2017 FRONTLINES TOURNAMENT VII
Round One
RULES
Regular battles
10-16 lines each
Agree on line limit in check in
Regular FL House Rules
VERSES & VOTES
Check in by Midnight Wednesdays EST
Verses due Midnight Fridays EST
NO Extensions will be allowed
Must vote on every Tourney Battle, or lose ranks points/ votes next week
REWARDS
Winner gets +50 rank pts, medal and contenders match
Runner-up gets +20 rank pts
Cypher winners receive a cypher medal
@Joe Boston @Aljafri
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Joe pack the appliance i settle the beef if u wanna offer
It'll shoot or Maytag u in the face with it, then have u spinning thats a top load washer
Fix ur posture, take a rewind, or press that fucking reset
The right crack your rib, eye will have you in er trying to cure the meat sweats
If its thug shit he post, part em with the bullets ill let the gun relieve stress
Stay with a coat full of arms that'll kill everyone on his family tree crest
Got your bitches breasts cupped i hope when i go downstairs that it dont smell
Then after i Packer i hope u get mad and punch through a wall like Odell
This aint gonna end well your praying that the voilence will cease
Im digging Graves for you the family and i hope yall rot in hell with missy elliots desease
@KnowP if u can till he dropd
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Got an exam my bad.Originally Posted by Aljafri
Gotta fix the first bar since its considered feed
Looks like luck is in my favor Cuz im beat this wack cat
You got bad luck Cuz you crossed paths with this black cat
Boston this battle will be your history, this will get bloody, boston massacre
veteran in the calendar but amateur to this battler
got a bad habit keeping my hands close to my hip like a cowboy I'm quick with the reflex one clip
have yea laying by the sand that bitch came like a hurricane so I call her sandy
if that don't work I got something more handy, like lance I got an arm strong
gonna need to use the forearm, so I spray headlong, it got a big kick head strong
def a head shot cuz the head gone! your just a regular joe find yea at star bucks
i'll make this star bust nova turn him to star dust that's big bang but i'll still send him to hova
Joe pack the appliance i settle the beef if u wanna offer
It'll shoot or Maytag u in the face with it, then have u spinning thats a top load washer
If its thug shit he post, part em with the bullets ill let the gun relieve stress
Stay with a coat full of arms that'll kill everyone on his family tree crest
vs
Boston this battle will be your history, this will get bloody, boston massacre
veteran in the calendar but amateur to this battler
Aljafri u came too simple...I mean u rhymed wack cat with black cat...I know u were in a hurry to change that first bar but that was lazy... some of your bars just ranted on and the Armstrong bar was bad... just not enough hits to win..
Boston... again, with the name throws... the missy Elliot bar ( some folks probably aint even heard about her disease <-- that's how u spell it....yet)
the washing machine bar coulda been used better but not much was needed for the win
v- Boston...
Joe pack the appliance i settle the beef if u wanna offer
It'll shoot or Maytag u in the face with it, then have u spinning thats a top load washer
^ehh
Fix ur posture, take a rewind, or press that fucking reset
The right crack your rib, eye will have you in er trying to cure the meat sweats
^ehh
If its thug shit he post, part em with the bullets ill let the gun relieve stress
Stay with a coat full of arms that'll kill everyone on his family tree crest
^ehh
Got your bitches breasts cupped i hope when i go downstairs that it dont smell
Then after i Packer i hope u get mad and punch through a wall like Odell
^ehh
This aint gonna end well your praying that the voilence will cease
Im digging Graves for you the family and i hope yall rot in hell with missy elliots desease
^cool
Vs
Looks like luck is in my favor Cuz im beat this wack cat
You got bad luck Cuz you crossed paths with this black cat
^ehh
Boston this battle will be your history, this will get bloody, boston massacre
veteran in the calendar but amateur to this battler
^nope
got a bad habit keeping my hands close to my hip like a cowboy I'm quick with the reflex one clip
have yea laying by the sand that bitch came like a hurricane so I call her sandy
if that don't work I got something more handy, like lance I got an arm strong
gonna need to use the forearm, so I spray headlong, it got a big kick head strong
def a head shot cuz the head gone! your just a regular joe find yea at star bucks
i'll make this star bust nova turn him to star dust that's big bang but i'll still send him to hova
^ had a hard time following this whole section
Not much to say here. Al can use more structured lines tho the rhymes were there. Joe did enough to advance
V/ Joe
Maytag as a concept is whatever. It was delivered as just short of a punch. Coat of arms was cool. Miss Elliot was decent.
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Vote: Joe
Overall: I thought joes wording was much more polished this battle
Maytag as a concept is whatever. It was delivered as just short of a punch. Coat of arms was cool. Miss Elliot was decent.
Against
Nothing
Vote: Joe
Overall: I thought joes wording was much more polished this battle
U know their gonna ask you to break this down more
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Joe pack the appliance i settle the beef if u wanna offer
It'll shoot or Maytag u in the face with it, then have u spinning thats a top load washer
concepts cool...but it'll shoot OR maytag doesnt make sense. dont you have to shoot for it to tag you period? Miss
Fix ur posture, take a rewind, or press that fucking reset
The right crack your rib, eye will have you in er trying to cure the meat sweats
again another cool concept but worded bad.
If its thug shit he post, part em with the bullets ill let the gun relieve stress
Stay with a coat full of arms that'll kill everyone on his family tree crest
this was decent.
Got your bitches breasts cupped i hope when i go downstairs that it dont smell
Then after i Packer i hope u get mad and punch through a wall like Odell
lol cupping her breast. anyways this was decent. jab at best
This aint gonna end well your praying that the voilence will cease
Im digging Graves for you the family and i hope yall rot in hell with missy elliots desease
lol ..again this was aight. nothing crazy
vs
Looks like luck is in my favor Cuz im beat this wack cat
You got bad luck Cuz you crossed paths with this black cat
This was a basic played punch
Boston this battle will be your history, this will get bloody, boston massacre
veteran in the calendar but amateur to this battler
nah...this was a complete miss
got a bad habit keeping my hands close to my hip like a cowboy I'm quick with the reflex one clip
have yea laying by the sand that bitch came like a hurricane so I call her sandy
This bar doesnt rhyme...and the concept was played as fuck
if that don't work I got something more handy, like lance I got an arm strong
gonna need to use the forearm, so I spray headlong, it got a big kick head strong
Miss..basic concept poorly executed and you used strong twice as your end rhymes. get creative bro
def a head shot cuz the head gone! your just a regular joe find yea at star bucks
i'll make this star bust nova turn him to star dust that's big bang but i'll still send him to hova
Nah...all over the place with filler and star bucks & hova DO NOT RHYME!
Overall - garbage battle. could tell Joe was lazy and he knew he didnt need much to win this battle. Aljafri came with basic concepts that were all over the place and mostly filler. Dude needs to check out some of the LLL champ battles or HOF battles and get a better Idea wtf is going here
V/Joe
Joe moves on
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