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Dia
Teflon Kong
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Dropped 12, Kill spree got it... get at me bro
Originally Posted by Teflon Kong
accepting my call-out was a death warrant, your trying to be brave when that gimmick is played.
what he know about flipping a name? cuz only time "teflon" get deep, when I'm digging his grave.
you hiding behind killing spree, like mass shooting victims, and this is a murder scene domination.
so there's no murking me obligation, when you "reject" battles like their surgery complications.
if he's talking shit? you just see this head coming at me sideways like he's rocking a mullet.
you don't need a teflon vest, because when your opponents no show thats dodging a bullet.
you know you're an easy win right? your just a fucking noob that thought he could squeeze by.
you need inspiration to drop garbage? i guess if that fails u can blame it on your weed high.
I done left him buried, when it comes to this text shit hes not top tier, not even secondary.
his style is sedentary, and nothing he's "delivering is dope" so a blind drop seems unnecessary.
that corny shit aint getting ya next to me... the way you cooking it's like you're missing the recipe.
your just a bitch that is less to me, I couldn't picture you rolling if you was tripping on ecstasy.
TK's verse
DIA aka Diasick
A-Cross his lips he’ll kiss the fist, but he aint blessin himself
bitch is sick archDIAssist
Like little kids and crooked dicks is putting stress in his mouth
DIA-SICK? Its complicated… I half ya shit >just to reflect
AID<s'what ya shitty text need... n'only time you SICK to death
Cos If you DI-A happy man, you could color him relieved
Little bitch is in a barber chair with stitches in his weave
Don’t agree I got More Honor, tell ya Ma We got some beef
Cos If I greet you with Maholo… aint no Island fucken meet
EYE’SIL show my cue t’kill, I’ll snatch this bitches cuticles
Raise the hair on niggas neck, like ISIS hostage funerals
See Ill decap this fucken dike, like Trump was killin Hillary
If Dia-sick of the Fake NOOSE… I killed the bitch wit guillotines
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accepting my call-out was a death warrant, your trying to be brave when that gimmick is played.
what he know about flipping a name? cuz only time "teflon" get deep, when I'm digging his grave.
Cool
you hiding behind killing spree, like mass shooting victims, and this is a murder scene domination.
so there's no murking me obligation, when you "reject" battles like their surgery complications.
Okay
if he's talking shit? you just see this head coming at me sideways like he's rocking a mullet.
you don't need a teflon vest, because when your opponents no show thats dodging a bullet.
okay
you know you're an easy win right? your just a fucking noob that thought he could squeeze by.
you need inspiration to drop garbage? i guess if that fails u can blame it on your weed high.
Not feeling it
I done left him buried, when it comes to this text shit hes not top tier, not even secondary.
his style is sedentary, and nothing he's "delivering is dope" so a blind drop seems unnecessary.
cool concept but felt flat in the end
that corny shit aint getting ya next to me... the way you cooking it's like you're missing the recipe.
your just a bitch that is less to me, I couldn't picture you rolling if you was tripping on ecstasy.
lol cool
Cool verse, only had a couple bars I didn't care for. Liked that finisher.
vs.
A-Cross his lips he’ll kiss the fist, but he aint blessin himself
bitch is sick archDIAssist
Like little kids and crooked dicks is putting stress in his mouth
No.
DIA-SICK? Its complicated… I half ya shit >just to reflect
AID<s'what ya shitty text need... n'only time you SICK to death
Nope.
Cos If you DI-A happy man, you could color him relieved
Little bitch is in a barber chair with stitches in his weave
No.
Don’t agree I got More Honor, tell ya Ma We got some beef
Cos If I greet you with Maholo… aint no Island fucken meet
No?
EYE’SIL show my cue t’kill, I’ll snatch this bitches cuticles
Raise the hair on niggas neck, like ISIS hostage funerals
another miss
See Ill decap this fucken dike, like Trump was killin Hillary
If Dia-sick of the Fake NOOSE… I killed the bitch wit guillotines
No.
Wasn't really feeling anything here. The way you're wording your lines makes it hard to find a hard hit. You need to lengthen your lines out more so that you can create a stronger build up because the way they are now it's not really getting the concept together all that well.
