Core Vet vs KnowP [OPEN FOR VOTES]

[Core Vet]

10 line battle
I get more hoes than Know
due in 2 hr max
im lyin.. im engaged
check in cuz

[KnowP]

checcccckkkkkk

[Core Vet]

True story.

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We doin that 10 minute thing? I'll start Ke'n..

[KnowP]

True story.

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We doin that 10 minute thing? I'll start Ke'n..

i'll be done in a few

[KnowP]

This retard thinks he’s a battle hero til I floor his chin
Cause if you got an S on your chest, you put your shirt on backwards again
Im the battling president, yo bars are all up for repo
U don’t belong in the upper office. That’s why everyone stepping on veto
Got guns to blast, when I pull up, it’s a no brainer
I’ll give core six soo fast, ud think I was an athletic trainer
Show up to ya crib n watch u cry, nothing but a chump
u such a bitch behind bars, u could room with Chris Brown and still get punked
messin wit the wrong dog, leave u lion dead on ya roof
way im twisting up C in the air, you’d think I was banging with Snoop




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[Core Vet]

You got all my links in the voting area. I need to post em? I voted in 5 battles.

[Core Vet]

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Diligently.. I did willingly mastered a ole brilliant piece on killing KnowP
Edgar Allen Po shit.. Rip out his heart < bury it just to hear a slow beat
U know me.. This a chess feat.. One wrong move n u chin checked, fool..
hands like wind
on how they swiftly move across n caress ya face like them ball sacks do..
And w.the Smith i'll make this killin a classic! So u ought remember this day
break both ya legs in MY Ad-didas... after i show you how to walk this way..
And if i expose the metal.. it's from bending it from my body like Korra
Deadly aura!
....... The shot'll fire bend.. flip'n ya top like that couple in a Ford Explorer
Movin forward im gifted w.lyric shit.. I spit twisted, and that leave you flat
Thrilled abt the punches.. I told him this was it, so he could meet Mic Jack.

[Core Vet]

@OG Maestro @Klass @Dia @Joe Boston @killin g Spree @Unfukwitable @Fredo Kruger @boston @BG513

[Negan]

KnowP:

This retard thinks he’s a battle hero til I floor his chin
Cause if you got an S on your chest, you put your shirt on backwards again

Opener was good yet funny, good here.

Got guns to blast, when I pull up, it’s a no brainer
I’ll give core six soo fast, ud think I was an athletic trainer

Came for a personal on the name, like it. Came out ok IMO.

Core:

Diligently.. I did willingly mastered a ole brilliant piece on killing KnowP
Edgar Allen Po shit.. Rip out his heart < bury it just to hear a slow beat

Prob the BEST line in my eyes so good opener, ok here.

Honestly the rest of the verse was an ok read, but i dont know why i feel he could have came harder than what was done here. Especially seeing with name you carry. Maybe its just me.

Overall i feel KnowP came pretty solid without doubt here.

[BG513]

This retard thinks he’s a battle hero til I floor his chin
Cause if you got an S on your chest, you put your shirt on backwards again

This is lightweight funny, but as I mentioned before, this is an indirect punch. Another thing is that the end rhyme is very weak.

Im the battling president, yo bars are all up for repo
U don’t belong in the upper office. That’s why everyone stepping on veto

I'm glad to see you finally taking a personal shot. Even if it is only nameplay.
Although, I don't really see veto being associated with vet.

Got guns to blast, when I pull up, it’s a no brainer
I’ll give core six soo fast, ud think I was an athletic trainer

Not a fan of the gunplay in battles AT ALL. I just don't see you as a seasoned vet with this typa shit. I expect you to be waaay more polished. Maybe I'm just giving you a harder time because you are such a long timer, but I think you should be better than this based on that fact.
Also, the end rhyme is so weak. I need to see more multis for sure.
Also, the concept isn't strong to me. Although it is a personal attempt.
Kudos for that.

