me in that battle bitch, ur tactics a joke
cause lawful of shit n it should be considered a crime for this faggot to vote.
-OK
catch u while ur all dressed up, start airing ya wit a shotty
i'll put a hollow in lawsuit, shit'll cause a defamation of character to ur body
-COOKIN
V-Forge ...He had harder hits throughout his verse
It’s Ironic he couldn’t set up the thread n explode through them gold gates
Since against my Lining, he was already sewing his own fate!
1/3
This is a miss
Law got em in lockdown and he’ll try to show his pride in bars
But if it’s “Forge n a dope verse”, he took a page from a lyin’ heart
1/3
Another miss.
So keep trying brah, cause the shit you ‘garner’ up will look like a freebies thrown
and I’ll have to shutdown this ‘alias’ quicker than the tv show
1.5/3
Light jab.
It’s all a act.. He ain’t dropping dimes that could stand in my pasture
So how you breaking grahams for cheese when you could barely handle the cracka
3/3
This is fire. tie in was good, and the multi was cool. damn dawg, didn't know you had this in you
He’s no facter! Claiming he gonna smash KS’s mom? Quit replying tacky
Cause I’ll use forge’s hammer to smash his own mom worse than tyler hadley
2/3
Good jab
, woulda been a haymaker if I saw he actually said he'd do that. And if he did? You need to always quote your opponent in a battle instead of saying a bar like this. It takes its credibility away
You’ll find her napping, covered in blood, looking like a resident evil classic
Then toss her in with forge, so the rest of RB can see the ashes!!
1.5/3
Excellent idea but there's not enough context for this to completely work
vs.
u hate voted me in that battle bitch, ur tactics a joke
cause lawful of shit n it should be considered a crime for this faggot to vote.
2/3
Decent opener, decent jab
tell ur whole squad they pussy, then slash each whores neck
i'll dismember's of ur crew, cut off all there limbs an drop"em at ya door step.
1/3
Diss members? That's old wordplay.
And If I read "i'll dismembers of ur crew" it's nonsense. So, make sure it works both ways cause this truly should be frowned upon by now in this community.
u lost ur virginity to a huge girl, thats always workin dick
funny that sluts your first mate, the bitch is the size of a merchant ship
1/3
This is a miss. not enough context for the merchant ship reference to hit
catch u while ur all dressed up, start airing ya wit a shotty
i'll put a hollow in lawsuit, shit'll cause a defamation of character to ur body.
2/3
This is a good jab but it's worded cheesy. i dont think that angle can be worked easily, but it did hit.
i'll kill everyone in ur crib while ur out, clean cut a neck
when u interpols of blood are every where,
...it'll take a country of police to help clean up the mess.
[B]1/3[/B
This is a miss.
ur verses dont make sense, u'll get torched quick
nothing about u's natural law, it'll be a phenomenon if u won wit that forced shit
2.5/3
Probably your best. Nice closer, good hit.
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MVGT: The Law 10
Forge 9.5
Law was more consistent and he had LOTB. Forge was realllll close to winning this with consistent jabs, but that wordplay is forced and it ruined his chances.
Close battle, could go either way.
So keep trying brah, cause the shit you ‘garner’ up will look like a freebies thrown
and I’ll have to shutdown this ‘alias’ quicker than the tv show
It’s all a act.. He ain’t dropping dimes that could stand in my pasture
So how you breaking grahams for cheese when you could barely handle the cracka
He’s no facter! Claiming he gonna smash KS’s mom? Quit replying tacky
Cause I’ll use forge’s hammer to smash his own mom worse than tyler Hadley
vs
u hate voted me in that battle bitch, ur tactics a joke
cause lawful of shit n it should be considered a crime for this faggot to vote.
tell ur whole squad they pussy, then slash each whores neck
i'll dismember's of ur crew, cut off all there limbs an drop"em at ya door step.
u lost ur virginity to a huge girl, thats always workin dick
funny that sluts your first mate, the bitch is the size of a merchant ship
ur verses dont make sense, u'll get torched quick
nothing about u's natural law, it'll be a phenomenon if u won wit that forced shit
best battle in FL right now. shits pretty fire from both sides. good bars and flips. good work on throwing punches but I gotta give it the one who dropped harder overall.
v. forge
The Law:
It’s Ironic he couldn’t set up the thread n explode through them gold gates
Since against my Lining, he was already sewing his own fate!
Not feeling.
Law got em in lockdown and he’ll try to show his pride in bars
But if it’s “Forge n a dope verse”, he took a page from a lyin’ heart
Ugh, no.
So keep trying brah, cause the shit you ‘garner’ up will look like a freebies thrown
and I’ll have to shutdown this ‘alias’ quicker than the tv show
Not feeling.