Vote Diasick for the better overall verse.
Dia
accepting my call-out was a death warrant, your trying to be brave when that gimmick is played.
what he know about flipping a name? cuz only time "teflon" get deep, when I'm digging his grave.
Cool flip off the personal shot
you hiding behind killing spree, like mass shooting victims, and this is a murder scene domination.
so there's no murking me obligation, when you "reject" battles like their surgery complications.
Dope similie
if he's talking shit? you just see this head coming at me sideways like he's rocking a mullet.
you don't need a teflon vest, because when your opponents no show thats dodging a bullet.
Setup sucked but finisher was ok
you know you're an easy win right? your just a fucking noob that thought he could squeeze by.
you need inspiration to drop garbage? i guess if that fails u can blame it on your weed high.
Lol
I done left him buried, when it comes to this text shit hes not top tier, not even secondary.
his style is sedentary, and nothing he's "delivering is dope" so a blind drop seems unnecessary.
This was a light hit kinda basic
that corny shit aint getting ya next to me... the way you cooking it's like you're missing the recipe.
your just a bitch that is less to me, I couldn't picture you rolling if you was tripping on ecstasy.
Played
Teflon
A-Cross his lips he’ll kiss the fist, but he aint blessin himself
bitch is sick archDIAssist
Like little kids and crooked dicks is putting stress in his mouth
Finisher concept was corny i though u were gonna be more creative with the np
DIA-SICK? Its complicated… I half ya shit >just to reflect
AID<s'what ya shitty text need... n'only time you SICK to death
No played
Cos If you DI-A happy man, you could color him relieved
Little bitch is in a barber chair with stitches in his weave
What???
Don’t agree I got More Honor, tell ya Ma We got some beef
Cos If I greet you with Maholo… aint no Island fucken meet
Ok not bad decent wordplay
EYE’SIL show my cue t’kill, I’ll snatch this bitches cuticles
Raise the hair on niggas neck, like ISIS hostage funerals
Finisher was good liked the similie but setup fucked up the impact u couldve had here
See Ill decap this fucken dike, like Trump was killin Hillary
If Dia-sick of the Fake NOOSE… I killed the bitch wit guillotines
No
V/Diasick overall more consistent punches had better impact. Teflon gotta work on his wording he trying to be over creative with wordplays and nps but overall they miss especially if ur trying it in a setup. Try saving the creativity for the impact of ur finisher.
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Dia
accepting my call-out was a death warrant, your trying to be brave when that gimmick is played.
what he know about flipping a name? cuz only time "teflon" get deep, when I'm digging his grave.
Cool flip off the personal shot
you hiding behind killing spree, like mass shooting victims, and this is a murder scene domination.
so there's no murking me obligation, when you "reject" battles like their surgery complications.
Dope similie
if he's talking shit? you just see this head coming at me sideways like he's rocking a mullet.
you don't need a teflon vest, because when your opponents no show thats dodging a bullet.
Setup sucked but finisher was ok
you know you're an easy win right? your just a fucking noob that thought he could squeeze by.
you need inspiration to drop garbage? i guess if that fails u can blame it on your weed high.
Lol
I done left him buried, when it comes to this text shit hes not top tier, not even secondary.
his style is sedentary, and nothing he's "delivering is dope" so a blind drop seems unnecessary.
This was a light hit kinda basic
that corny shit aint getting ya next to me... the way you cooking it's like you're missing the recipe.
your just a bitch that is less to me, I couldn't picture you rolling if you was tripping on ecstasy.
Played
Teflon
A-Cross his lips he’ll kiss the fist, but he aint blessin himself
bitch is sick archDIAssist
Like little kids and crooked dicks is putting stress in his mouth
Finisher concept was corny i though u were gonna be more creative with the np
DIA-SICK? Its complicated… I half ya shit >just to reflect
AID<s'what ya shitty text need... n'only time you SICK to death
No played
Cos If you DI-A happy man, you could color him relieved
Little bitch is in a barber chair with stitches in his weave
What???