Show up to ya crib n watch u cry, nothing but a chump
u such a bitch behind bars, u could room with Chris Brown and still get punked

Okay to see ya use some current news in your battle but I still believe it should be corperated with some nameplay or actual personals. Also, the en rhyme once again. Very off.

messin wit the wrong dog, leave u lion dead on ya roof
way im twisting up C in the air, you’d think I was banging with Snoop

nahh. Good shot at some nameplay, but I sint feeling this at all.

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Diligently.. I did willingly mastered a ole brilliant piece on killing KnowP
Edgar Allen Po shit.. Rip out his heart < bury it just to hear a slow beat

The rhymes were decent although they seemed a little forced. The first 4 or 5 words didn't make sense. Also, there was no punch here.

U know me.. This a chess feat.. One wrong move n u chin checked, fool..
hands like wind
on how they swiftly move across n caress ya face like them ball sacks do..

nah, no to the gay shit

And w.the Smith i'll make this killin a classic! So u ought remember this day
break both ya legs in MY Ad-didas... after i show you how to walk this way..

nah..I aint feling this and no to the gun talk in a text battle

And if i expose the metal.. it's from bending it from my body like Korra
Deadly aura!
....... The shot'll fire bend.. flip'n ya top like that couple in a Ford Explorer

decent concept but hurts your opponent in no way

Movin forward im gifted w.lyric shit.. I spit twisted, and that leave you flat
Thrilled abt the punches.. I told him this was it, so he could meet Mic Jack.

Not feelin this either. Should have attacked your opponent more directly


Overall, KnowP took this easily as he attacked his opponent for the most part.
Core didn't really say too much imo.
No hate to either. It's all about the battle.
Vote: KnowP

[.SiQ.]

Kp: S on his chest was ur best and i think the best bar of the battle. Made me fukin rolllll lmfao. Veto & Core nameflips were both cool. The last 2bars i wasnt diggin.

Cor: ur opener i thought hit the hardest bro, then i felt ya fell off a bit and then picked up a lil bit of steam on ur closer.

Vote- knowp
Overall: cool battle but i got kp edging it bcuz consistency. Keep bangin yall

[Middle Finger]

This retard thinks he’s a battle hero til I floor his chin
Cause if you got an S on your chest, you put your shirt on backwards again
Decent opener, nice play on the battle hero thing nothing too special though 6/10
Im the battling president, yo bars are all up for repo
U don’t belong in the upper office. That’s why everyone stepping on veto
I liked this line the play on Vet but also stepping on V toe....nice bar 8/10
Got guns to blast, when I pull up, it’s a no brainer
I’ll give core six soo fast, ud think I was an athletic trainer

Another nice play on his name solid bar 6/10
Show up to ya crib n watch u cry, nothing but a chump
u such a bitch behind bars, u could room with Chris Brown and still get punked
Ehh wasn't feeling this bar too much sub par at best 4/10
messin wit the wrong dog, leave u lion dead on ya roof
way im twisting up C in the air, you’d think I was banging with Snoop
The snoop line was dope like the play on both his names, snoop dog as well as snoop lion and we obviously understand the crip reference in the bar. Nice finish 8/10


32/50



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Diligently.. I did willingly mastered a ole brilliant piece on killing KnowP
Edgar Allen Po shit.. Rip out his heart < bury it just to hear a slow beat
Decent opening bar 5/10
U know me.. This a chess feat.. One wrong move n u chin checked, fool..
hands like wind
on how they swiftly move across n caress ya face like them ball sacks do..
Not feeling this one first line had promise, 2nd line dropped the power more of a joke then punch 4/10
And w.the Smith i'll make this killin a classic! So u ought remember this day
break both ya legs in MY Ad-didas... after i show you how to walk this way..
I get the run dmc reference and all but was that really a punch 3/10
And if i expose the metal.. it's from bending it from my body like Korra
Deadly aura!
....... The shot'll fire bend.. flip'n ya top like that couple in a Ford Explorer
I'm sorry idk what couple you're referring to but I believe you and understand the connection not bad, wish I knew the reference though 5/10
Movin forward im gifted w.lyric shit.. I spit twisted, and that leave you flat
Thrilled abt the punches.. I told him this was it, so he could meet Mic Jack.
Got the punch got the MJ bar wasn't bad but coulda hit a little harder for your closer 5/10

