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Thread: WK20: Middle Finger vs Slecht [Slecht wins]

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    WK20: Middle Finger vs Slecht [Slecht wins]

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    Re: WK20: Middle Finger vs Slecht

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    Re: WK20: Middle Finger vs Slecht

    Okay cool.

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    Re: WK20: Middle Finger vs Slecht

    I sent 10. @Middle Finger @KnowP

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    Re: WK20: Middle Finger vs Slecht

    Kkk. 10 it is

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    Re: WK20: Middle Finger vs Slecht

    ...this battle I'm coming tough and direct, bars I'm cuttin the stretch, what the fuck is a slecht
    This verse will leave him tangled on the web, when I shoot you know it's nothing but net...

    ...In The Mag, KnowP got the odds against me, expecting Slecht to win? Most battles up y'all not proud of me?
    Tough 1st battle for ya, you won't make it out the season like year round allergies...

    ...not letting it go KP got me rowdy, so I creep on Slecht in this 3 L league
    How can he doubt me, feel more than my reign when he drift down this waterfall and crash and burn like the rapper out of TLC...

    ...never see me no show, I'll at least always make the battle
    I hate to brag too, but you couldn't throw around nice words if you were shaking scrabble...

    ...I'm spankin' this lame, break him down then rearranging his frame
    If he's a great then beating him should make me a name, when this verse leaves him as silent as the H in his name...

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    Re: WK20: Middle Finger vs Slecht

    Slecht verse




    Watch closely how the King beheads those who commit treason with a mighty sword
    It'll be quite a loss when they see finger roll down the court - like Ewing in 94'.
    Acting like a big name won't get him a spot in the throne, all the readers say this.
    He will always be a little, finger. Sneaky rat but with half the wit of Peter Baelish.
    Don't expect him to blam any cannon, no gunplay from this irrational faggot.
    He ain't raising his arms at all, ...colin kaepernick during the national anthem.
    I'm blasting a couple clips, as I catch him in the whip. Hear the bullets thunder
    Literally off his seat, body in the air like Isaiah Rashad's Album cover.
    It's not U.K Rappers, I'm talking bout' dude get clapped up & his temple finna break.
    Fuck any special traits . I got severals way to give MF doom - That's metal to his face.

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    Re: WK20: Middle Finger vs Slecht [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    this battle I'm coming tough and direct, bars I'm cuttin the stretch, what the fuck is a slecht
    This verse will leave him tangled on the web, when I shoot you know it's nothing but net...
    ehhh saw where you were going but ending landed weak to me]
    ...In The Mag, KnowP got the odds against me, expecting Slecht to win? Most battles up y'all not proud of me?
    Tough 1st battle for ya, you won't make it out the season like year round allergies...
    started strong but ended on a lite note here
    ...not letting it go KP got me rowdy, so I creep on Slecht in this 3 L league
    How can he doubt me, feel more than my reign when he drift down this waterfall and crash and burn like the rapper out of TLC...
    supper played concept and verrrryyy wordy
    ...never see me no show, I'll at least always make the battle
    I hate to brag too, but you couldn't throw around nice words if you were shaking scrabble...
    better wording but very lite concept and played as well
    ...I'm spankin' this lame, break him down then rearranging his frame
    If he's a great then beating him should make me a name, when this verse leaves him as silent as the H in his name...
    again the ending was soft and name flips on the silent letter have been done to death




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    Watch closely how the King beheads those who commit treason with a mighty sword
    It'll be quite a loss when they see finger roll down the court - like Ewing in 94'.
    aight flip
    Acting like a big name won't get him a spot in the throne, all the readers say this.
    He will always be a little, finger. Sneaky rat but with half the wit of Peter Baelish.
    naw not feelin this one
    Don't expect him to blam any cannon, no gunplay from this irrational faggot.
    He ain't raising his arms at all, ...colin kaepernick during the national anthem.
    lazy punch here. could of gotten more creative with this verse.
    I'm blasting a couple clips, as I catch him in the whip. Hear the bullets thunder
    Literally off his seat, body in the air like Isaiah Rashad's Album cover.
    aight
    It's not U.K Rappers, I'm talking bout' dude get clapped up & his temple finna break.
    Fuck any special traits . I got severals way to give MF doom - That's metal to his face.
    aight




    finger had a bunch of wordy bars and most punches were old concepts. like 10 years old. gotta get more current and stop being soo wordy. slecht was mad rusty and it showed here. concepts were coo but lacked sting at the punchline. the opener was the LOTB but that was lite too.


    v. slecht

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    Re: WK20: Middle Finger vs Slecht [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    ...this battle I'm coming tough and direct, bars I'm cuttin the stretch, what the fuck is a slecht
    This verse will leave him tangled on the web, when I shoot you know it's nothing but net...

