6 bars
Due by midnight tonight
This is my check in @Aljafri
Kill Spree
Aljafri
6 bars
Due by midnight tonight
This is my check in @Aljafri
Same
Yo,
Not gonna lie, spree hates my gut, hating on my votes
Cuz non went to him, nigga it's not my fault your losing most
And guess who put kimbo to sleep? me and gave you the slice left an X to help give aim
For the SG on where to leave the hole, O, call it tic tac toe this shits a game
Ironic your name is killing spree but you've been getting killed over and over
Call it routine, Let the machine spray like perfume cuz I'll leave him with a dead body odor
He wanted to test me by battling me, but his curiosity shall kill this cat, like the idiom
I sense the animosity, the heat is skyrocketing off the thermostat, but im still given em the L cuz im fire ain't no heal'n em
I said sense the animosity? The Heat like sky rockets off this thermostat, that'll give him hell, like fire with helium
Another nigga on the news clip, I'll save you as my masterpiece to show these niggas my craftsmanship
Nigga im always dealing with iron like a blacksmith but it's words that I forge call me a wordsmith
And I won't forthwith to cock the fifth like 5 dudes that would gangbang a bitch with
Originally Posted by aljafri
See...
Tourney proved U built to lose, I'll make sure this goes worse
I'll leave this fgt so gutted He could rival basement blueprints to joes work
Quoted bar was pussy talk, I'll hit W/Numbers by clap'n the matics
Ur case needs luck to be good, Seems like a black cat crossed the path of Ur talent
The rankings bro? this lames a joke cos he known for wackness
NO WAY this young Star gets to a championship final, thats Greenbay over Dallas
Fuck this battle, lazy bar'll beat this fgts life dead
Funny U'll lose to this key before you've locked the ability to rhyme kid
These them drunk bars I bully U with, Kids in sum deep shit
I'll murder Al key..cos I rather cut my wrist W/a broken bottle than read his
The hands'll rearange ya face, Catch this rnd of fear
1 punch'll have ya eyes on ya shoulder & ya jaw wrapped around ya ear
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Joe boston vs Aljafri
@Aljafri get ur voting links in bro
Yo,
Not gonna lie, spree hates my gut, hating on my votes
Cuz non went to him, nigga it's not my fault your losing most
eh didnt like the endrhyme
And guess who put kimbo to sleep? me and gave you the slice left an X to help give aim
For the SG on where to leave the hole, O, call it tic tac toe this shits a game
okay that was alright i guess...
Ironic your name is killing spree but you've been getting killed over and over
Call it routine, Let the machine spray like perfume cuz I'll leave him with a dead body odor
okay i liked that sortve
He wanted to test me by battling me, but his curiosity shall kill this cat, like the idiom
I sense the animosity, the heat is skyrocketing off the thermostat, but im still given em the L cuz im fire ain't no heal'n em
a bit run on
I said sense the animosity? The Heat like sky rockets off this thermostat, that'll give him hell, like fire with helium
Another nigga on the news clip, I'll save you as my masterpiece to show these niggas my craftsmanship
Nigga im always dealing with iron like a blacksmith but it's words that I forge call me a wordsmith
And I won't forthwith to cock the fifth like 5 dudes that would gangbang a bitch with
right this wasnt the best ending
vs.
Tourney proved U built to lose, I'll make sure this goes worse
I'll leave this fgt so gutted He could rival basement blueprints to joes work
ehh a bit forced on the punchline tip
Quoted bar was pussy talk, I'll hit W/Numbers by clap'n the matics
Ur case needs luck to be good, Seems like a black cat crossed the path of Ur talent
that was good i liked the black cat that was cool
The rankings bro? this lames a joke cos he known for wackness
NO WAY this young Star gets to a championship final, thats Greenbay over Dallas
had me wanting to chuckle this was better
Fuck this battle, lazy bar'll beat this fgts life dead
Funny U'll lose to this key before you've locked the ability to rhyme kid
ehhh wasnt feelign it maybe the set up wasnt the best dont know just wasnt ya best
These them drunk bars I bully U with, Kids in sum deep shit
I'll murder Al key..cos I rather cut my wrist W/a broken bottle than read his
didnt get this
The hands'll rearange ya face, Catch this rnd of fear
1 punch'll have ya eyes on ya shoulder & ya jaw wrapped around ya ear
that was a nice flip it was alright at least
yeah overall i got kill spree taking this i think my breakdown speaks for itself.....
vote: kill spree
a labyrinth of power.....
