12 lines
due tommorow
@plethora
Voters:
Klass
Dzaster
Joe Boston
Diasick
plethora
12 lines
due tommorow
@plethora
Voters:
Klass
Dzaster
Joe Boston
Last edited by Donald Trump; April 4th, 2017 at 02:06 PM
Originally Posted by Toobs
u suck off guys to be accepted & thats not lies.. thats y'all life
got Toobs in ur mouth so much, nigga starting to look like Jim Ross wife
lets talk fight.. if u swing ima pull ur Card & handle the gun
so take a Swipe & get a couple of bucks back.. nigga that's capital one
bullets pumped into this stiff when im dumpin' with the clips
wont just Nick Diaz chest, shit'll leave it more sunken in than his
types slick at work, but when i come he'll shart his slacks
so talk funny til ur shaking at ur desk.. thats a Jerry Lawler heart attack
cant champ FL, so move it along. ur chance at a title's gone
just turn the Paige.. instead of gettin fucked everytime the spotlights on
gave mexican killers pesos.. that translates into crime does pay
they told me Dia de la muerte is spanish for his bitch ass gonna die today
pleth saying shit is whack is an irony, because his rapping is past week.
if he gives ronin hands, this faggot literally slapped him on the ass cheek.
if you see pleth win, its against joe boston or another scrub, aint that sad.
this dude talks big, then gets bodied by a kid, like combo in breaking bad.
you drop wrestling bars and claim to be dope that's skewing the facts.
if you won a title, it needs to be "jizzed on"... and "threw in the trash".
noobs like you ruin tournies with retarded votes, u bout to pay the price man.
you own wrestling action figures, so you can lour "boyznblack" to ya white van.
if you try to flip my name with that corny shit, I predict a failed line.
no one fucks w/ him, if they copped a ple deal, they was tryna avoid jail time.
take ya bars back to the drawing board, might as well put the chalk in ya mouth.
cause when it comes to this shit...
u're like a jealous wife acusing niggas of cheating, dont know wtf ya talkin about.
u suck off guys to be accepted & thats not lies.. thats y'all life
got Toobs in ur mouth so much, nigga starting to look like Jim Ross wife
>>ok start
lets talk fight.. if u swing ima pull ur Card & handle the gun
so take a Swipe & get a couple of bucks back.. nigga that's capital one
>>i got the scheme / wp, but its played out bro
bullets pumped into this stiff when im dumpin' with the clips
wont just Nick Diaz chest, shit'll leave it more sunken in than his
>>decent nameplay
types slick at work, but when i come he'll shart his slacks
so talk funny til ur shaking at ur desk.. thats a Jerry Lawler heart attack
>>nah..miss for me here.
cant champ FL, so move it along. ur chance at a title's gone
just turn the Paige.. instead of gettin fucked everytime the spotlights on
>>lol...kinda light tho
gave mexican killers pesos.. that translates into crime does pay
they told me Dia de la muerte is spanish for his bitch ass gonna die today
>>lol, this was decent, props on tryna be creative.
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pleth saying shit is whack is an irony, because his rapping is past week.
if he gives ronin hands, this faggot literally slapped him on the ass cheek.
>>wow i cant believe this is ur opening bar
if you see pleth win, its against joe boston or another scrub, aint that sad.
this dude talks big, then gets bodied by a kid, like combo in breaking bad.
>>i think joe boston would murder u now.. But anyways this bar was light at best
you drop wrestling bars and claim to be dope that's skewing the facts.
if you won a title, it needs to be "jizzed on"... and "threw in the trash".
>>no, this was just overall terrible
noobs like you ruin tournies with retarded votes, u bout to pay the price man.
you own wrestling action figures, so you can lour "boyznblack" to ya white van.
>>this actually made me laugh
if you try to flip my name with that corny shit, I predict a failed line.
no one fucks w/ him, if they copped a ple deal, they was tryna avoid jail time.
>>snooze-fest
take ya bars back to the drawing board, might as well put the chalk in ya mouth.
cause when it comes to this shit...
u're like a jealous wife acusing niggas of cheating, dont know wtf ya talkin about.
>>this closer was straight ass milk
V- plethy
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Last edited by Donald Trump; April 1st, 2017 at 06:19 PM
1-0
Plethora
u suck off guys to be accepted & thats not lies.. thats y'all life
got Toobs in ur mouth so much, nigga starting to look like Jim Ross wife
Lmao good reference and aim towards direct personal
lets talk fight.. if u swing ima pull ur Card & handle the gun
so take a Swipe & get a couple of bucks back.. nigga that's capital one
Im not liking the wording on this concept u had the idea going just not feeling how u worded the metaphore thats capital one took impact away from a potential hit
bullets pumped into this stiff when im dumpin' with the clips
wont just Nick Diaz chest, shit'll leave it more sunken in than his
Dope nameplay creative
types slick at work, but when i come he'll shart his slacks
so talk funny til ur shaking at ur desk.. thats a Jerry Lawler heart attack
Again the way ur wording the ending of the finisher takes impact from this
cant champ FL, so move it along. ur chance at a title's gone
just turn the Paige.. instead of gettin fucked everytime the spotlights on
Were u referencing a bob seiger song here lol wordplay was ok but overall soft hit
gave mexican killers pesos.. that translates into crime does pay
they told me Dia de la muerte is spanish for his bitch ass gonna die today
Not feeling this at all miss i get the Dia for spanish n shit but the word Dia,can be used in different aspects relating to spanish also.