    ...In The Mag, KnowP got the odds against me, expecting Slecht to win? Most battles up y'all not proud of me?
    Tough 1st battle for ya, you won't make it out the season like year round allergies...


    vs


    Watch closely how the King beheads those who commit treason with a mighty sword
    It'll be quite a loss when they see finger roll down the court - like Ewing in 94'.
    Acting like a big name won't get him a spot in the throne, all the readers say this.
    He will always be a little, finger. Sneaky rat but with half the wit of Peter Baelish.
    It's not U.K Rappers, I'm talking bout' dude get clapped up & his temple finna break.
    Fuck any special traits . I got severals way to give MF doom - That's metal to his face.


    V. The S guy.

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    Re: WK20: Middle Finger vs Slecht [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    MF

    Opener was mild to me not a strong impact more like a love tap.
    I was fucking with that second bar not a bad similie the wording was better.
    3rd bar was wayyyyy too wordy get straight to the punch had a bunch of unecessary shit there
    Shaking scrabble very old reference
    Closer very soft man those references dont usually do it for me

    Slecht

    Opener nice nameplay reference shorten that setup tho
    2nd bar worded horribly
    Wow that colin kaepernick punch was soft af ive seen alot sorry
    Isaih Rashad reference dope af man current punch
    Seen mf doom flips this one not bad

    V/Slecht

    Took it comfortably here felt he was more consistent that Isiah Rashad line lotb. MF still gotta work on wording and shortening up his lines just get straight to the punch

    For example

    Full of hatred here if this motherfucker wanna brawl
    No TLC but bullets wetup ur brain now thats chasing waterfalls

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    ...this battle I'm coming tough and direct, bars I'm cuttin the stretch, what the fuck is a slecht
    This verse will leave him tangled on the web, when I shoot you know it's nothing but net...

    I don't feel this hit bro. There was no complexity involved. You seemed to only use associated words but not execute them into a solid hit. 4/10

    ...In The Mag, KnowP got the odds against me, expecting Slecht to win? Most battles up y'all not proud of me?
    Tough 1st battle for ya, you won't make it out the season like year round allergies...

    Real simple simile here bro. Very light jab. 5/10

    ...not letting it go KP got me rowdy, so I creep on Slecht in this 3 L league
    How can he doubt me, feel more than my reign when he drift down this waterfall and crash and burn like the rapper out of TLC...

    hmm .. I see all of the association, yet I think the concept fell short. 4/10

    ...never see me no show, I'll at least always make the battle
    I hate to brag too, but you couldn't throw around nice words if you were shaking scrabble...

    This is a deent concept and decent execution although it was fairly indirect toward your opponent. 6/10

    ...I'm spankin' this lame, break him down then rearranging his frame
    If he's a great then beating him should make me a name, when this verse leaves him as silent as the H in his name...

    light concept. I personally don;t really dig it. 5/10

    24/50

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    Watch closely how the King beheads those who commit treason with a mighty sword
    It'll be quite a loss when they see finger roll down the court - like Ewing in 94'.

    Fresh concept. Good execution. Would have added the spice if you would have cut out the simile and instead made it a metaphor. 8/10

    Acting like a big name won't get him a spot in the throne, all the readers say this.
    He will always be a little, finger. Sneaky rat but with half the wit of Peter Baelish.

    Not hip to Game of Thrones so i had to google it. I dig the nameplay and execution but the concept falls short for my preference. Could have taken it to better places if ya ssk me. 7/10

    Don't expect him to blam any cannon, no gunplay from this irrational faggot.
    He ain't raising his arms at all, ...colin kaepernick during the national anthem.

