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Thread: Boyznblack vs Beer Tits [Beer Tits Wins OPEN FOR FEEDBACK]

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    Boyznblack vs Beer Tits [Beer Tits Wins OPEN FOR FEEDBACK]

    5 bars...due.....Thursday....house rules....check in by Monday night.....


    break a leg... this is my check

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    Re: Boyznblack vs Beer Tits

    Both y'all get your champ and contender voting links in

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    Re: Boyznblack vs Beer Tits

    Checking in.

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    Re: Boyznblack vs Beer Tits

    @Boyznblack @beer tits

    -Ya'll can post your verses now.
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    Re: Boyznblack vs Beer Tits

    BNB's overrated as hell, though. Click links for the personals.


    ... ayo


    His whack verses got him couch surfing wherever's friendly and free
    Because he's broke, and radio DJs say it's career suicide to Airbnb.
    How smart are you? I ask because your verses are awful and gaudy.
    I mean, even an idiot would call it quits after a blowout loss to Notti.
    Write this down: "I'm done battling." Take that home and rehearse it.
    It'd be the best idea you've had since you stopped bolding words in verses.
    Wait, he won a tournament? LOL can this site's battling get worse?
    Believing he's a champ is more of a stretch than the lines in his verse.
    Seriously, even my interior decorator says less is more, got it?
    That's why I'm taking down this old belt holder like rearranging my closet.
    This isn't a Champ Match. It's like pre-season, so I'll kind of lay off.
    Otherwise, I'd end Boys' title run like Green Bay in the playoffs.
    You're worse than late bloomer. Beating him was a cake walk, cousin.
    So I'm guessing the votes here will look like you: 0. Me: a bakers dozen.

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    Re: Boyznblack vs Beer Tits

    @Boyznblack is DQ'd. Open for feed until 11:59PM EST. Win will be awarded to @beer tits . - Notti

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    Re: Boyznblack vs Beer Tits

    His whack verses got him couch surfing wherever's friendly and free
    Because he's broke, and radio DJs say it's career suicide to Airbnb.
    cool opener, i like the airbnb nameplay, idt it's been done yet
    How smart are you? I ask because your verses are awful and gaudy.
    I mean, even an idiot would call it quits after a blowout loss to Notti.
    wording on this was weak, concept was weak as well tho so nothing much here
    Write this down: "I'm done battling." Take that home and rehearse it.
    It'd be the best idea you've had since you stopped bolding words in verses.
    ehhh decent personal shot, i'd say a jab tho, mediocre at best
    Wait, he won a tournament? LOL can this site's battling get worse?
    Believing he's a champ is more of a stretch than the lines in his verse.
    better personal shot, wording was a lil more crisp and the concept was better
    Seriously, even my interior decorator says less is more, got it?
    That's why I'm taking down this old belt holder like rearranging my closet.
    some people may not like this, kinda simple and corny, but i thought it was to the point and effective. cool jab
    This isn't a Champ Match. It's like pre-season, so I'll kind of lay off.
    Otherwise, I'd end Boys' title run like Green Bay in the playoffs.
    another simple, and maybe even played punch but i'll give it the nameplay/personal credit here.. decent
    You're worse than late bloomer. Beating him was a cake walk, cousin.
    So I'm guessing the votes here will look like you: 0. Me: a bakers dozen.
    horrible closer, mainly because votes only go to 5 for the win lol

    Overall: Definitely a lot of potential in this verse, and the way BNB been lookin since I took the title from him, this verse woulda won. Had a good idea of how to form punches and word things crisp enough to get ya point across. Had a few jabs in there which helped with consistency, and a few misses which is expected. Either way it was an interesting read and I look forward to seeing your progress.

