Eessessoh vs @Boyznblack
16 lines, Due Wednesday
I'll have links up before EOD....don't take my points, Know P..haha
good luck n all that.
Eessessoh
BoyzNBlack
Eessessoh vs @Boyznblack
16 lines, Due Wednesday
I'll have links up before EOD....don't take my points, Know P..haha
good luck n all that.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...OPEN-FOR-VOTES
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check...yaself...
since u didn't pick a time, i'll assume its due by end of day on Wednesday...
alright....
He got his K cup? Ill get it poppin like a Keurig Machine
give em a bruise straight in the mug n cause a stir for the cream
But..wait...he's got no bread cuz he's for certain a fiend
and since he's on an addict's budget, all his purchases?..Lean
But he'll mention product on deck and how his earnings supreme
tryna float that sketchy business like a merchant marine
A fat person in jeans with his guns...burstin, it seems
y'all find that clown act intense...cuz it's a circus routine
He won't gain or turn the tide as I grow irked with his schemes
and disdain sinks in deeper than detergent can clean,
he'll stay forcin da rock-hi-jabs more than turkish extremists
so Ill keep this bitch under wraps like a persian regime
fuck with me
His flair, you'd figure for a gangsta but thats just noise and scary bluffin
he'll just flex and pull our legs, that's why them joints are barely touchin
No way this fruit preserves his life here when my toy's prepared for dumpin
so unless my toast gets jammed? You won't see Boisenberry nothin
u walked right into these punches, its only right this vet gets brazen with a rookOriginally Posted by Eessessoh
so it'll seem fishy he threw that gay line.. till the master bait 'em with a hook
bitch im from NY, where we get dirty in the trenches & them glock nines poppin'
and we all seen the NFL, if ya "jersey fresh" its cause u still on the sideline watching
and we at ya front door, like...what's poppin E?, drag u to the lobby & brawl
these shooters waitin, & they eager to start poppin E, but theres no Molly involved
i'm a real OG, that maestro u beat wasnt built to have a verse and heart for the fight
and you'll get it the same as him, till u start "slowly leaving certain parts of the site"
they'll think that dick is hard till E wrecked and we rid this menace
just to go prehistoric on this pussy, worst than a sig from chemist
the kids aggressive, if any flaws exist it's more a twist of a mortal myth
whether a sword or scythe, big hammers, I mean the type u need Thor to lift
the four or fifth, prove your cores a bitch & we cook that right
and THESE ratchets snap necks & then remove wigs... like a hoodrat fight
who amped u for my title?, these kids want the belt until the lashings is dealt
& u get Tiananmen Squared, when i leave this "Tank on E ", no amount of gassing will help
His flair, you'd figure for a gangsta but thats just noise and scary bluffin
he'll just flex and pull our legs, that's why them joints are barely touchin
^This was the only bar I liked of yours. I tried but just didn't like anything else.
vs.
master bait 'em <-- mad played line.
and we at ya front door, like...what's poppin E?, drag u to the lobby & brawl
these shooters waitin, & they eager to start poppin E, but theres no Molly involved
^this was ok
i'm a real OG, that maestro u beat wasnt built to have a verse and heart for the fight
and you'll get it the same as him, till u start "slowly leaving certain parts of the site"
^this wasn't actually a punch, but I like the current event tied to the site.
who amped u for my title?, these kids want the belt until the lashings is dealt
& u get Tiananmen Squared, when i leave this "Tank on E ", no amount of gassing will help
^ I like the tiananmen/tank on e line but could have been worded way better.
Overall BNB just brought a better verse, although flawed in some areas. Eess I've read better from you since I've been here... guess it was an off day
vote - bnb
Best Rookie of Season 13 - Poet's Society
He got his K cup? Ill get it poppin like a Keurig Machine
give em a bruise straight in the mug n cause a stir for the cream
His flair, you'd figure for a gangsta but thats just noise and scary bluffin
he'll just flex and pull our legs, that's why them joints are barely touchin
These were the only thing hitting tbh. rest of your verse was weak
A fat person in jeans with his guns...burstin, it seems
y'all find that clown act intense...cuz it's a circus routine
This was cool but no real diss so this missed. just letting you know about that
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bitch im from NY, where we get dirty in the trenches & them glock nines poppin'
and we all seen the NFL, if ya "jersey fresh" its cause u still on the sideline watching
i'm a real OG, that maestro u beat wasnt built to have a verse and heart for the fight
and you'll get it the same as him, till u start "slowly leaving certain parts of the site"
they'll think that dick is hard till E wrecked and we rid this menace
just to go prehistoric on this pussy, worst than a sig from chemist
rest was aight...masterbait tho was fucking wack as fuck you shit hole.
Overall... Ees got out classed here. BNB had the better punches and personals. with a few played shits. Ees had a few ok bars but BNB was more consistant
V/B
He got his K cup? Ill get it poppin like a Keurig Machine
give em a bruise straight in the mug n cause a stir for the cream
this didn't make sense
But..wait...he's got no bread cuz he's for certain a fiend
and since he's on an addict's budget, all his purchases?..Lean
naw this was pretty weak.