It’s all a act.. He ain’t dropping dimes that could stand in my pasture
So how you breaking grahams for cheese when you could barely handle the cracks
I’m pretty sure, regardless of accent, ^ doesn’t rhyme. Eh. Not feeling.
He’s no facter! Claiming he gonna smash KS’s mom? Quit replying tacky
Cause I’ll use forge’s hammer to smash his own mom worse than tyler hadley
This was alright.
You’ll find her napping, covered in blood, looking like a resident evil classic
Then toss her in with forge, so the rest of RB can see the ashes!!
eh.
Forge:
u hate voted me in that battle bitch, ur tactics a joke
cause lawful of shit n it should be considered a crime for this faggot to vote.
lol, pretty good opener.
tell ur whole squad they pussy, then slash each whores neck
i'll dismember's of ur crew, cut off all there limbs an drop"em at ya door step.
Not bad.
u lost ur virginity to a huge girl, thats always workin dick
funny that sluts your first mate, the bitch is the size of a merchant ship
Eh, god the wording. Not feeling.
catch u while ur all dressed up, start airing ya wit a shotty
i'll put a hollow in lawsuit, shit'll cause a defamation of character to ur body.
Eh, this was alright… Like the lawsuit word play could’ve been something, disappointed with
the end result.
i'll kill everyone in ur crib while ur out, clean cut a neck
when u interpols of blood are every where,
...it'll take a country of police to help clean up the mess.
Not bad, a bit forced, just depends how you say interpol… but I see what you were doing there.
ur verses dont make sense, u'll get torched quick
nothing about u's natural law, it'll be a phenomenon if u won wit that forced shit
Eh.
Law man, wasn’t really feeling this effort here. I thought you drop was poorly worded,
slightly forced, and not great conceptually. Keep at it man.
Forge, I think you have pretty good concepts, the wording is challenging sometimes,
and one thing I have learned… It’s alright to simplify things. I saw all your word play,
but my challenge is focus less on getting clever with wordplay and just delivering
bars that are mean. RB responds better to that.
v/Forge.
3-2 Forge. upping
Nice Wordplay
Meh, nice. but more of a jab filler
Ouch..
ok
Nice punch
what happened here?
Nice Battle, but my overall vote goes to The Law
peace.
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Law
It’s Ironic he couldn’t set up the thread n explode through them gold gates
Since against my Lining, he was already sewing his own fate!
Okay wordplay here. Not too much for an opener tho. And it's quite gay you based the entire concept on sewing
Law got em in lockdown and he’ll try to show his pride in bars
But if it’s “Forge n a dope verse”, he took a page from a lyin’ heart
eh once again I see the name/word-play, which is consistent, but just not powerful in my opinion.
So keep trying brah, cause the shit you ‘garner’ up will look like a freebies thrown
and I’ll have to shutdown this ‘alias’ quicker than the tv show
"freebies thrown" just seems awkward. And this is a decent concept, but would only work if the guy was really said to be an alias.
It’s all a act.. He ain’t dropping dimes that could stand in my pasture
So how you breaking grahams for cheese when you could barely handle the cracka
what?
He’s no facter! Claiming he gonna smash KS’s mom? Quit replying tacky
Cause I’ll use forge’s hammer to smash his own mom worse than tyler hadley
nah, nice attempt at a personal, but this was a fail.
You’ll find her napping, covered in blood, looking like a resident evil classic
Then toss her in with forge, so the rest of RB can see the ashes!!
These just aren't punchlines.
Forge
u hate voted me in that battle bitch, ur tactics a joke
cause lawful of shit n it should be considered a crime for this faggot to vote.
I actually checked tat battle after it was voted and decided and I said all the same shit as he did.
Not feeling the nameplay here. The connection wasn't made.
tell ur whole squad they pussy, then slash each whores neck
i'll dismember's of ur crew, cut off all there limbs an drop"em at ya door step.
nope
u lost ur virginity to a huge girl, thats always workin dick
funny that sluts your first mate, the bitch is the size of a merchant ship
no again. Come with something concrete. These are just random bars that I could battle any of my neighbors with.
catch u while ur all dressed up, start airing ya wit a shotty
i'll put a hollow in lawsuit, shit'll cause a defamation of character to ur body.
decent. But really, this concept was stretched,
i'll kill everyone in ur crib while ur out, clean cut a neck
when u interpols of blood are every where,
...it'll take a country of police to help clean up the mess.
statemental shit. i need to see something clever and well though out.
ur verses dont make sense, u'll get torched quick
nothing about u's natural law, it'll be a phenomenon if u won wit that forced shit
nope. statemental.
This battle wasn't the best.
Law put in the effort, but I though his concepts were executed but mostly gay and whack.
Forge was just all over the place. Didn't directly attack his opponent with anything concrete at all.
My vote goes to Law for a batter verse after all.
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