2017 FRONTLINES TOURNAMENT VII
Round One
RULES
Regular battles
10-16 lines each
Agree on line limit in check in
Regular FL House Rules
VERSES & VOTES
Check in by Midnight Wednesdays EST
Verses due Midnight Fridays EST
NO Extensions will be allowed
Must vote on every Tourney Battle, or lose ranks points/ votes next week
REWARDS
Winner gets +50 rank pts, medal and contenders match
Runner-up gets +20 rank pts
Cypher winners receive a cypher medal
@plethora @Lenox
Last edited by Spree; January 9th, 2017 at 07:14 PM
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12. Wats good @plethora
Originally Posted by Lenox
u aint carryin clips. put u in a wheelchair w/ several severed disks
so next time ur Moving Arms, it'll be with help from physical therapists
my flare'll kickback. give him a big gash from the sawed off rifle
gonna see Lennox take a slug to the chin, but aint the Oliver McCall fight tho
psycho internet thug til i get rope & adhesive, then nigga done
we'll see how tough he Aqueduct tape on after getting thrown into one
ur bitch a slut. niggas come to ur crib & line up in a single row
then run a train around her mouth like the peter gabriel sledgehammer video
he'll be left a Vegetable before i bury this fairy under the earth
so officers & detectives won't find Lentil they dig him up from the dirt
tuck gun in my shirt. rather let fists fly & end his life in a brawl
if Lenox Square up, money exchanging hands for a bag like shopping at a mall
12. @Lenox
In one of his first bars he talked about how I'm not clapping clips. I already said in one of my verses that he doesn't either. So don't treat it as a rebuttal coz I already came up with it nefore he dropped
His verse
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He need homie's to catch reck.. faggot get ready to die now.
think bama against clemson.. u get bodied underdogs once 9's out.
I'm certified pimpin... 'shit' describes the lifestyle he's living.
I'm a street sweeper, u sweep sidewalks outside of a box that u live in.
He talks in battles like.. "I'm packin clips and clappin them"..
I bet African ur ass with the heater pav won't wanna act black again.
The 34'll treat pav like a dirty whore.. is a win what ur searching for??
He'll have fists in air when i pump it quicker than pauly from jersey shore.
I Could be cuttin u up.. but enough's enough when the muzzle gets tucked.
The forty sevendust em face down in a puddle of mud.
I use fists too, ending faggots lives, not just when the hammer's poppin.
Couple Punches whammy dis nigga harder then a Kirk Hammett solo.
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It's hammers dolo**** not hammers poppin @Kill Spree
Plethora
u aint carryin clips. put u in a wheelchair w/ several severed disks
so next time ur Moving Arms, it'll be with help from physical therapists
Ive seen alot of up in arms bars before. this was actually a decent flip with the moving arms reference great approach direct punch
my flare'll kickback. give him a big gash from the sawed off rifle
gonna see Lennox take a slug to the chin, but aint the Oliver McCall fight tho
Didnt feel the overall rhyme scheme from the setup going into ur finisher
psycho internet thug til i get rope & adhesive, then nigga done
we'll see how tough he Aqueduct tape on after getting thrown into one
Dope wordplay
ur bitch a slut. niggas come to ur crib & line up in a single row
then run a train around her mouth like the peter gabriel sledgehammer video
Lmao
he'll be left a Vegetable before i bury this fairy under the earth
so officers & detectives won't find Lentil they dig him up from the dirt
Played nameplay
tuck gun in my shirt. rather let fists fly & end his life in a brawl
if Lenox Square up, money exchanging hands for a bag like shopping at a mall
Weak similie
Lenox
Fuck this phone not let me paste your verse sorry ill give u bar for bar breakdown
First bar good current reference i felt u couldve worded that finisher better
I seen the street sweeper concept done before
3rd bar didnt like the direction of it
Fist pump jersey shore lines played
47? Thought it was a 44 38 22
Closer was dope
Street sweeper was an ok flip from lenox and his closer other then that thought wording hurt him in most of his concepts. Aqueduct and the sledgehammer bar from plethora,i felt hit with more impact, it was wittier overall better creativity.
V/Plethora
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u aint carryin clips. put u in a wheelchair w/ several severed disks
so next time ur Moving Arms, it'll be with help from physical therapists
he'll be left a Vegetable before i bury this fairy under the earth
so officers & detectives won't find Lentil they dig him up from the dirt
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I'm certified pimpin... 'shit' describes the lifestyle he's living.
I'm a street sweeper, u sweep sidewalks outside of a box that u live in.
not a great battle... but its the first rd so it is what it is... That one was the only decent thing I got from Lenox verse.. everything else felt like empty filler & bravado....
Pleth Lentil bar alone woulda beat that verse to be honest
v-plethora
he'll be left a Vegetable before i bury this fairy under the earth
so officers & detectives won't find Lentil they dig him up from the dirt
^^^^
This line was single handedly better than lenox's verse.
Len the sweeper line as the other guys said was pretty clever and was by far your best line/flip
Vote - Plethora.... who simply came harder and more consistent
yeah i wasnt very impressed by this battle either it was like both of yall were trying to hard and because ya lines werent simple and direct it was hard to interpret them...... thats all i really got from this battle i really expected more from both of you..... i realize this is the first round er whatever but i would have liked a better approach and simplified in general really because your bars were way too complicated i had trouble understanding most of them.......
just to show you what i mean im going to break down a couple bars from both of you so that you see what i mean by like being more direct with your set ups and punches..... anyways start with plethora.....
right this bar and im not concerned with the carrying clips part that lennox seemed to have a problem with but i see the connection between carryin clips and moving arms........ but i dont know there was something about it that made it hard to interpret from a readers perspective i just didnt think you hit the punch in the second line as hard as you thought i realize that it all works in your head and that it works on its most simple fundementals but for me i was not impressed with it... just to show you another bar from plethora just so you know what im talking about here is another one i was confused with....u aint carryin clips. put u in a wheelchair w/ several severed disks
so next time ur Moving Arms, it'll be with help from physical therapists
ur bitch a slut. niggas come to ur crib & line up in a single row
then run a train around her mouth like the peter gabriel sledgehammer video
okay yes i have heard of peter gabriel and the sledgehammer video but i mean that was ages ago when that came out and i have no idea what happened in the video at this point it was too long ago..... anyways i guess it was a diss and it worked but i had trouble thinking about it in general........
anyways now for uhh lennox..... heres were my problem with his verse was.....
right for one i dont see the African reference and who the fuck is pav? and when did he ever act black?? then what is a 34 and again who is pav? and then the paul from jersey shore come on man that was weak and i never fucking watch that show.... but i guess it was a decent reference......He talks in battles like.. "I'm packin clips and clappin them"..
I bet African ur ass with the heater pav won't wanna act black again.
The 34'll treat pav like a dirty whore.. is a win what ur searching for??
He'll have fists in air when i pump it quicker than pauly from jersey shore.
anyways after breaking this down you both actually have better concepts than i thought when i originally read your verses... but for me im going to stick with the crowd and say that Plethora won this battle... thanks and no hard feelings please im not trying to make you guys feel bad about your verses and good luck to both of you........
vote: plethora
a labyrinth of power.....
Look at all these fking retard mans wagon voters
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DQ me from this cancerous tourney @KnowP
Look at all these fking retard mans wagon voters
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DQ me from this cancerous tourney @KnowP
Plethora moves on
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