10 lines, You have till tomorrow or else..
Literal Pete
OG Maestro
10 lines, You have till tomorrow or else..
lmao. iight.
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AYO
My nigga please, against me you will never win,
And when i say "nigga please", I'm not being a gentleman
I cook up bitches like cold hearted chefs in chinese kitchens,
Providing dope lines without a prescription, i"ll visiously beat you to a fragil condition
After healing with medical assistance, i envision you'll be more into religon
You just a step on a ladder, if you say your nicer than me,
You fucking better be talking about manners
I will assualt you with an iron bar in hand, if you dare to supply subpar bars that are not enhanced
So why don't you just do me a favor and die, jump off a building and reach for the sky....
Nice to meet you Mr. One Punch Man,
But to be honest?
I could beat you with one punch, man,
Could fuckin' eat you for lunch, man.
Like ya avi you prolly bald. but if not? I'll grab a knife if you don't behave ya best
& use the handle to beat you 'within an inch of your life'; THAT'S a Close Shave with death
I really roll with ammunition, you can't catch me riding with a extended clip to keep
But YOU'D be tryin to portray someone else identity if we catch you with a Pistol, Pete
I'm tired, this battle ain't that deep.
Fuck it. I'm goin to sleep.
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both losing 50% rank points for not having links
OG I can see your verse.
Dont know man dont want ruin this battle er anything but u both had noce ideas ill write some feed just to keep it even....old school haha....
My nigga please, against me you will never win,
And when i say "nigga please", I'm not being a gentleman
Haha that was funny kind of liked thr gentleman part i guess
I cook up bitches like cold hearted chefs in chinese kitchens,
Providing dope lines without a prescription, i"ll visiously beat you to a fragil condition
Right dome ideas still it wasnt bad
After healing with medical assistance, i envision you'll be more into religon
You just a step on a ladder, if you say your nicer than me,
You fucking better be talking about manners
Okay this bit was a bit confusing the rhymes were kind of outhere
I will assualt you with an iron bar in hand, if you dare to supply subpar bars that are not enhanced
So why don't you just do me a favor and die, jump off a building and reach for the sky....
Okay not that complex kind of a sappy end really...
Vs.
Nice to meet you Mr. One Punch Man,
But to be honest?
I could beat you with one punch, man,
Could fuckin' eat you for lunch, man.
Okay didnt really like this part tbh
Like ya avi you prolly bald. but if not? I'll grab a knife if you don't behave ya best
& use the handle to beat you 'within an inch of your life'; THAT'S a Close Shave with death
This bar was nice but because you didnt feel effortless to me it was almost like you put too much into it if u get me
I really roll with ammunition, you can't catch me riding with a extended clip to keep
But YOU'D be tryin to portray someone else identity if we catch you with a Pistol, Pete
Right this was good nameplay again obviously well putforth good for you
I'm tired, this battle ain't that deep.
Fuck it. I'm goin to sleep
Eh kind of felt sappy. Like the concept of u just going to sleep why the fuck is that a good bar? Eh.
Okay anyways after that breakdown on there this battle was still very close to me literal pete came with ten lines and five average bars therefore because ohgee came with two dope bars and six lines of filler hmmm i tried to discuss it with the dog but i had to sitback for a second...so 10-5 and 2-6 so 15 and 8 is 23 hmm okay so based on that im going to go with pistole pete hopefully that vote is explained enough i dont know why hose numbers really matter but its how i counted em.. i mean ohgee did have two nice bars that he really put a lotta work into it maybe less is more in this case.... yeah this was a really close battle from the beginning im still finding new things about this battle... i needed to check if anyone had posted links or who had checked in...so lets see.. i like how this was made yesterday idk ohgee might have just defended himself this time pistol dont know though it was a difficult one to choose fuck it im going to go with pistol pete goodluck bro getting the rest of them votes tho bro ohgee may have defended himself to well... its up to the world lol god knows anyways how the votes are going to end up and goodluck to yourselvea both on the right path of life...
