Pic battle: Kill Spree Vs Late bloomer[Spree wins by KO]

[Spree]

5 bars
Due Sunday by midnight EST
@late bloomer I'll edit the pics in here shortly. I made the due date to Sunday since I set it so late


This is my check


https://s28.postimg.org/ldbd4sf5p/20161214_164038.jpg

Vs

https://scontent.fbed1-2.fna.fbcdn.n...d7&oe=58B55928

[Late Bloom]

no problem i got you this weekend fa sure..... i wont drop til you put up the pics......but idefinitely got you by sunday...

[Spree]

no problem i got you this weekend fa sure..... i wont drop til you put up the pics......but idefinitely got you by sunday...

Word let's get our voting links in to

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...PEN-FOR-VOTES)

[Late Bloom]

Right heres one a my links:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...open-for-votes

[Late Bloom]

Heres the other... going start writing tomorrow hopefully 8 havent lost you im still down for this....

- - - Updated - - -

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...PEN-FOR-VOTES)

[Late Bloom]

https://scontent.fbed1-2.fna.fbcdn.n...d7&oe=58B55928


and heres my verse.....

yo you trying to set up a pic battle but didnt post any links yet
i got lines you and your crew like to sweat im twisted with lines like some dreads
yo this cat aint no thug you were going to arrive early since im always dropping stealth
im unleashing my hell and the concepts behind ya pic so i had to pack a wrench
im like swish cause im nothing but net you aint like me and aint flipping no decks
you getting blessed like a coffin i had to hammer in a couple screws
even when im at my best im still weeks and weeks beyond all yall hoes
id be like if this aint victory then why am i right up under ya nose
you see killing spree even if im disconnected from ya in this battle
i still gotta keep a straight stack you be hidden in the dark so i lit up some candles

[Spree]

https://s28.postimg.org/ldbd4sf5p/20161214_164038.jpg

Late Bloomer has the best of intentions, and don't think he has any bias. Which would be amazing if he wasn't like 11 years old

See...
U aint sharp W/rap, Pull the blade out & scare the queer out'cha
U wont make a point W/music but I'll stick a knife in the only ear U can hear out of
Swallow Ur pride thinking You tough!...S'why I'm punch'n ya head
We'll see little bitch talk shit, than realize Lenox egos stuck in his neck!
I wear gold kid, U W/a buck in this game? means I shoot @ a poor nerd
Only reason U Talk money S'Cos U got a gap between ya teeth that'll fit 4 Quarters
& the face on that nose'll get smack quick
Funny ppl think U 11 but look like u been on a 30 yr Crack binge
skinny fuck, ya whole swag style is so weak
Ya shirts about 10x to big...thats a hand me down from knowP

[KnowP]

kill -50% ranks for not having both links

[KnowP]

I wear gold kid, U W/a buck in this game? means I shoot @ a poor nerd
Only reason U Talk money S'Cos U got a gap between ya teeth that'll fit 4 Quarters
& the face on that nose'll get smack quick
Funny ppl think U 11 but look like u been on a 30 yr Crack binge
skinny fuck, ya whole swag style is so weak
Ya shirts about 10x to big...thats a hand me down from knowP



vs



nothin worth quoting.... literally



kill started off with a few misses and wording issues. didn't feel the first two joints. the closer was straight but a nigga in a 3x soo getcha facts up chump! Crack binge was LOTB roflz and 4 Quarters was light weight. I would of spinned that with a diff concept but it was aight. LB.... u got work to do man. pic battles are the easiest and u missed in every bar. even the decks bar didn't have a matching line to go with it. under the nose had potential yet it died slow. the rest failed and didn't land at all imo.


v. kill spree

[GrimmZReaper]

U aint sharp W/rap, Pull the blade out & scare the queer out'cha
U wont make a point W/music but I'll stick a knife in the only ear U can hear out of
& the face on that nose'll get smack quick
Funny ppl think U 11 but look like u been on a 30 yr Crack binge
skinny fuck, ya whole swag style is so weak
Ya shirts about 10x to big...thats a hand me down from knowP

vs

basically nothing


u have alottttttt of room for improvement bloomer... u should really adhere and incorporate some of the critique from ya battles to improve. Your bars are simple, some don't even make sense, and a majority are just on & on jargon that don't connect

v-spree...your simple bars were enough

[Lenox]

Nothing

Against

1 ear, Lenox ego, 30 year crack binge, know p lol

Vote: kill

Toe tag season. Late..u need to be more creative those simplistic lines are incredibly laughable

[Late Bloom]

yeah good battle man hopefully we get some votes

[Spree]

3-0 Kill uppin for votes

[A. Diction]

This is a joke right? 90% of that dudes verse didn't even rhyme, much less make sense. He barely referenced the pic and was basically just talking jibberish lmaooo

KS first 2 lines were aite, better wording woulda made em good. 30 yr Crack binge was kinda funny



V. Ks

[Joe Boston]

Late Bloomer: I dont wanna be harsh but take some constuctive criticism here. Not one punch was directed at the pic my dude hence pic battle. The rules of a pic battle is to come up with as many creative bars to diss the actual picture. U can go by appearance. Or whoever is in pic. Surroundings etc.

Kill Spree


See...
U aint sharp W/rap, Pull the blade out & scare the queer out'cha
U wont make a point W/music but I'll stick a knife in the only ear U can hear out of
Dope af nice flip direct punch

Swallow Ur pride thinking You tough!...S'why I'm punch'n ya head
We'll see little bitch talk shit, than realize Lenox egos stuck in his neck!
Lmfao

I wear gold kid, U W/a buck in this game? means I shoot @ a poor nerd
Only reason U Talk money S'Cos U got a gap between ya teeth that'll fit 4 Quarters
Setup rhyme scheme didnt go well with finisher. Finisher was ok felt u couldve worded better

& the face on that nose'll get smack quick
Funny ppl think U 11 but look like u been on a 30 yr Crack binge
Nah

skinny fuck, ya whole swag style is so weak
Ya shirts about 10x to big...thats a hand me down from knowP
Setup was wack funny finish tho

V/Spree easy because he put together an actual pic battle verse with each bar being directed towards picture