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Thread: DzasteR vs script0rrr

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    DzasteR vs script0rrr

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    Make sure you check in - don't forget them vote links

    G'L

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    Re: DzasteR vs script0rrr

    check, GL too

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    Re: DzasteR vs script0rrr

    check. i'll post soon - just made it to work.
    gonna post up hopefully in the next hour or so.

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    Re: DzasteR vs script0rrr

    Ready up!
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    Script0rrr get ready to get run over – this is the start for the marathon line
    Cuz I’m bout to deliver the quickest 1-2….…..faster than Amazon Prime
    Hits are outrageous, I’ll make you pay – the damage is taking a toll
    Facing a script?.…...more like I’ll just smother his face in a scroll
    Suffocate him – calmly and nonchalant – I’ll knock this bitch into a debutante
    And I’ll flip the script.… into an Arial so fast – like I changed the font
    You no match for me - you have no ounce of skill, not a trace in hell
    I'll expose you boy - and put script on display..............like HTML
    I'm reaching new heights with my skill - moving up so fast, with you in stride
    I know you reaching new heights too.............only to commit suicide
    10.

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    Re: DzasteR vs script0rrr

    I am ready

    Punches flyin wild windmills like a big bitch fight
    Sit tight write a couple quick lines, eyes shut big wide
    Thisll be over before ya know ya gettin hit by
    A mack truck wit raps stuffed to the seams now
    Talkin bout he want it three rounds, please clown
    This aint a licensed fight, this is a beat down
    You aint gone reply itll be half a round. Me, now.
    so dont elxplain y u got a long sleeve shirt under a short sleeve shirt
    We all get the picture, its a short three words; dork; dweeb; nerd
    An no u wont be eminem

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    Shit forgot the 10th line

    He went thru drug addiction, divorce an bein sued by his mom

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    Re: DzasteR vs script0rrr

    DzasteR

    Script0rrr get ready to get run over – this is the start for the marathon line
    Cuz I’m bout to deliver the quickest 1-2….…..faster than Amazon Prime
    this alright, cool concept, average punch though

    Hits are outrageous, I’ll make you pay – the damage is taking a toll
    Facing a script?.…...more like I’ll just smother his face in a scroll
    ehh not really feeling this bar

    Suffocate him – calmly and nonchalant – I’ll knock this bitch into a debutante
    And I’ll flip the script.… into an Arial so fast – like I changed the font
    Pretty cool concept, wording could have made the punch much better

    You no match for me - you have no ounce of skill, not a trace in hell
    I'll expose you boy - and put script on display..............like HTML
    didn't come off smooth or roll off the tongue, overall punch and concept are decent though.

    I'm reaching new heights with my skill - moving up so fast, with you in stride
    I know you reaching new heights too.............only to commit suicide
    okay way to close off a pretty consistent verse
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    script0rrr

    Punches flyin wild windmills like a big bitch fight
    Sit tight write a couple quick lines, eyes shut big wide
    not a punch, horrid bar

    Thisll be over before ya know ya gettin hit by
    A mack truck wit raps stuffed to the seams now
    terrible, first line going off of the first bars rhyme scheme then you change it in the second line. not really a punch either

    Talkin bout he want it three rounds, please clown
    This aint a licensed fight, this is a beat down
    no

    You aint gone reply itll be half a round. Me, now.
    so dont elxplain y u got a long sleeve shirt under a short sleeve shirt
    wtf?

    We all get the picture, its a short three words; dork; dweeb; nerd
    An no u wont be eminem
    doesn't rhyme
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    MVGT: DzasteR - Sorry you wasted your verse against this trollish shit he dropped.

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    Re: DzasteR vs script0rrr

    again, script didnt really come with punches here. hes just making statments rhyme below average verse here. lacking creativity a nd personals. D came with some played concepts but his wording and execution was going he actually hit his opponent.. Overall this battle was a quick read nothing stood out to me from either side but D had the better verse

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    Re: DzasteR vs script0rrr

    Get those voting links in or this battle will be closed.

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    Re: DzasteR vs script0rrr

    Script0rrr get ready to get run over – this is the start for the marathon line
    Cuz I’m bout to deliver the quickest 1-2….…..faster than Amazon Prime
    >>decent start

    Hits are outrageous, I’ll make you pay – the damage is taking a toll
    Facing a script?.…...more like I’ll just smother his face in a scroll
    >>lol nice hit

    Suffocate him – calmly and nonchalant – I’ll knock this bitch into a debutante
    And I’ll flip the script.… into an Arial so fast – like I changed the font
    >>dope np

    You no match for me - you have no ounce of skill, not a trace in hell
    I'll expose you boy - and put script on display..............like HTML
    >>okay

    I'm reaching new heights with my skill - moving up so fast, with you in stride
    I know you reaching new heights too.............only to commit suicide
    >>dope ending

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    Punches flyin wild windmills like a big bitch fight
    Sit tight write a couple quick lines, eyes shut big wide
    >>nothin

    Thisll be over before ya know ya gettin hit by
    A mack truck wit raps stuffed to the seams now
    Talkin bout he want it three rounds, please clown
    >>nah

    This aint a licensed fight, this is a beat down
    You aint gone reply itll be half a round. Me, now.
    >>just more n more tough talk

    so dont elxplain y u got a long sleeve shirt under a short sleeve shirt
    We all get the picture, its a short three words; dork; dweeb; nerd
    An no u wont be eminem
    >>horrible finish

    V- D (by a landslide)

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    Re: DzasteR vs script0rrr

    Script0rrr get ready to get run over – this is the start for the marathon line
    Cuz I’m bout to deliver the quickest 1-2….…..faster than Amazon Prime
    You got the idea of wording ya punches, you jus need better concepts
    Hits are outrageous, I’ll make you pay – the damage is taking a toll
    Facing a script?.…...more like I’ll just smother his face in a scroll
    this was a decent attempt, would've been more aggressive and harder hitting had you referred to him taking a whole script "of painpills" to the face or some shit
    Suffocate him – calmly and nonchalant – I’ll knock this bitch into a debutante
    And I’ll flip the script.… into an Arial so fast – like I changed the font
    I get it, this was kinda corny, yet creative at the same time. decent jab
    You no match for me - you have no ounce of skill, not a trace in hell
    I'll expose you boy - and put script on display..............like HTML
    again, decent nameplay
    I'm reaching new heights with my skill - moving up so fast, with you in stride
    I know you reaching new heights too.............only to commit suicide
    this is a miss for me

    vs

    Punches flyin wild windmills like a big bitch fight
    Sit tight write a couple quick lines, eyes shut big wide
    hell na
    Thisll be over before ya know ya gettin hit by
    A mack truck wit raps stuffed to the seams now
    your tryna rap like your on a beat or something, rhyme scheme and flow is decent, but not for battle rap
    Talkin bout he want it three rounds, please clown
    This aint a licensed fight, this is a beat down
    ehhh, best hit yet.. jab
    You aint gone reply itll be half a round. Me, now.
    so dont elxplain y u got a long sleeve shirt under a short sleeve shirt
    We all get the picture, its a short three words; dork; dweeb; nerd
    im confused, NO

    Overall: One of you have a better idea on how to formulate a punch then the other. DzasteR actually took shots at his opponent, got creative with concepts, and even if he dropped a played punch, he worded it effectively enough to get the hit across. D shows lots of potential and I got him taking this pretty easily.

    v/ DzasteR

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