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    The Universe - coming to a home near you


    Hypnotized pupils, dilate like flailing limbs
    stretched out for embrace.
    Nono technology, holding victims of the
    quantum slave trade for ransom.
    Sleek black mirrors, reflecting the
    empty void of their cavernous souls.

    Connections, at a distance...
    A virus in our systems,
    we type, never listen.

    Staple diet; megabytes,
    digesting memories in formatted configuration,
    curvaceous physique,
    caressing smooth, toned keys on out of tune organs;
    playing God whilst ingesting lines of code.

    Half life reality, brought to you by entrepreneurs
    of electromagnetic pulses.

    Iseek love via apps, expanding my horizons in solitude

    Particle matter is an antiquated concept,
    replace me with data, my emancipated soul rests.

    Those still taken with physical manifestation,
    return to your Lazarus like slumber.
    Transcend space and time, to realign
    their relative position.

    Shun mechanical organisms,
    And run the human race
    AI


    “ˇViva la Revolución!”

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    Re: The Universe - coming to a home near you

    nano technology*

    from your Lazarus like slumber*


    It wont let me edit for some reason.
    AI


    “ˇViva la Revolución!”

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    Re: The Universe - coming to a home near you

    I like this a lot. I am feeling that cybernetical feel about it. The fact that more and more we are shunning nature and diving into a binary world and letting its edges consume what was the norm. You bring some good mets and introspect with your representations. Even with the typos, you crafted a point in the imagery that stood out and made you focus on the problem that we are too dependent on technology. I does relate to your avi as it will be a revolution into getting away from this digital world and make strides into the living. All I can say is that I concur with the statement and thought that you presented it in a way that it should burn eyes to those who are reading it. Nice


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    Re: The Universe - coming to a home near you

    Lmao I was wondering what nono technology was

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