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    Re: Boyznblack vs Beer Tits [Beer Tits Wins OPEN FOR FEEDBACK]

    His whack verses got him couch surfing wherever's friendly and free
    Because he's broke, and radio DJs say it's career suicide to Airbnb.
    Good nameplay here never seen it before

    How smart are you? I ask because your verses are awful and gaudy.
    I mean, even an idiot would call it quits after a blowout loss to Notti.
    Basic personal that lacked impact

    Write this down: "I'm done battling." Take that home and rehearse it.
    It'd be the best idea you've had since you stopped bolding words in verses.
    I like the personal but the wording of it the sting doesnt have alot of impact

    Wait, he won a tournament? LOL can this site's battling get worse?
    Believing he's a champ is more of a stretch than the lines in his verse.
    Played been done

    Seriously, even my interior decorator says less is more, got it?
    That's why I'm taking down this old belt holder like rearranging my closet.
    Thought this was a decent similie

    This isn't a Champ Match. It's like pre-season, so I'll kind of lay off.
    Otherwise, I'd end Boys' title run like Green Bay in the playoffs.
    Decent reference good nameplay

    You're worse than late bloomer. Beating him was a cake walk, cousin.
    So I'm guessing the votes here will look like you: 0. Me: a bakers dozen.
    Horrible wording sorry man indirect hit

    Well u had some decent personals couple nameplays that were straight. Some areas u came played and according to how u displayed impact some shit was basic.
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    Re: Boyznblack vs Beer Tits [Beer Tits Wins OPEN FOR FEEDBACK]

    Write this down: "I'm done battling." Take that home and rehearse it.
    It'd be the best idea you've had since you stopped bolding words in verses.
    Wait, he won a tournament? LOL can this site's battling get worse?
    Believing he's a champ is more of a stretch than the lines in his verse.
    Seriously, even my interior decorator says less is more, got it?
    That's why I'm taking down this old belt holder like rearranging my closet.
    This isn't a Champ Match. It's like pre-season, so I'll kind of lay off.
    Otherwise, I'd end Boys' title run like Green Bay in the playoffs.



    pretty solid show vs BNB. wish he would of shown to defend himself but ish happens. I like you did you research in every bar. some bars were light but I consider them lands tho. Greenbay bar was the best cause of the nameplay. the others were used concepts but you flipped em pretty good. good shit man.

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    Re: Boyznblack vs Beer Tits [Beer Tits Wins OPEN FOR FEEDBACK]

    His whack verses got him couch surfing wherever's friendly and free
    Because he's broke, and radio DJs say it's career suicide to Airbnb.
    I fucks with this..never seen the airBnB done against him..solid opener


    How smart are you? I ask because your verses are awful and gaudy.
    I mean, even an idiot would call it quits after a blowout loss to Notti.
    u didn't do research here, I heard he basically threw that match away because of site politics, he didn't even want the battle... that's just my inside scoop


    Write this down: "I'm done battling." Take that home and rehearse it.
    It'd be the best idea you've had since you stopped bolding words in verses.
    again, do your research, he's STILL bolding his verses..i don't think he'll ever stop... look at his GBL battle vs behemoth....

    Wait, he won a tournament? LOL can this site's battling get worse?
    Believing he's a champ is more of a stretch than the lines in his verse.
    he won a tournament and the FL belt, you've won....?.....


    Seriously, even my interior decorator says less is more, got it?
    That's why I'm taking down this old belt holder like rearranging my closet.
    I like the second line, the first line is kinda filler with the decorator wording, I get how u tried to tie in there but, .it falls short of a solid bar, comes closer to a decent jab.... not too shabby


    This isn't a Champ Match. It's like pre-season, so I'll kind of lay off.
    Otherwise, I'd end Boys' title run like Green Bay in the playoffs.
    no

    You're worse than late bloomer. Beating him was a cake walk, cousin.
    So I'm guessing the votes here will look like you: 0. Me: a bakers dozen.
    this falls horribly short... worded badly, and again, do your research, one cant be worse than someone they've beaten...


    vs

    ( insert fire verse here )

    well, Boyz completely forgot about this battle and posted nothing to mention, literally...and I can tell Beer tits did a lil digging and put full effort into int....

    still , the potential of what woulda happen if he had shown up versus what DID happen with Tits showing up.....balance that out and ....

    V- Boyznblack

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