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Middle Finger
FRONTLINES PRESENTS:
CONTENDERS MATCH
@Authentic.
vs
@Middle Finger
House Rules
Check-in by Wednesday 11:59pm EST
Verses due by Friday 11:59pm EST
One 24 hr extension available upon request
10 lines min.
16 lines max.
good luck!!
Last edited by KnowP; September 27th, 2016 at 03:51 PM
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I may drop tonight I'm bored
...miss me with the scorn, after this your family will be busy with the mourn
This battles hopeless for you, you couldn't win a round playing frisbee in a storm...
...Heave you off the ledge or I could just rope ya, hope he shows or maybe he's a choker
You gon climb a mountain just to get ya back broke, since you wanna be batman and a joker...
...I won't stop digging till you're burried, I'm Harambe to this chimp it's more scary
Cuz when Darwin sees a real animal in the jungle he'll bitch up like the wild Thornberrys...
...you want gun bars? We can do gun bars, you must have a death wish bro
We'll see how many rounds you can take when i give you every clip at once like a Netflix show...
...bring this phony to me, I'm seriously offended, in this battle my skills are augmented
this fake shit certainly I'll end it cuz a name change couldn't make you anymore Authentic...
...better run as fast as you can, I'm sending arrows at your neck, this battle ya getting smashed
You'll die a loser & never be a legend tomorrow, cuz you couldn't see W even if you were the flash...
...losing to your co-leader how stupid do you feel, yes I'm shooting him to kill
Charles Darwin didn't suit you anyway I see no evolution in ya skills!...
Module 14 is hidden
Middle... just give up battling in FL fam, cuz nobody care for ya joints
cut ya fingers off... leaving only the Middle one.. now u gettin my point
Klass worked u out... he made you feel de-tention, n got hit w.pressure
so I use my knuckles to massage on ya face.. like doing a good gesture
Ya bitch said, facing me was a titanic mistake, n she knew u'd be dead
So i wrecked the clit w.my middle finger n left the pussy Jose Fernandez
And New Jersey aint been relevant since they retired Jason Kidd, the vet
left a Legend! But he aint the only one that need to retire from the net
Not even sure how you a contender.. guess P just needed a placement
hit u w.multiple bars, wires, and screw's.. what ya face get replaced wit
Truly sorry for the devastation in ya city. To much for ya pride to manage
n blunt force lea' u wrecked like that train, n u wont survive the damage
Klass, BG, and now me, damn cuz, you been catching L's thru the week
u cant compete.. draggin yo ass in this battle.. s'what u call a loser streak!
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...miss me with the scorn, after this your family will be busy with the mourn
This battles hopeless for you, you couldn't win a round playing frisbee in a storm...
>>Cool but i thought u used this bar already???
...Heave you off the ledge or I could just rope ya, hope he shows or maybe he's a choker
You gon climb a mountain just to get ya back broke, since you wanna be batman and a joker...
>>Really lite
...I won't stop digging till you're burried, I'm Harambe to this chimp it's more scary
Cuz when Darwin sees a real animal in the jungle he'll bitch up like the wild Thornberrys...
>>Lite again bro
...you want gun bars? We can do gun bars, you must have a death wish bro
We'll see how many rounds you can take when i give you every clip at once like a Netflix show...
>>ight
...bring this phony to me, I'm seriously offended, in this battle my skills are augmented
this fake shit certainly I'll end it cuz a name change couldn't make you anymore Authentic...
>>this was decent
...better run as fast as you can, I'm sending arrows at your neck, this battle ya getting smashed
You'll die a loser & never be a legend tomorrow, cuz you couldn't see W even if you were the flash...
>>lite
...losing to your co-leader how stupid do you feel, yes I'm shooting him to kill
Charles Darwin didn't suit you anyway I see no evolution in ya skills!...
>>ur dopest bar! Niice!
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Middle... just give up battling in FL fam, cuz nobody care for ya joints
cut ya fingers off... leaving only the Middle one.. now u gettin my point
>>Dope!!
Klass worked u out... he made you feel de-tention, n got hit w.pressure
so I use my knuckles to massage on ya face.. like doing a good gesture
>>Appreciate the shout out but i felt this was a miss bro
Ya bitch said, facing me was a titanic mistake, n she knew u'd be dead
So i wrecked the clit w.my middle finger n left the pussy Jose Fernandez
>>Ok
And New Jersey aint been relevant since they retired Jason Kidd, the vet
left a Legend! But he aint the only one that need to retire from the net
>>Niice
Not even sure how you a contender.. guess P just needed a placement
hit u w.multiple bars, wires, and screw's.. what ya face get replaced wit
>>No
Truly sorry for the devastation in ya city. To much for ya pride to manage
n blunt force lea' u wrecked like that train, n u wont survive the damage
>>Lite
Klass, BG, and now me, damn cuz, you been catching L's thru the week
u cant compete.. draggin yo ass in this battle.. s'what u call a loser streak!
