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Due by Thursday night (if you need to extend then we can)
I'll check in when I post up my vote links
Out.
DzasteR
KnowP
10 lines
Due by Thursday night (if you need to extend then we can)
I'll check in when I post up my vote links
Out.
word. check!
G'L
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You been here since 2009, looks like you should have a lot of practice K
Apparently not – and rap is something you should LetGo…..download the app today
This dude surrounded by L’s.… he'll fold quick in this type of environment
So I’ll make this fast– and hang K’p up………..like a hero’s retirement (cape)
I can blast at this kid all day – show all ya fans how I bust them quick shots
See I’ll show K ma shell…... like we airing an episode of Love & Hip Hop (K. Michelle)
KP verses is watered down… barely scratching the surface, but his fans rooting for K
Against me? They’ll hope that Kale sprout from the ground..after I put a boot to his face
I’ve seen March Madness… & I’m bout to cause it - leave many to cry in defeat
And only time he been involved with it..... is when he protests and riot the streets
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@KnowP
Its Thursday - you gonna drop?
scream at me, you dead in the street n stuffed in an ern
afraid of this nerd? the only scary dzaster on this site happens to be Dagels return
u damn perv, u'll never excel wit rap, hand over the cash, turd
only studio you have been introduced to comes with a Microsoft office password
we at war and I'm a soldier, they know i'll bring em hell
they need a major force in Syria, and your punchlines would serve our country well
u got STD's swallowing D as a child, that's that faggot grind
when your mom told you to pick a fruit, I'm pretty sure that's not what she had in mind
punches land to hospital, digest ya food a little quicker
after I make you swallow ya pride, u can add some new flavor to ya ivy for dinner
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You been here since 2009, looks like you should have a lot of practice K
Apparently not – and rap is something you should LetGo…..download the app today
>>lol niiiice start!
This dude surrounded by L’s.… he'll fold quick in this type of environment
So I’ll make this fast– and hang K’p up………..like a hero’s retirement (cape)
>>dope wp!
I can blast at this kid all day – show all ya fans how I bust them quick shots
See I’ll show K ma shell…... like we airing an episode of Love & Hip Hop (K. Michelle)
>>not diggin this
KP verses is watered down… barely scratching the surface, but his fans rooting for K
Against me? They’ll hope that Kale sprout from the ground..after I put a boot to his face
>>lil forced but decent
I’ve seen March Madness… & I’m bout to cause it - leave many to cry in defeat
And only time he been involved with it..... is when he protests and riot the streets
>>weak finish
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scream at me, you dead in the street n stuffed in an ern
afraid of this nerd? the only scary dzaster on this site happens to be Dagels return
>>lol
u damn perv, u'll never excel wit rap, hand over the cash, turd
only studio you have been introduced to comes with a Microsoft office password
>>weak as fuQ
we at war and I'm a soldier, they know i'll bring em hell
they need a major force in Syria, and your punchlines would serve our country well
>>nah
u got STD's swallowing D as a child, that's that faggot grind
when your mom told you to pick a fruit, I'm pretty sure that's not what she had in mind
>>pause....but the endin was funny
punches land to hospital, digest ya food a little quicker
after I make you swallow ya pride, u can add some new flavor to ya ivy for dinner
>>light
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DzasteR
You been here since 2009, looks like you should have a lot of practice K
Apparently not – and rap is something you should LetGo…..download the app today
it's alright, nothing too strong for an opener, lol at it sounding like advertisement though
This dude surrounded by L’s.… he'll fold quick in this type of environment
So I’ll make this fast– and hang K’p up………..like a hero’s retirement (cape)
pretty cool play, not bad
I can blast at this kid all day – show all ya fans how I bust them quick shots
See I’ll show K ma shell…... like we airing an episode of Love & Hip Hop (K. Michelle)
This was dope, clean wording, nice nameplay/wordplay. Solid
KP verses is watered down… barely scratching the surface, but his fans rooting for K
Against me? They’ll hope that Kale sprout from the ground..after I put a boot to his face
Alright punch, the nameplay getting a bit repetitive for me
I’ve seen March Madness… & I’m bout to cause it - leave many to cry in defeat
And only time he been involved with it..... is when he protests and riot the streets
light closer
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KnowP
scream at me, you dead in the street n stuffed in an ern
afraid of this nerd? the only scary dzaster on this site happens to be Dagels return
okay punch
u damn perv, u'll never excel wit rap, hand over the cash, turd
only studio you have been introduced to comes with a Microsoft office password
light, i've seen tons and tons plays on the microsoft studio programs
we at war and I'm a soldier, they know i'll bring em hell
they need a major force in Syria, and your punchlines would serve our country well
it's alright, nothing heavy hitting
u got STD's swallowing D as a child, that's that faggot grind
when your mom told you to pick a fruit, I'm pretty sure that's not what she had in mind
lol pretty funny
punches land to hospital, digest ya food a little quicker
after I make you swallow ya pride, u can add some new flavor to ya ivy for dinner
a stretch, could have closed it a bit better
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MVGT: DzasteR - this was a pretty good read from both. I thought DzasteR's verse was clicking, he was a bit repetitive on the nameplay but his bars were sound and he brought good concepts with them. KnowP was consistent as well but his punches weren't creating the same impact for me. Good battle guys.
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Overall ima have to give this to Dzaster, his verse was slightly more creative n had one punch that I thought was good with a couple others verging on okay. One thing i have to say is dont spell out your wordplay for us.. if I dont understand I google to see if im missing something.
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