Don’t agree I got More Honor, tell ya Ma We got some beef
Cos If I greet you with Maholo… aint no Island fucken meet
Ok not bad decent wordplay
EYE’SIL show my cue t’kill, I’ll snatch this bitches cuticles
Raise the hair on niggas neck, like ISIS hostage funerals
Finisher was good liked the similie but setup fucked up the impact u couldve had here
See Ill decap this fucken dike, like Trump was killin Hillary
If Dia-sick of the Fake NOOSE… I killed the bitch wit guillotines
No
V/Diasick overall more consistent punches had better impact. Teflon gotta work on his wording he trying to be over creative with wordplays and nps but overall they miss especially if ur trying it in a setup. Try saving the creativity for the impact of ur finisher.
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A-Cross his lips he’ll kiss the fist, but he aint blessin himself
bitch is sick archDIAssist
Like little kids and crooked dicks is putting stress in his mouth
>>wtf, pause.... Miss!
DIA-SICK? Its complicated… I half ya shit >just to reflect
AID<s'what ya shitty text need... n'only time you SICK to death
>>i kinda see what u were tryna do but it failed bro.
Cos If you DI-A happy man, you could color him relieved
Little bitch is in a barber chair with stitches in his weave
>>lol what????? Nah!
Don’t agree I got More Honor, tell ya Ma We got some beef
Cos If I greet you with Maholo… aint no Island fucken meet
>>im lost at this point, bruh.
EYE’SIL show my cue t’kill, I’ll snatch this bitches cuticles
Raise the hair on niggas neck, like ISIS hostage funerals
>>light
See Ill decap this fucken dike, like Trump was killin Hillary
If Dia-sick of the Fake NOOSE… I killed the bitch wit guillotines
>>smh...this is ur 5th miss
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accepting my call-out was a death warrant, your trying to be brave when that gimmick is played.
what he know about flipping a name? cuz only time "teflon" get deep, when I'm digging his grave.
>>light
you hiding behind killing spree, like mass shooting victims, and this is a murder scene domination.
so there's no murking me obligation, when you "reject" battles like their surgery complications.
>>another light bar
if he's talking shit? you just see this head coming at me sideways like he's rocking a mullet.
you don't need a teflon vest, because when your opponents no show thats dodging a bullet.
>>nah
you know you're an easy win right? your just a fucking noob that thought he could squeeze by.
you need inspiration to drop garbage? i guess if that fails u can blame it on your weed high.
>>two str8 misses now...
I done left him buried, when it comes to this text shit hes not top tier, not even secondary.
his style is sedentary, and nothing he's "delivering is dope" so a blind drop seems unnecessary.
>>make that 3 misses..
that corny shit aint getting ya next to me... the way you cooking it's like you're missing the recipe.
your just a bitch that is less to me, I couldn't picture you rolling if you was tripping on ecstasy.
>>a rollin ecstasy bar???? Wow
This battle was fuckin str8 ass milk...
V- dia (for bein less sucky)
[accepting my call-out was a death warrant, your trying to be brave when that gimmick is played.
what he know about flipping a name? cuz only time "teflon" get deep, when I'm digging his grave.
you hiding behind killing spree, like mass shooting victims, and this is a murder scene domination.
so there's no murking me obligation, when you "reject" battles like their surgery complications.
you know you're an easy win right? your just a fucking noob that thought he could squeeze by.
I done left him buried, when it comes to this text shit hes not top tier, not even secondary.
his style is sedentary, and nothing he's "delivering is dope" so a blind drop seems unnecessary.
Something Decent jabs nothing heavy
Vs
Nope, nothing
Vote dia
if he's talking shit? you just see this head coming at me sideways like he's rocking a mullet.
you don't need a teflon vest, because when your opponents no show thats dodging a bullet.
VS
Don’t agree I got More Honor, tell ya Ma We got some beef
Cos If I greet you with Maholo… aint no Island fucken meet
not a great battle... TK, u did the "DIA " nameplay too much, it got repetitive after a while and was not creative... the fake noose line was terrible... new & noose sound nothing alike... u CAN beat a topic to death if u are not creative with it... DIA, Donald trump bars,ISIS..... back to the drawing board
v- DIA
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