Week 5 Round 1: boston(1-3) vs. Unfukwitable(1-1)[open for votes]

[OG Maestro]

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Okay. I am pretty partial to Un. He's a fellow Arch member and, because of his creative schemes & concepts, the dude's on my list of best/favorite text battlers of all time. He went 8-2 in LLL while boston's best credibility is beating me in FL, and making an appearance in the FL Contenders. TBH, I DIDN'T TRY at allll; I thought he was gonna post some garbage verse...but he caught me on a fair one nonetheless. Props to him for that. And honestly, I don't think his credentials truly speak on his writing ability.
But, long story short, I honestly just can't see boston winning this one. Now, Un did technically NS last round so he might forget to post again but I think he's gonna be on alert for this battle. If boston shows up with his best, this will be yet another contender for battle of the week.

@boston
@Unfukwitable

[Unfukwitable]

[DEAD/]

[JEM.]

sure.

[Unfukwitable]

U crossin a thin line....



& ya wack flow, sub-par bars & typical lines push it further;
just describing how Horrible Bosses... got me conspiring murder.

[JEM.]

v/lay's version better... haha, anyways...

Your girl ovary acting, because you’re seeing red when you saw us,
Don’t be so anal or start trouble over an ass not worth the ruckus.

[Greedy]

boston...nice sway...

ive done horrible bosses on joe boston, still seen a few other times as well.
boston ovary acting is equally played if not more so.
with that, unfk had the way better bar. from wording, to cocept to execution.

vote Un Rivera

[OG Maestro]

Vote: Un for a more clean punchline developed. boston's seemed like it needed better structuring around the concept

[Chemist]

boston came with a nice wp
but i kinda seen it before and
thought it lkinda light
un was nice and execution was cool
mgvt un

[Barcotic]

both very played out

execution goes to unfuk by far tho
v/unfuk

don't use ur whole concept in the setup, then follow up w/ nothing @boston

[.SiQ.]

I have seen a horrible bosses not too long ago
Boston's line i personally havent seen but his wordin, structure, & execution fell flat.. It also had nothin to do wit his opponent. Un did atleast try to diss his opponent but just wit an old bar...

This was a tough call but i got Un wit the slight edge
V/ Un

[Joe Boston]

Didnt like bostons finisher if an ass causes ruckus she must have a really mean fart why fight over that. Un very played nameplay but overall better execution.

V/Un Pasturized

[slecht]

Boston had an outdated concept. It was ok but the flip didn't make it for me...un was allright, a little cleaner. Got him here

[GrimmZReaper]

ovary ACTING.... wow... u lose just for using that.... and a "your girl" bar.... this is sooooooooo overused here.... it really just demonstrates lack of creativity

V-Un

[R!canTheoryz]

Un got this one here both were played tho but he had better set up and punch

[Spree]

Noq wins