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Vote: literal pete
a labyrinth of power.....
This needs a few votes closing this soon
My nigga please, against me you will never win,
And when i say "nigga please", I'm not being a gentleman
weak hit played punch
I cook up bitches like cold hearted chefs in chinese kitchens,
Providing dope lines without a prescription, i"ll visiously beat you to a fragil condition
After healing with medical assistance, i envision you'll be more into religon
good multi's and flow but no creative punchline and pretty lonnnngggg
You just a step on a ladder, if you say your nicer than me,
You fucking better be talking about manners
lmao funny but weak concept.
I will assualt you with an iron bar in hand, if you dare to supply subpar bars that are not enhanced
So why don't you just do me a favor and die, jump off a building and reach for the sky....
uhhh no. got think outside the box.
vs
Nice to meet you Mr. One Punch Man,
But to be honest?
I could beat you with one punch, man,
Could fuckin' eat you for lunch, man.
Like ya avi you prolly bald. but if not? I'll grab a knife if you don't behave ya best
& use the handle to beat you 'within an inch of your life'; THAT'S a Close Shave with death
nice
I really roll with ammunition, you can't catch me riding with a extended clip to keep
But YOU'D be tryin to portray someone else identity if we catch you with a Pistol, Pete
ehh aight name flip
I'm tired, this battle ain't that deep.
Fuck it. I'm goin to sleep.
smh
overall wack battle. thought OG would show us something after being MIA for a century but he took the ass route and dumbed it down several levels. very disappointing read. LP needs to read a few more good battles to get the concept of think outside the box with creative punches. nothing worth quoting in his verse this time.
v. OG
This is terrible. Guys come vote on my battle talking shit and this is some of the most basic stuff i've seen on any site period
OG - i've seen you post shit 100x better than this!
Literal Pete - Your scheme and "punches" were basically what i expect someone who is just starting doing this shit would drop. There's not a single line here that I can honestly say hit with anything and stood out at all.
Like ya avi you prolly bald. but if not? I'll grab a knife if you don't behave ya best
& use the handle to beat you 'within an inch of your life'; THAT'S a Close Shave with death
^^^^^^
Best Bar in the battle far and away
Vote - OG
v - og
more original, hate that he kinda half assed his verse at the end(still won imo). pete was decent but a couple of his lines just seem played.
good battle
Literal Pete:
My nigga please, against me you will never win,
And when i say "nigga please", I'm not being a gentleman
not harsh
I cook up bitches like cold hearted chefs in chinese kitchens,
Providing dope lines without a prescription, i"ll visiously beat you to a fragil condition
after healing with medical assistance, i envision you'll be more into religon
decent, but choppy with a long ass bar. ehh..
You just a step on a ladder, if you say your nicer than me,
You fucking better be talking about manners
weak
I will assualt you with an iron bar in hand, if you dare to supply subpar bars that are not enhanced
So why don't you just do me a favor and die, jump off a building and reach for the sky....
nah, weak closer
vs.
Nice to meet you Mr. One Punch Man,
But to be honest?
I could beat you with one punch, man,
Could fuckin' eat you for lunch, man.
Like ya avi you prolly bald. but if not? I'll grab a knife if you don't behave ya best
& use the handle to beat you 'within an inch of your life'; THAT'S a Close Shave with death
Best bar in the battle, but this wasnt much
I really roll with ammunition, you can't catch me riding with a extended clip to keep
But YOU'D be tryin to portray someone else identity if we catch you with a Pistol, Pete
Pistols and Pete is pretty played.. i seen some lines like that back in 2011.. but it was a somewhat sub-par punch..
I'm tired, this battle ain't that deep.
Fuck it. I'm goin to sleep.
This battle shouldn't have even been able 2 vote for honestly. Literally Pete or whatever the cat's name is dropped 9 lines.. I thought the minimum in FL is 10 lines.. Anyways, OG had a bar that actually hit. V- OG
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OG wins
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