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    Life experiences freestyle

    sneakin in peeking for my football in the seat, complete my task at a
    bad retreat, now i'm in detention seated in a defeat, disallow my dreams
    of being an athlete, meet me at my feet screaming fuck teams, leaning
    towards making records, getting awards, getting interviewed by nardwuar,
    being in wars involving that tall cars, with rockets for small twats, cops
    stopping for pots job, gods got me on the right cross, across i toss
    my sauce over the her jawn, yawn and fall sleep on my bed as i taunt
    demons in my head, bed filled with bugs spread like red bread, now i go
    upest to my test, i failed it, kilt by the literature stint, rest my head while i'm
    stressed, i'm a mystery like shakesphere's death, shape spheres with my
    hands as i seduce the vamp, then in the plan kill him with the solid
    serpent, dust out the old worshipped cd, ain't no thing like it, outkast
    turned to soldier, sucked into the order, got older faster and lost his
    composure, after playing saying i'm going over,she like a trojan,
    infectious if you don't slip it choked,cryptolocked after the coitus,
    pointless if i dont join her, my future is in pieces messages saying
    i need peace is good to her, i felt better, enter my life pressure,
    not much but i should have kept her, now i'm even fresher you should
    go for better, i'm a treasure, my soul elder, medivial thinking getting
    into your smart sector, i'm a storyteller, more niggas picking on me they aint
    got shit on me, they can get hit by the whip split into two sections of a pig,
    sit on on a fucking dick, i'm poetic you just a ball player burglar of all greater
    Lakers style, meanwhile i'm tired of all the money i got you'll be
    flipping burgers, birthing murders and cursing girls close to your mother, even
    cussing to your proper mother, acting like the younger culture

    give me your honest opinion please and i wrote this over earl sweatshirts couch

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    Re: Life experiences freestyle

    Some of the rhymes were good. I don't feel any smarter for reading this. I hope you keep writing and post more.

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