>>Cool bar
V/ Authentic for stronger haymakers & consistency
...miss me with the scorn, after this your family will be busy with the mourn
This battles hopeless for you, you couldn't win a round playing frisbee in a storm...
this is a miss.
...Heave you off the ledge or I could just rope ya, hope he shows or maybe he's a choker
You gon climb a mountain just to get ya back broke, since you wanna be batman and a joker...
wasnt feeling this, another miss in my book.
...I won't stop digging till you're burried, I'm Harambe to this chimp it's more scary
Cuz when Darwin sees a real animal in the jungle he'll bitch up like the wild Thornberrys...
this is a soft jab, barely made any impact honestly
...you want gun bars? We can do gun bars, you must have a death wish bro
We'll see how many rounds you can take when i give you every clip at once like a Netflix show...
another soft jab, you should stick to your normal material. you're not good at gun bars, it seems
...bring this phony to me, I'm seriously offended, in this battle my skills are augmented
this fake shit certainly I'll end it cuz a name change couldn't make you anymore Authentic...
you need to learn how to use grammar in your lines, more.
and this line is a solid hit.
...better run as fast as you can, I'm sending arrows at your neck, this battle ya getting smashed
You'll die a loser & never be a legend tomorrow, cuz you couldn't see W even if you were the flash...
"see W" is mad awkward but it works. this is a decent hit.
...losing to your co-leader how stupid do you feel, yes I'm shooting him to kill
Charles Darwin didn't suit you anyway I see no evolution in ya skills!...
"losing to YOUR"......"I'm shooting HIM". Bro. you need to use proper grammar, this is getting ridiculous. elementary schoolers know better than to switch pronouns like this. and you didnt even put quotes around "Charles Darwin", so it looks sloppy. you gotta remember, this is text, not audio.
anyway, this is a solid jab.
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Middle... just give up battling in FL fam, cuz nobody care for ya joints
cut ya fingers off... leaving only the Middle one.. now u gettin my point
soft jab. bars like this show you can think, but that's about it. they dont hurt your opponent as much as they show your ability to be slightly clever
Klass worked u out... he made you feel de-tention, n got hit w.pressure
so I use my knuckles to massage on ya face.. like doing a good gesture
this is a miss. "knuckles to massage" is a very bad visual, and bad wording to read in Text. maybe it wouldn't seem so bad with an animated live battler that could make it seem funny.
Ya bitch said, facing me was a titanic mistake, n she knew u'd be dead
So i wrecked the clit w.my middle finger n left the pussy Jose Fernandez
i didnt like this at all. miss. you have a style where there's nothing wrong with it, but your audience (me, right now) isn't feeling your delivery on these bars
And New Jersey aint been relevant since they retired Jason Kidd, the vet
left a Legend! But he aint the only one that need to retire from the net
does MF play basketball? your wording just isnt conveying what you're trying to say to me. this is another miss.
Not even sure how you a contender.. guess P just needed a placement
hit u w.multiple bars, wires, and screw's.. what ya face get replaced wit
delivery could have been waaay better, but i really liked your concept and punch. this is a decent hit.
Truly sorry for the devastation in ya city. To much for ya pride to manage
n blunt force lea' u wrecked like that train, n u wont survive the damage
this is barely a soft jab. im being generous, honestly. people have done this topic a lot recently and you have one of the worst takes on it i've seen so far.
Klass, BG, and now me, damn cuz, you been catching L's thru the week
u cant compete.. draggin yo ass in this battle.. s'what u call a loser streak!
lmao, this is pretty funny. this is a solid hit
MF: 2 misses, 2 soft jabs, 1 solid jab, 1 decent hit, 1 solid hit
Authentic: 3 misses, 2 soft jabs, 1 decent hit, 1 solid hit
Vote: MF
changing my vote.
And New Jersey aint been relevant since they retired Jason Kidd, the vet
left a Legend! But he aint the only one that need to retire from the net
it's "Nets" not "net" so it kind of ruins the exact wordplay, but there's already a 'basketball net' and 'internet' theme at work so this works. this is a decent hit
MF: 2 misses, 2 soft jabs, 1 solid jab, 1 decent hit, 1 solid hit
Authentic: 2 misses, 2 soft jabs, 2 decent hits, 1 solid hit
Vote: Authentic
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...miss me with the scorn, after this your family will be busy with the mourn
This battles hopeless for you, you couldn't win a round playing frisbee in a storm...
