first post check me out let me know what you think

[rap95]

yo im on this rap battles not lookin to battle rap
unless somebody really want it then ima eat em up,mc d's wrap
im on this post rap forum so its all text
but if i had a beat it'd be a post-rap vex
the n.w.o just played they trump card by the name of donald
but the only donald i know would tell them sukkas they all better duck
im startin the movement right now and i want everyone to turn up
before they take all of our amendments and we all end up fucked
ill spit a quiuck sixteen, thats a pound
or ill double it that like a dope sack i've almost reached a key
if you didnt know ill educate thats a 1000 g's
these sukkas think they gonna stop me but i got more heart then 1000 g's
[B]im on that paper chase for 1000 g's
for those that dont kno thats a million
my bitch bad call her the philipino chirstina milian
my last line dont waste your life dont waste your time

[Amen]

Sucked.

And I only read the words in bold.

[Mr Elmsby]

Basically the same as all the shit in FL. If this dude gave dick pics he'd win the FL Championship easy

[Fresh]

you rhymed 1000 g's 3 times in a row though

[Amen]

Basically the same as all the shit in FL. If this dude gave dick pics he'd win the FL Championship easy

Lmao

[Oxymoron]

yo i'll post next these little fucks are hopeless
i notice that their focus has no focus their hopeless as
a decapitated chick giving a blow job, hold on...
that sounds perfect, i can work with it,
my surface is slicker than a serpent is...
cant be fucked to finish this rhyme, n im cool with it.

[Soule]

That was incredible, you definitely have a future here.

[Rock girl]

There's open mic and poet spot for ya work
Don't forget audio or battle spot
Keep posting awesome

[Toobs]

That was incredible, you definitely have a future here.

i agree...this is definitely one of the nicest, most well structured pieces i've ever read in my life.
if record deals from text were a reality, this man would be front and center.

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There's open mic and poet spot for ya work
Don't forget audio or battle spot
Keep posting awesome

sasquatch, chupacabra needs you. he's moving. needs someone to lift the heavy furniture.

[rap95]

yo i'll post next these little fucks are hopeless
i notice that their focus has no focus their hopeless as
a decapitated chick giving a blow job, hold on...
that sounds perfect, i can work with it,
my surface is slicker than a serpent is...
cant be fucked to finish this rhyme, n im cool with it.

smut peddler means hes pushin porn or maybe hes pushin the puss like hes in labor
only way to the top is hard labor n i let the goons know its a favor for a favor
30 round dick with one in the chamber, baskin robbins i got your flavor
and for all these hoes on my dick i put it in there mouth to savor
im no captain so bitches i am not your savior

[Oxymoron]

smut peddler means hes pushin porn or maybe hes pushin the puss like hes in labor
only way to the top is hard labor n i let the goons know its a favor for a favor
30 round dick with one in the chamber, baskin robbins i got your flavor
and for all these hoes on my dick i put it in there mouth to savor
im no captain so bitches i am not your savior

Ahh haha, you replied to me.. But seriously.. you really got to stop bolding your rhyme words..

[Soule]

He's a trendsetter. Somebody sign this guy already, damn. He spits so much fire that the mic melts.

[Nohbody]

HOF Bound