Dia
Sorry wont let me paste
Opener here was very basic no impact at all. 2nd bar was ok liked the reference felt ur wording couldve been more polished on the finisher. Damn Dia whats good with the elementary bar.lmao at the boyznblack white van bar i enjoyed the humor factor. Ple deal forced nameplay here. It pla tora not plee thora miss for me. Damn closer played also.
Well shit not the Dia i used to see lots of rust according to elementary concepts just too basic as far as impact goes. The boyznblack bar only stood out to me. Plethora was a bit more creative opener was funny. That nick diaz np was dope af very creative. Overall i gotta give it to plethora for more consistency n creativity
V/plethora
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Plethora
u suck off guys to be accepted & thats not lies.. thats y'all life
got Toobs in ur mouth so much, nigga starting to look like Jim Ross wife
Harsh but not too bad
lets talk fight.. if u swing ima pull ur Card & handle the gun
so take a Swipe & get a couple of bucks back.. nigga that's capital one
Seen different variations of this punch, I liked the way you worded this
bullets pumped into this stiff when im dumpin' with the clips
wont just Nick Diaz chest, shit'll leave it more sunken in than his
Good nameplay
types slick at work, but when i come he'll shart his slacks
so talk funny til ur shaking at ur desk.. thats a Jerry Lawler heart attack
Not feeling this
cant champ FL, so move it along. ur chance at a title's gone
just turn the Paige.. instead of gettin fucked everytime the spotlights on
Still new here, but I follow. lol nice one
gave mexican killers pesos.. that translates into crime does pay
they told me Dia de la muerte is spanish for his bitch ass gonna die today
Good ender, this was creative
vs
Dia
pleth saying shit is whack is an irony, because his rapping is past week.
if he gives ronin hands, this faggot literally slapped him on the ass cheek.
Lol ok
if you see pleth win, its against joe boston or another scrub, aint that sad.
this dude talks big, then gets bodied by a kid, like combo in breaking bad.
Iffy - not bad but still not that great either
you drop wrestling bars and claim to be dope that's skewing the facts.
if you won a title, it needs to be "jizzed on"... and "threw in the trash".
Not feeling this
noobs like you ruin tournies with retarded votes, u bout to pay the price man.
you own wrestling action figures, so you can lour "boyznblack" to ya white van.
Setup could've been better but the punch was good
if you try to flip my name with that corny shit, I predict a failed line.
no one fucks w/ him, if they copped a ple deal, they was tryna avoid jail time.
Nice - think it could've hit harder man
take ya bars back to the drawing board, might as well put the chalk in ya mouth.
cause when it comes to this shit...
u're like a jealous wife acusing niggas of cheating, dont know wtf ya talkin about.
Weak ender
Punches were flying from Plethora. He added a lot of personal blows and used creative ways to make his hits work. Also, he was pretty consistent with the delivery of his hits and flow of the overall verse. Less misses than Dia. Dia had some decent hits as well but there were a few bars that lacked consistency and better sting with his punches. Think he could've hit harder if he had better wording on some bars. Overall, I think Plethora came harder.
v/ Plethora
3-0
u suck off guys to be accepted & thats not lies.. thats y'all life
got Toobs in ur mouth so much, nigga starting to look like Jim Ross wife
played
lets talk fight.. if u swing ima pull ur Card & handle the gun
so take a Swipe & get a couple of bucks back.. nigga that's capital one
nice
bullets pumped into this stiff when im dumpin' with the clips
wont just Nick Diaz chest, shit'll leave it more sunken in than his
nice
types slick at work, but when i come he'll shart his slacks
so talk funny til ur shaking at ur desk.. thats a Jerry Lawler heart attack
played
cant champ FL, so move it along. ur chance at a title's gone
just turn the Paige.. instead of gettin fucked everytime the spotlights on
lol
gave mexican killers pesos.. that translates into crime does pay
they told me Dia de la muerte is spanish for his bitch ass gonna die today
nah
vs
pleth saying shit is whack is an irony, because his rapping is past week.
if he gives ronin hands, this faggot literally slapped him on the ass cheek.
nah
if you see pleth win, its against joe boston or another scrub, aint that sad.
this dude talks big, then gets bodied by a kid, like combo in breaking bad.
nope
you drop wrestling bars and claim to be dope that's skewing the facts.
if you won a title, it needs to be "jizzed on"... and "threw in the trash".
nah
noobs like you ruin tournies with retarded votes, u bout to pay the price man.
you own wrestling action figures, so you can lour "boyznblack" to ya white van.
weak
if you try to flip my name with that corny shit, I predict a failed line.
no one fucks w/ him, if they copped a ple deal, they was tryna avoid jail time.
not feeling this
take ya bars back to the drawing board, might as well put the chalk in ya mouth.
cause when it comes to this shit...
u're like a jealous wife acusing niggas of cheating, dont know wtf ya talkin about.
weak
pleth easy
4-0
Pleth: Jim Ross lol, capital one,
Vs
Dia: combo was dope
Vote: klass
I thought combo was dope but klass had way better missed in my opinion. Some of dias lines were pretty bad. But combo was slick.
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