Win/wind....nah....this doesn't connect on so many levels....
...Heave you off the ledge or I could just rope ya, hope he shows or maybe he's a choker
You gon climb a mountain just to get ya back broke, since you wanna be batman and a joker...
ok, where u attempted to make a complicated punch but its not fluid... Heave ledge or/ heath ledger doesn't sound the same... the fact that he was in the Brokeback and played batman...ok... but theres no actual punch....
...I won't stop digging till you're burried, I'm Harambe to this chimp it's more scary
Cuz when Darwin sees a real animal in the jungle he'll bitch up like the wild Thornberrys...
this was a little more on point... another harambe line though... don't use tired topics, unless u put a new spin on it
...you want gun bars? We can do gun bars, you must have a death wish bro
We'll see how many rounds you can take when i give you every clip at once like a Netflix show...
followed by a clip/netflix line... these are just overplayed and overused lines trying to be rehashed... again, this bar had no connection to your opponent... it could be used against anyone
...bring this phony to me, I'm seriously offended, in this battle my skills are augmented
this fake shit certainly I'll end it cuz a name change couldn't make you anymore Authentic...
this misses because u are tryin to rhyme his name and actually don't use any cleverness or imagination to make a punch...comes as just filler...and don't relate to each other at all.... augmented/offended/i'll end it... how do those fluidly connect to a punch?
...better run as fast as you can, I'm sending arrows at your neck, this battle ya getting smashed
You'll die a loser & never be a legend tomorrow, cuz you couldn't see W even if you were the flash...
CW/ see W?.... whats the flash gotta do with it?...u coulda used any show on that network... so this bar aint got much do to with anything
...losing to your co-leader how stupid do you feel, yes I'm shooting him to kill
Charles Darwin didn't suit you anyway I see no evolution in ya skills!...
good attempt... but this could've been worded better with more effort
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Middle... just give up battling in FL fam, cuz nobody care for ya joints
cut ya fingers off... leaving only the Middle one.. now u gettin my point
no
Klass worked u out... he made you feel de-tention, n got hit w.pressure
so I use my knuckles to massage on ya face.. like doing a good gesture
solid hit... not the most clever punch but it hits with its direction in simplicity
Ya bitch said, facing me was a titanic mistake, n she knew u'd be dead
So i wrecked the clit w.my middle finger n left the pussy Jose Fernandez
NOOOO... I know to expect a bunch of Jose Fernandez lines, but if you are gonna use it, make it clever...
And New Jersey aint been relevant since they retired Jason Kidd, the vet
left a Legend! But he aint the only one that need to retire from the net
eh.... a lil light.. he is form jersey so its a decent jab
Not even sure how you a contender.. guess P just needed a placement
hit u w.multiple bars, wires, and screw's.. what ya face get replaced wit
nothing here
Truly sorry for the devastation in ya city. To much for ya pride to manage
n blunt force lea' u wrecked like that train, n u wont survive the damage
nothing again... nothing clever... reminds of the Fernandez line... just speakin on a topic that occurred without referencing it to your opponent or making it relevant to the battle
Klass, BG, and now me, damn cuz, you been catching L's thru the week
u cant compete.. draggin yo ass in this battle.. s'what u call a loser streak!
solid closer... again... not overly complicated but gets the job done
V- authentic
not an overly complicated battle... u two are probably pretty evenly matched in skills... I think fingerz tried too hard to incorporate multis that just didn't fit... don't make a rhyme just to make a rhyme....
MF
...miss me with the scorn, after this your family will be busy with the mourn
This battles hopeless for you, you couldn't win a round playing frisbee in a storm...
Felt the finisher was soft as far as,impact went it wasnt relevant with setup either liked it but overall just no sting factor
...Heave you off the ledge or I could just rope ya, hope he shows or maybe he's a choker
You gon climb a mountain just to get ya back broke, since you wanna be batman and a joker...
Oh shit i took a bit but this was dope like the wordplay in the setup heath ledger ledge or then the batman reference on the finish tied in great
...I won't stop digging till you're burried, I'm Harambe to this chimp it's more scary
Cuz when Darwin sees a real animal in the jungle he'll bitch up like the wild Thornberrys...
Lol
...you want gun bars? We can do gun bars, you must have a death wish bro
We'll see how many rounds you can take when i give you every clip at once like a Netflix show...
Played
...bring this phony to me, I'm seriously offended, in this battle my skills are augmented
this fake shit certainly I'll end it cuz a name change couldn't make you anymore Authentic...