    Nice metaphor. I think the punchline could have been executed better. Just looks like some typical Lil Wayne type shit: "No more am I my brother's keeper - Cain and Abel" or "I got bitches that'll kill for me, Charles Manson". Lol, I can't stand that shit. Haha .. let me see if I can make one really quick ... uhm.. I'm pushin keys - laptop. lmao. But, like I said, the metaphor is dope. 7/10

    I'm blasting a couple clips, as I catch him in the whip. Hear the bullets thunder
    Literally off his seat, body in the air like Isaiah Rashad's Album cover.

    nah I feel this was a stretch. Plus, I hate gun talk in motherfuckin text battles!! 3/10

    It's not U.K Rappers, I'm talking bout' dude get clapped up & his temple finna break.
    Fuck any special traits . I got severals way to give MF doom - That's metal to his face.

    To give MF doom? Doesn't make sense. I almost thought you said you was gonna give MF dome. lol nah good concept, damn good nameplay but poor execution. 6/10

    24/50 - 48% out of 100% of points
    31/50 - 62% out of 100% of points

    slecht took this with better and more complex concepts.

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    Re: WK20: Middle Finger vs Slecht [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    Nothing

    Vs

    Finger roll

    MF had some okish ideas but his wording killed the impact of gdc916@hotmail.com decent attempts. Your bars are too wordy, cut em down and take out some of the unnecessary words so that it flows smoother. Slecht had the better misses and a punch that landed so he takes this.

    v/Slecht

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    Re: WK20: Middle Finger vs Slecht [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    out the season was ok, execution wasn't sharp tho

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    finger roll
    mf doom

    raising his arms was an almost

    v/slecht

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    Re: WK20: Middle Finger vs Slecht [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    .never see me no show, I'll at least always make the battle
    I hate to brag too, but you couldn't throw around nice words if you were shaking scrabble...

    ^ Generous quote.

    Vs

    Acting like a big name won't get him a spot in the throne, all the readers say this.
    He will always be a little, finger. Sneaky rat but with half the wit of Peter Baelish.
    It's not U.K Rappers, I'm talking bout' dude get clapped up & his temple finna break.
    Fuck any special traits . I got severals way to give MF doom - That's metal to his face

    Pretty easy win here for Slecht. I quite liked the baelish line. The mf doom line was aight, nothing special but enough to beat your opponent here.

    MF work on making shit harsher. Concepts are ok but wording is soft.

    v/slecht

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    Re: WK20: Middle Finger vs Slecht [OPEN FOR VOTES]

    Watch closely how the King beheads those who commit treason with a mighty sword
    It'll be quite a loss when they see finger roll down the court - like Ewing in 94'.
    >>dope 4/5

    Acting like a big name won't get him a spot in the throne, all the readers say this.
    He will always be a little, finger. Sneaky rat but with half the wit of Peter Baelish.
    >>No 0/5

    Don't expect him to blam any cannon, no gunplay from this irrational faggot.
    He ain't raising his arms at all, ...colin kaepernick during the national anthem.
    >>lite 1/5

    I'm blasting a couple clips, as I catch him in the whip. Hear the bullets thunder
    Literally off his seat, body in the air like Isaiah Rashad's Album cover.
    >>No 0/5

    It's not U.K Rappers, I'm talking bout' dude get clapped up & his temple finna break.
    Fuck any special traits . I got severals way to give MF doom - That's metal to his face.
    >>Could of been a haymaker but wordin was off 2/5

    Total: 7/25
    ___________

    ...this battle I'm coming tough and direct, bars I'm cuttin the stretch, what the fuck is a slecht
    This verse will leave him tangled on the web, when I shoot you know it's nothing but net...
    >>lite 1/5

    ...In The Mag, KnowP got the odds against me, expecting Slecht to win? Most battles up y'all not proud of me?
    Tough 1st battle for ya, you won't make it out the season like year round allergies...
    >> lite 1/5

    ...not letting it go KP got me rowdy, so I creep on Slecht in this 3 L league
    How can he doubt me, feel more than my reign when he drift down this waterfall and crash and burn like the rapper out of TLC...
    >>No 0/5

    ...never see me no show, I'll at least always make the battle
    I hate to brag too, but you couldn't throw around nice words if you were shaking scrabble...
    >>cool 3/5

    ...I'm spankin' this lame, break him down then rearranging his frame
    If he's a great then beating him should make me a name, when this verse leaves him as silent as the H in his name...
    >>lite 1/5

    Total: 6/25

    Vote: S

    Close battle but i got S winnin this one very very slighty, only by 1pt. If MF shortens his bars and focuses more on the executions and less of the multis, he'll be a fukin problem ! Good shit yall.

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