But he'll mention product on deck and how his earnings supreme
tryna float that sketchy business like a merchant marine
naw the contrast in the punchline didn't match here. weak setup
A fat person in jeans with his guns...burstin, it seems
y'all find that clown act intense...cuz it's a circus routine
concept was aight. would of hit hard if it were a direct personal.
He won't gain or turn the tide as I grow irked with his schemes
and disdain sinks in deeper than detergent can clean,
cool simile but not a hard punch
he'll stay forcin da rock-hi-jabs more than turkish extremists
so Ill keep this bitch under wraps like a persian regime
didn't rhyme and punchline was too indirect again
fuck with me
His flair, you'd figure for a gangsta but thats just noise and scary bluffin
he'll just flex and pull our legs, that's why them joints are barely touchin
aight this was a decent shot
No way this fruit preserves his life here when my toy's prepared for dumpin
so unless my toast gets jammed? You won't see Boisenberry nothin
nice best hit of the verse. I used this concept but this one was sick
vs
u walked right into these punches, its only right this vet gets brazen with a rook
so it'll seem fishy he threw that gay line.. till the master bait 'em with a hook
lmao aight personal
bitch im from NY, where we get dirty in the trenches & them glock nines poppin'
and we all seen the NFL, if ya "jersey fresh" its cause u still on the sideline watching
ehhh creative but indirect shot
and we at ya front door, like...what's poppin E?, drag u to the lobby & brawl
these shooters waitin, & they eager to start poppin E, but theres no Molly involved
aight shot
i'm a real OG, that maestro u beat wasnt built to have a verse and heart for the fight
and you'll get it the same as him, till u start "slowly leaving certain parts of the site"
lmao dope
they'll think that dick is hard till E wrecked and we rid this menace
just to go prehistoric on this pussy, worst than a sig from chemist
ehhh not feelin this one
the kids aggressive, if any flaws exist it's more a twist of a mortal myth
whether a sword or scythe, big hammers, I mean the type u need Thor to lift
naw more of a filler bar
the four or fifth, prove your cores a bitch & we cook that right
and THESE ratchets snap necks & then remove wigs... like a hoodrat fight
seen this before. not feelin the ratchet bar
who amped u for my title?, these kids want the belt until the lashings is dealt
& u get Tiananmen Squared, when i leave this "Tank on E ", no amount of gassing will help
naw this was a stretch
overall I felt this was onesided and BNB just had the better overall punches, schemes, concepts, personals. Eess had a good flow and closer was dope to me but the rest was just too generic and indirect against his opponent. gotta come more creative and direct than that.
v. boyz
alright....
He got his K cup? Ill get it poppin like a Keurig Machine
give em a bruise straight in the mug n cause a stir for the cream
ehh didnt like this
But..wait...he's got no bread cuz he's for certain a fiend
and since he's on an addict's budget, all his purchases?..Lean
ehh again didnt like this
But he'll mention product on deck and how his earnings supreme
tryna float that sketchy business like a merchant marine
ehh again not feeling it
A fat person in jeans with his guns...burstin, it seems
y'all find that clown act intense...cuz it's a circus routine
okay at best
He won't gain or turn the tide as I grow irked with his schemes
and disdain sinks in deeper than detergent can clean,
nah homie
he'll stay forcin da rock-hi-jabs more than turkish extremists
so Ill keep this bitch under wraps like a persian regime
dont get it
His flair, you'd figure for a gangsta but thats just noise and scary bluffin
he'll just flex and pull our legs, that's why them joints are barely touchin
uhh no not really
No way this fruit preserves his life here when my toy's prepared for dumpin
so unless my toast gets jammed? You won't see Boisenberry nothin
that was alright at best...
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u walked right into these punches, its only right this vet gets brazen with a rook
so it'll seem fishy he threw that gay line.. till the master bait 'em with a hook
that was better
bitch im from NY, where we get dirty in the trenches & them glock nines poppin'
and we all seen the NFL, if ya "jersey fresh" its cause u still on the sideline watching
ehh ok
and we at ya front door, like...what's poppin E?, drag u to the lobby & brawl
these shooters waitin, & they eager to start poppin E, but theres no Molly involved
haha i liked that
i'm a real OG, that maestro u beat wasnt built to have a verse and heart for the fight
and you'll get it the same as him, till u start "slowly leaving certain parts of the site"
okay i guess i see the reference just wasnt feeling it really
they'll think that dick is hard till E wrecked and we rid this menace
just to go prehistoric on this pussy, worst than a sig from chemist
lol sortve i guess
the kids aggressive, if any flaws exist it's more a twist of a mortal myth
whether a sword or scythe, big hammers, I mean the type u need Thor to lift
that was whack sorry dont like the thor fucking reference
the four or fifth, prove your cores a bitch & we cook that right
and THESE ratchets snap necks & then remove wigs... like a hoodrat fight
ehh couldve been worded better
who amped u for my title?, these kids want the belt until the lashings is dealt
& u get Tiananmen Squared, when i leave this "Tank on E ", no amount of gassing will help
that was the best bar of the battle it thought...
okay so overall this wasnt the most exciting battle but i think im going to give it to boyznblack for being a bit more creative with his punches just my opinion anyways good luck to both of you you both have potential to do well in Frontlines so good luck to both of you..... but for now......
vote: Boyznblack
a labyrinth of power.....
@Boyznblack wins by KO
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