22/50

MVGT : KnowP

[Meth]

This retard thinks he’s a battle hero til I floor his chin
Cause if you got an S on your chest, you put your shirt on backwards again
--I'm blanking on this one bro lol
Im the battling president, yo bars are all up for repo
U don’t belong in the upper office. That’s why everyone stepping on veto
--ok
Got guns to blast, when I pull up, it’s a no brainer
I’ll give core six soo fast, ud think I was an athletic trainer
--cool dig
Show up to ya crib n watch u cry, nothing but a chump
u such a bitch behind bars, u could room with Chris Brown and still get punked
--nah
messin wit the wrong dog, leave u lion dead on ya roof
way im twisting up C in the air, you’d think I was banging with Snoop
--lion/lying is fine because its not the main part of the line so I hope no one gives u shit for that. Cool close




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Diligently.. I did willingly mastered a ole brilliant piece on killing KnowP
Edgar Allen Po shit.. Rip out his heart < bury it just to hear a slow beat
--could have been dope of dome correctly
U know me.. This a chess feat.. One wrong move n u chin checked, fool..
hands like wind
on how they swiftly move across n caress ya face like them ball sacks do..
--nah man
And w.the Smith i'll make this killin a classic! So u ought remember this day
break both ya legs in MY Ad-didas... after i show you how to walk this way..
--nope
And if i expose the metal.. it's from bending it from my body like Korra
Deadly aura!
....... The shot'll fire bend.. flip'n ya top like that couple in a Ford Explorer
--no idea dude
Movin forward im gifted w.lyric shit.. I spit twisted, and that leave you flat
Thrilled abt the punches.. I told him this was it, so he could meet Mic Jack
--idgi tbh.

Easy dub for Jay
Other guy must be new.

Good shit fellas

V/ KP

[Core Vet]

So im losin in my battles cause they don't get the concepts.. cuz!! I'd be killin u if they did lol smh BUMP. Good job, fam'lay!

[OG Maestro]

This retard thinks he’s a battle hero til I floor his chin
Cause if you got an S on your chest, you put your shirt on backwards again
1/4 miss
Im the battling president, yo bars are all up for repo
U don’t belong in the upper office. That’s why everyone stepping on veto
1/4 miss, the wordplay doesn't work both ways either
Got guns to blast, when I pull up, it’s a no brainer
I’ll give core six soo fast, ud think I was an athletic trainer
2/4 decent jab, execution was light
Show up to ya crib n watch u cry, nothing but a chump
u such a bitch behind bars, u could room with Chris Brown and still get punked
1/4 weak statement, this missed
messin wit the wrong dog, leave u lion dead on ya roof
way im twisting up C in the air, you’d think I was banging with Snoop
2/4 decent jab

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Diligently.. I did willingly mastered a ole brilliant piece on killing KnowP
Edgar Allen Po shit.. Rip out his heart < bury it just to hear a slow beat
1.5/4 weak jab
U know me.. This a chess feat.. One wrong move n u chin checked, fool..
hands like wind
on how they swiftly move across n caress ya face like them ball sacks do..
1/4 fam. what are you doing.
And w.the Smith i'll make this killin a classic! So u ought remember this day
break both ya legs in MY Ad-didas... after i show you how to walk this way..
1/4 your execution was terrible. that reference old as hell too, it's 2016
And if i expose the metal.. it's from bending it from my body like Korra
Deadly aura!
....... The shot'll fire bend.. flip'n ya top like that couple in a Ford Explorer
1/4 you stretched this bar and executed it badly, it took all the impact out of the punchline
Movin forward im gifted w.lyric shit.. I spit twisted, and that leave you flat
Thrilled abt the punches.. I told him this was it, so he could meet Mic Jack.
1.5/4 weak jab, another old reference

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MVGT: KnowP gay ass