Elegant Elephant vs. OG Maestro

[OG Maestro]

10 lines due by Sunday midnight EST. I'm putting up 50 of my points.

[mal diction]

your states board, mal do in styles, and off ya top ice man
i'm stupid. stump the shit out of you, guess i'll never understand
who's the underhanded MC ..versus me you'll never sea shine dear
if this is a walk in the park, then i'll stop, guess life's a beachchair
blind near sighted MC's with one line... guess it's my rap pressence
you're unbeweavable on the net getting help, try a better tether sent
what is beef ... beef is somthing the made you start the Jeep
i'm better man. call me daybreak, you'll get knighted in a heartbeat

[mal diction]

like the new credit chip i'll insert the clip..to kill this decoy
even his girl got confetti read when i bust a nut she's like chips ahoy

- - - Updated - - -

- ready

is the word in the last line ... not "read"

[OG Maestro]

Look at this light bastard; a Fake Nigga. he cant handle this matter
I'll strangle this Elephant 'till he Pale-Faced. call him an 'Animal Cracker'

your name is Elegant *sneezes*
*wipes my nose*.......... Jesus.

He needs to RETIRE, cause there's not much more he'll come say
But I'll give this Old Man Numbers so bad, he'll think it's a 401 K

In LLL it's Elephant vs. Knucks, I beat him, & now you're eyeing ME?
Yall both in the Trunk.
I'm finna get arrested for bodying cats with Knuckles made of Ivory

The fact that he'll have to Read This L will have done left El' mad
It's ironic:
I'm giving his Top Punches so bad, you'll find 'em in the FL mag

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[Middle Finger]

your states board, mal do in styles, and off ya top ice man
i'm stupid. stump the shit out of you, guess i'll never understand

Noooo 0/10
who's the underhanded MC ..versus me you'll never sea shine dear
if this is a walk in the park, then i'll stop, guess life's a beach-chair
Nooo where is the punch? 0/10
blind near sighted MC's with one line... guess it's my rap pressence
you're unbeweavable on the net getting help, try a better tether sent
You're not hitting AT ALL 0/10
what is beef ... beef is somthing the made you start the Jeep
i'm better man. call me daybreak, you'll get knighted in a heartbeat

Attempted a punch I think but still no hit 1/10

like the new credit chip i'll insert the clip..to kill this decoy
even his girl got confetti read when i bust a nut she's like chips ahoy

Nope, not feeling any of this 0/10

1/50

Look at this light bastard; a Fake Nigga. he cant handle this matter
I'll strangle this Elephant 'till he Pale-Faced. call him an 'Animal Cracker'
Not a bad opener, maybe could've hit harden though 6/10

your name is Elegant *sneezes*
*wipes my nose*.......... Jesus.
Umm waste of a bar 1/10

He needs to RETIRE, cause there's not much more he'll come say
But I'll give this Old Man Numbers so bad, he'll think it's a 401 K

Ehh weakish 4/10

In LLL it's Elephant vs. Knucks, I beat him, & now you're eyeing ME?
Yall both in the Trunk.
I'm finna get arrested for bodying cats with Knuckles made of Ivory
I get the ivory being illegal and to hunt elephants scheme but how you put it together coulda been much better 5/10

The fact that he'll have to Read This L will have done left El' mad
It's ironic:
I'm giving his Top Punches so bad, you'll find 'em in the FL mag
Decent 6/10

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22/50 MVGT: OG, battle was one sided AF

[BG513]

your states board, mal do in styles, and off ya top ice man
i'm stupid. stump the shit out of you, guess i'll never understand

I don't feel this was worded as cleverly as you may have thought

who's the underhanded MC ..versus me you'll never sea shine dear
if this is a walk in the park, then i'll stop, guess life's a beachchair

Not feeling this. Lol, honestly, the wordplay here is pretty dag on lame!

blind near sighted MC's with one line... guess it's my rap pressence
you're unbeweavable on the net getting help, try a better tether sent

You stuck in the 90's with this generic wordplay bro

what is beef ... beef is somthing the made you start the Jeep
i'm better man. call me daybreak, you'll get knighted in a heartbeat

definitely not hittin

OH WAIT ..there's more :/

like the new credit chip i'll insert the clip..to kill this decoy
even his girl got confetti "ready" when i bust a nut she's like chips aho

still not feelin your digs broski


vs


Look at this light bastard; a Fake Nigga. he cant handle this matter
I'll strangle this Elephant 'till he Pale-Faced. call him an 'Animal Cracker'

Lol, this is corny, But won the battle.
Do I even still need to continue breaking bars down?


your name is Elegant *sneezes*
*wipes my nose*.......... Jesus.

Lol, is this a bar?

He needs to RETIRE, cause there's not much more he'll come say
But I'll give this Old Man Numbers so bad, he'll think it's a 401 K

Lol, decent

In LLL it's Elephant vs. Knucks, I beat him, & now you're eyeing ME?
Yall both in the Trunk.
I'm finna get arrested for bodying cats with Knuckles made of Ivory

decent

The fact that he'll have to Read This L will have done left El' mad
It's ironic:
I'm giving his Top Punches so bad, you'll find 'em in the FL mag

lol


My vote goes to OG for better execuyion of his concepts.
El's wordplay got reallly tiring and they seemed very played out.
No hate to either.
It's all for the battle.

[KnowP]

@Elegant Elephant get your links in asap

[Jason Voorhees]

your states board, mal do in styles, and off ya top ice man
i'm stupid. stump the shit out of you, guess i'll never understand

vs

He needs to RETIRE, cause there's not much more he'll come say
But I'll give this Old Man Numbers so bad, he'll think it's a 401 K
In LLL it's Elephant vs. Knucks, I beat him, & now you're eyeing ME?
Yall both in the Trunk.
I'm finna get arrested for bodying cats with Knuckles made of Ivory

The fact that he'll have to Read This L will have done left El' mad
It's ironic:
I'm giving his Top Punches so bad, you'll find 'em in the FL mag

Landslide.

[.SiQ.]

Nothing

Vs

Animal cracker was ok, 401K was dope, ivory line was light, ur closer was cool

Vote- OG by a landslide

ee- please work on better concepts and harder punches

[OG Maestro]

4-0

[mal diction]

will vote ... are you ice man from 411 .. cus i'm mal diction

[KnowP]

EE DQ'd - no links