Ajifari: nothing
Against
Kill spree: I wasn't feeling joe basement blueprints, I actually didn't get it lol.. black cat was nice, packers was ok, I wasn't feeling key at all bro,
Broken bottle was lolol, decent... closer wasn't feeling, kinda lazy
Overall: ur bars were pretty dope in the roast cipher against me @aljafari .. not this battle tho bro, wasn't feeling anitjing from u.
Ks did his thing once again. Couple dope lines.
Vote: ks
@Alfjari 24hrs to get 2 links in or dq man gotta vote on battles
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@Aljafri loses 50% points for no links.... can we get more votes please
nada
vs
Tourney proved U built to lose, I'll make sure this goes worse
I'll leave this fgt so gutted He could rival basement blueprints to joes work
Quoted bar was pussy talk, I'll hit W/Numbers by clap'n the matics
Ur case needs luck to be good, Seems like a black cat crossed the path of Ur talent
okayish verse from spree who dropped some coo personals on Al. Al talked a tough verse but no substance as far as punches, personals, wordplay, flips, nothin. step it up bruh. go read a few champ matches in LLL archives and learn from the best the site has to offer.
v. spree
Al: ???
Vs
KS: joe basement, black cat, & packers/Dallas
Spree didn't really have to try here... I mean, he even said several times in his verse that he came wit drunk bars lol...niiiiiice! And he was confident tht would be enough...AND IT WAS! AL- keep bangin!
V/ spree
Aljafri:
Yo,
Not gonna lie, spree hates my gut, hating on my votes
Cuz non went to him, nigga it's not my fault your losing most
And guess who put kimbo to sleep? me and gave you the slice left an X to help give aim
For the SG on where to leave the hole, O, call it tic tac toe this shits a game
Ironic your name is killing spree but you've been getting killed over and over
Call it routine, Let the machine spray like perfume cuz I'll leave him with a dead body odor
He wanted to test me by battling me, but his curiosity shall kill this cat, like the idiom
I sense the animosity, the heat is skyrocketing off the thermostat, but im still given em the L cuz im fire ain't no heal'n em
I said sense the animosity? The Heat like sky rockets off this thermostat, that'll give him hell, like fire with helium
Another nigga on the news clip, I'll save you as my masterpiece to show these niggas my craftsmanship
Nigga im always dealing with iron like a blacksmith but it's words that I forge call me a wordsmith
And I won't forthwith to cock the fifth like 5 dudes that would gangbang a bitch with.
Kill Spree:
Tourney proved U built to lose, I'll make sure this goes worse
I'll leave this fgt so gutted He could rival basement blueprints to joes work
ehh a bit forced on the punchline tip
Quoted bar was pussy talk, I'll hit W/Numbers by clap'n the matics
Ur case needs luck to be good, Seems like a black cat crossed the path of Ur talent
that was good i liked the black cat that was cool
The rankings bro? this lames a joke cos he known for wackness
NO WAY this young Star gets to a championship final, thats Greenbay over Dallas
had me wanting to chuckle this was better
Fuck this battle, lazy bar'll beat this fgts life dead
Funny U'll lose to this key before you've locked the ability to rhyme kid
ehhh wasnt feelign it maybe the set up wasnt the best dont know just wasnt ya best
These them drunk bars I bully U with, Kids in sum deep shit
I'll murder Al key..cos I rather cut my wrist W/a broken bottle than read his
didnt get this
The hands'll rearange ya face, Catch this rnd of fear
1 punch'll have ya eyes on ya shoulder & ya jaw wrapped around ya ear
that was a nice flip it was alright at least
Aljafri had some ok lines in there but alot of his barz seemed to be abit unclear "Hard to Place Imagery" Decent try though homie no doubt. Try playing around with the structure of your bars to get that perfect pinch in. Not much else to say here. 100
Kill Spree Took this IMO from beggining to end. Was a decent read no doubt with some pretty Ill punches. I believe you could have come abit stronger but came correct enough on this one for the vote. Good shit overall. 100
Killing Spree for the V
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