late bloomer
Enclave
ten lines house rules
post two links
due friday night at the latest
please check in soon so i know you are serious and i can start to write my thread thanks
consider this my check btw.... i will post two links once i have seen you either post or checkin.... must have links by sunday night...... so battle will be open for the monday coming for votes..... cool good luck bro and ill check back this thread to make sure you agree to all these rules......
@Enclave
@late bloomer
Best Rookie of Season 13 - Poet's Society
right wow good for you getting ya links up so early..... i will have mine as soon as i can get a chance....good luck anyhow bro...
a labyrinth of power.....
Kid, ya raw but I got the grease to leave burnt n dried; done, son..
Fry this dude up and watch L bloom faster than deep fried onions.
Artwork of the movies; Men in Black style yo, call me K I'm before L
Cuz I'll bruise this kid so bad people'll say Oh, his color's pastel
Time for giving, for all - so I'll ring this bell until the need gets settled
N I'll body L to sacrifice him like when Zeke jumped in the kettle
I don't know why ya show - we battle ya just for the quick win
Cuz the battle is over after ya opponets have better check in's
Speakin' of football, I'm late with that sauce; but thats the whole reason
I'll roast ya with the nicest spices n shit ya out - now that's bowl season
Best Rookie of Season 13 - Poet's Society
Right so i dont know how to react to that verse
but ill still leave Enclave dead like i left him in a hearse
yo dog you aint got rhymes to compete with me see
because ill have you like some indians living inside a teepee
and i guess that wasnt the best diss i could have dropped
but you so weak only time you on the block is to catch the bus
man i wrote this up in ten minutes it dont take long to body you
but just like a wrench brother i guess you going to end up screwed
for real i couldnt even understand one of your bars
but just like sunlight this cat dying cause nothing survives in the dark
quick ten. good luck anyhow...
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a labyrinth of power.....
late bloomer -50% in ranks for not having both links
uhhh there were no battles that i could have voted on in the FL when i posted that verse...... i thought i should wait until there was something to vote on....... can i get a chance to put another link on there i dont think i deserve to lose 50% in ranks when i had voted on everything in the frontlines if you get me...... there were no open battles at the time.....
a labyrinth of power.....
Enclave:
Kid, ya raw but I got the grease to leave burnt n dried; done, son..
Fry this dude up and watch L bloom faster than deep fried onions.
^^^^
Pretty good word play, nice opener
Artwork of the movies; Men in Black style yo, call me K I'm before L
Cuz I'll bruise this kid so bad people'll say Oh, his color's pastel
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Not bad, I don't know if you meant pastey but pastel rhymed so you used that
Time for giving, for all - so I'll ring this bell until the need gets settled
N I'll body L to sacrifice him like when Zeke jumped in the kettle
^^^^
Good word play and reference to something recent
I don't know why ya show - we battle ya just for the quick win
Cuz the battle is over after ya opponets have better check in's
^^^^
HAHAHA (sorry late bloomer, low but effective blow!)
Speakin' of football, I'm late with that sauce; but thats the whole reason
I'll roast ya with the nicest spices n shit ya out - now that's bowl season
^^^^
Another football reference, heard it before but not bad
Late Bloomer:
Right so i dont know how to react to that verse
but ill still leave Enclave dead like i left him in a hearse
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The verse/hearse lines are so overused man, like beating a dead horse
yo dog you aint got rhymes to compete with me see
because ill have you like some indians living inside a teepee
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Why is it bad that Indians live in a teepee? How is this a punch? it just rhymes, Meh
and i guess that wasnt the best diss i could have dropped
but you so weak only time you on the block is to catch the bus
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You literally admit here that your last line was weak. Don't do that. Ever. Even if you spit trash have confidence
man i wrote this up in ten minutes it dont take long to body you
but just like a wrench brother i guess you going to end up screwed
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Wrenches don't screw my friend, but i see where you were going.
for real i couldnt even understand one of your bars
but just like sunlight this cat dying cause nothing survives in the dark
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Meh, this is a weak finisher. Imagine if this was mortal combat and someone said finish him! You basically just asked if he was okay
Vote: Enclave and it's not particularly close
Nothing
Against
Nothing
Late still dropping dated simplistic lines and enclave was dropping concepts tjat either didn't hit at all. Or barely rimed
Vote: enclave for I guess a better understanding of battle rap
Rip
Terrible battle, Enclave wins just off how bad Bloomers bars are... and enclaves were trash so that really speaks to how bad yours were bloomer...ive seen your kind before, genuinely wanna battle and do the text thing, but u need to grow as a writer...expand and get out ya comfort zone...think outside the box ..write a bar, then re read it and think of how to make it better...make the set up to the punch a zinger...
here are your rhymes
verse/hearse
see/teepee
dropped/bus (doesn't rhyme btw)
you/screwed
bars/dark
^^all that is Dr. seuss level of rhyming....
im surprised you beat me here......
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anyways heres my second link just so i dont lose 50% of points....now that the battles over it doesnt really matter but im just doing this because there was finally a battle for me to vote on because id already voted on all the battles that were in the frontlines battle forums if you get me... anyways heres my second link....
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...open-for-votes
a labyrinth of power.....
@KnowP @Kill Spree
What's up with this?
Best Rookie of Season 13 - Poet's Society
upping for votes
No more free posting
3-0 enclave uppin
Kid, ya raw but I got the grease to leave burnt n dried; done, son..
Fry this dude up and watch L bloom faster than deep fried onions.
Cool name play...wasnt a fan of your set up tho wording wise.
Artwork of the movies; Men in Black style yo, call me K I'm before L
Cuz I'll bruise this kid so bad people'll say Oh, his color's pastel
This was light tbh. not a fan at all actually. i got its the family of colors it just wasnt aggressive at all
Time for giving, for all - so I'll ring this bell until the need gets settled
N I'll body L to sacrifice him like when Zeke jumped in the kettle
Nah...this was too basic tbh
I don't know why ya show - we battle ya just for the quick win
Cuz the battle is over after ya opponets have better check in's
nah. lol personal is there but just basic execution
Speakin' of football, I'm late with that sauce; but thats the whole reason
I'll roast ya with the nicest spices n shit ya out - now that's bowl season
nah...played concept poorly executed to
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Right so i dont know how to react to that verse
but ill still leave Enclave dead like i left him in a hearse
miss...basic concept had no connection
yo dog you aint got rhymes to compete with me see
because ill have you like some indians living inside a teepee
wtf...NO. hard miss played concept
and i guess that wasnt the best diss i could have dropped
but you so weak only time you on the block is to catch the bus
So you even admit your last bar was weak...and then post another basic punch
man i wrote this up in ten minutes it dont take long to body you
but just like a wrench brother i guess you going to end up screwed
NO
for real i couldnt even understand one of your bars
but just like sunlight this cat dying cause nothing survives in the dark
NO
Overall - battle was weak...Enclave had the least played concepts while late had poorly executed 90's concepts and he even dissed himself mid verse.
V/Enclave
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Enclave wins by KO
Closing this battle to get it out of the FL
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