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    Voting for Slow people: Tutorial

    Nameplay: when u take someones name and develop it creatively into a punch.

    Example: only time ur bitch wanna cup of joe she drinking coffee in the morning

    Personals: when u know personal dirt on someone

    Example: im a security guard

    Wordplay: when someone takes a word and develops it creatively into a punch

    Example: u think this jihad like a,known terrorist

    G hard is the wordplay

    Metaphore: expressing a person place thing creatively

    Have u looking broker than homeless on the street

    More than......

    Similie: making a comparison person place thing

    Have u looking like trump with the toupe

    All retards check out this shit if u cant vote correctly sit the fuck down!

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    Re: Voting for Slow people: Tutorial

    thats not what a metaphor is. I mean sure its creative but thats just scratching the surface.

    Metaphor takes a word that can't be used literally and applies it to something to augment the imagery of what you're trying to say.

    For example: A sea of happy faces.

    Obviously people or faces can't be a sea since that a body of water.

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    Re: Voting for Slow people: Tutorial

    I have to agree with Fresh. Sea of Happy Faces is also personification as well.

    BTW the example you used: "Have u looking broker than homeless on the street" is a simile not a metaphor.

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    Re: Voting for Slow people: Tutorial

    Quote Originally Posted by The Law View Post
    I have to agree with Fresh. Sea of Happy Faces is also personification as well.

    BTW the example you used: "Have u looking broker than homeless on the street" is a simile not a metaphor.
    Word go explain to dude Bags he said there was a difference between using like as a metaphore

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    Re: Voting for Slow people: Tutorial

    Quote Originally Posted by Lamb Chawhp View Post
    Word go explain to dude Bags he said there was a difference between using like as a metaphore
    who is bags?

    like, as, as if, than, so... can all be used to create a simile.

    A metaphor is when you don't describe a similarity, instead with a metaphor the comparison is directly applied to something that it normally wouldn't be literally.

    Simile:
    Death waved him goodbye, his heart became as cold as a glacier dipped in the ocean

    metaphor:
    Death waved him goodbye, his heart became a glacier dipped in the ocean

    This is simple but it's the same thing on a broader scale. It's much harder to construct meaningful metaphors than it is simile's. Also were a simile can have lasting effects on a bar or two. Whole verses can be metaphors in themselves.

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    Re: Voting for Slow people: Tutorial

    Lol @ joey gettin schooled on his on thread!

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    Dont let 'em do u like that bruh!

    Say it wit ur chest!!!!

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    Re: Voting for Slow people: Tutorial

    lmfao, The Law jus stated facts. and his example was even fire haha.

    also, only to this nigga @Lamb Chawp would say Jihad=G Hard lmfao.. some real Boston shit right there. Jus know, if you ever spit that in a verse im calling this FORCED.... ALLLLL DAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!

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    Re: Voting for Slow people: Tutorial

    If you are using the words LIKE or AS, it's a SIMILE not a metaphor.

    This tutorial is ass, appreciate the effort tho and see what you are trying to do. I'll construct a more formal tutorial, if needed - Just holla.

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    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...VE-IMMEDIATELY!

    Not sure why this isn't being utilized. It delivers the message clear as day.

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    Re: Voting for Slow people: Tutorial

    Quote Originally Posted by Notti View Post
    lmfao, The Law jus stated facts. and his example was even fire haha.

    also, only to this nigga @Lamb Chawp would say Jihad=G Hard lmfao.. some real Boston shit right there. Jus know, if you ever spit that in a verse im calling this FORCED.... ALLLLL DAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!
    yeah before that I was trying to figure out how he thought "G Had" worked in that bar lol

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    Re: Voting for Slow people: Tutorial

    Quote Originally Posted by Notti View Post
    lmfao, The Law jus stated facts. and his example was even fire haha.

    also, only to this nigga @Lamb Chawp would say Jihad=G Hard lmfao.. some real Boston shit right there. Jus know, if you ever spit that in a verse im calling this FORCED.... ALLLLL DAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!
    I did,once yes lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by Amen View Post
    If you are using the words LIKE or AS, it's a SIMILE not a metaphor.

    This tutorial is ass, appreciate the effort tho and see what you are trying to do. I'll construct a more formal tutorial, if needed - Just holla.

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    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...VE-IMMEDIATELY!

    Not sure why this isn't being utilized. It delivers the message clear as day.
    Your upper lip is ass just edit what i did

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fresh View Post
    yeah before that I was trying to figure out how he thought "G Had" worked in that bar lol
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