kill them all...okay

[Kuhn]

This text shit use to determine who could write better
But kill them all should be the title to their suicide letter.
How you gonna diss a crew when we all just wondering.. "who is you?"
Calm down, pop a pill, smoke a spliff or two
While your at it grab a knife an slit your wrist in two!
You're my kid an you smell like shit mr potty pants
Go back to your fuckin corner before you get caught with these hands
I'll go off for 3 bands leave you coughing and bleeding to keep up with demands
But don't fret my nigga I'll kill YOU for free man.
Now let's talk about heart conditions since you brought that up,
You in a crew with the same faggot that lost his nuts
Cuz HIS dude stole HIS bitch and he CRYed while THEY fucked
That made his heart jump, maybe even faltered a little
Cuz he KNEW he'd never be a fucking father to THEIR baby
"Diggle".
He's been caught biting so many times then crying like a bitch,
His stolen verses are more scattered than the monsters on lilo and stitch!
But he's a real vet, he's taught us all so many things,
Like how to fuck up every relationship AFTER buying the wedding rings
That wack bitch is better off dead and if you two are related,
I suggest closing the crew now and forgetting you ever made it.

[iLL ScriptureZ]

That opener was pretty tough and you had a nice flow through the whole piece. potty pants line was uber whack tbh. Seemed very elementary. Bruh, I was gone when you said homie cried while they fucked. I just imagined sitting curled up at the end of the bed while he plowing his girl. I'm dead as fuck right now. That being the baby's father line could've been so much harder and took a minute to execute it. Other than that man this was okay.

[Soule]

This was pretty dope, good shit man.

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

I think it goes like this, you had some standout bars and you had some really stand down down bars. the flow was on point, ur writing was good, but ur puches or disses wasnt that harsh bro . id drop a 7./10

[_Lyrics]

what up YD LOL i dont think you were taking this too seriously yourself, but its fun to write like that sometimes though yea? especially in a diss, why do disses always have to be so technically serious all the time anyways. some hits were kind of weak, while i do appreciate some clever humor in a diss, there were some funny spots here in there and the flow was cool.

[whitesmoke96]

This text shit use to determine who could write better
But kill them all should be the title to their suicide letter.
^strong start, not bad
How you gonna diss a crew when we all just wondering.. "who is you?"
Calm down, pop a pill, smoke a spliff or two
^It started to get a bit weak here, and the next line being hard didn't gel well with no build up
While your at it grab a knife an slit your wrist in two!
You're my kid an you smell like shit mr potty pants
^this did seem "elementary" like a kid talking to a kid so unless you mean it and mean to spin it around
it's probably not the best mood if you're going for a hard approach.
Go back to your fuckin corner before you get caught with these hands
I'll go off for 3 bands leave you coughing and bleeding to keep up with demands
But don't fret my nigga I'll kill YOU for free man.
^first line here picked up. second line was meh, bit reachy. third was a recycled rhyme so I ain't een gotta say.
Now let's talk about heart conditions since you brought that up,
You in a crew with the same faggot that lost his nuts
Cuz HIS dude stole HIS bitch and he CRYed while THEY fucked
That made his heart jump, maybe even faltered a little
Cuz he KNEW he'd never be a fucking father to THEIR baby
"Diggle".
^^this part was good. funny, and I think if you kept more of the emotion that drove this part for the entire piece it would've helped it seem like a full piece.
He's been caught biting so many times then crying like a bitch,
His stolen verses are more scattered than the monsters on lilo and stitch!
^well this just shows your age or who you're trying to appeal to. references to family channel, really? lol.
But he's a real vet, he's taught us all so many things,
Like how to fuck up every relationship AFTER buying the wedding rings
That wack bitch is better off dead and if you two are related,
I suggest closing the crew now and forgetting you ever made it.

alright overall, it was a weak piece but it wasn't all that bad. you got something, hold onto it. maybe because it wasn't a serious piece you didn't take it all that seriously? idk, it does come across like you lack skill or are holding back at least