Played nameplay
...better run as fast as you can, I'm sending arrows at your neck, this battle ya getting smashed
You'll die a loser & never be a legend tomorrow, cuz you couldn't see W even if you were the flash...
Ok reference
...losing to your co-leader how stupid do you feel, yes I'm shooting him to kill
Charles Darwin didn't suit you anyway I see no evolution in ya skills!...
Nah too basic
Authentic
Middle... just give up battling in FL fam, cuz nobody care for ya joints
cut ya fingers off... leaving only the Middle one.. now u gettin my point
Dope flip direct
Klass worked u out... he made you feel de-tention, n got hit w.pressure
so I use my knuckles to massage on ya face.. like doing a good gesture
Dope similie again direct
Ya bitch said, facing me was a titanic mistake, n she knew u'd be dead
So i wrecked the clit w.my middle finger n left the pussy Jose Fernandez
Nah display of wording sloppy
And New Jersey aint been relevant since they retired Jason Kidd, the vet
left a Legend! But he aint the only one that need to retire from the net
Sounded kinda statementish
Not even sure how you a contender.. guess P just needed a placement
hit u w.multiple bars, wires, and screw's.. what ya face get replaced wit
Dope direct hit nice flip
Truly sorry for the devastation in ya city. To much for ya pride to manage
n blunt force lea' u wrecked like that train, n u wont survive the damage
Didnt like the wording
Klass, BG, and now me, damn cuz, you been catching L's thru the week
u cant compete.. draggin yo ass in this battle.. s'what u call a loser streak!
Nah
Mf that heath ledger bar was fire and closer was cool other then that thought Authentic was a bit more consistent he had more impact regarding direct punches.
V/Authentic
Middle Finger - Dude… stop posting your shit this way… it’s annoying.
...miss me with the scorn, after this your family will be busy with the mourn
This battles hopeless for you, you couldn't win a round playing frisbee in a storm...
Decent opener.
...Heave you off the ledge or I could just rope ya, hope he shows or maybe he's a choker
You gon climb a mountain just to get ya back broke, since you wanna be batman and a joker...
Not feeling.
...I won't stop digging till you're burried, I'm Harambe to this chimp it's more scary
Cuz when Darwin sees a real animal in the jungle he'll bitch up like the wild Thornberrys...
wtf… No.
...you want gun bars? We can do gun bars, you must have a death wish bro
We'll see how many rounds you can take when i give you every clip at once like a Netflix show...
Played, not feeling.
...bring this phony to me, I'm seriously offended, in this battle my skills are augmented
this fake shit certainly I'll end it cuz a name change couldn't make you anymore Authentic...
Decent personal.
...better run as fast as you can, I'm sending arrows at your neck, this battle ya getting smashed
You'll die a loser & never be a legend tomorrow, cuz you couldn't see W even if you were the flash...
I don’t want TV… but I imagine the flash is on the CW… basic, okay.
...losing to your co-leader how stupid do you feel, yes I'm shooting him to kill
Charles Darwin didn't suit you anyway I see no evolution in ya skills!...
okay closer.
Authentic:
Middle... just give up battling in FL fam, cuz nobody care for ya joints
cut ya fingers off... leaving only the Middle one.. now u gettin my point
Decent.
Klass worked u out... he made you feel de-tention, n got hit w.pressure
so I use my knuckles to massage on ya face.. like doing a good gesture
Solid punch.. the set up was clever… the tension etc and fit w the punch.
Ya bitch said, facing me was a titanic mistake, n she knew u'd be dead
So i wrecked the clit w.my middle finger n left the pussy Jose Fernandez
Too soon, that one hit home man.
And New Jersey aint been relevant since they retired Jason Kidd, the vet
left a Legend! But he aint the only one that need to retire from the net
Eh, okay.
Not even sure how you a contender.. guess P just needed a placement
hit u w.multiple bars, wires, and screw's.. what ya face get replaced wit
Not bad.
Truly sorry for the devastation in ya city. To much for ya pride to manage
n blunt force lea' u wrecked like that train, n u wont survive the damage
little forced for me.
Klass, BG, and now me, damn cuz, you been catching L's thru the week
u cant compete.. draggin yo ass in this battle.. s'what u call a loser streak!
Eh, decent.
This battle was alright… Middle finger… you need to switch how you post your stuff
it makes for an awkward read. Besides that, your opener was decent, the authentic line
was basic but okay, and the CW was alright, I guess… Authentic was just better…
the opener was decent, the tension bar was witty and probably the LOTB..
v/Authentic.
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