FL CONTENDER MATCH
10-20 lines
House rules
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Verses due Friday 11:59 PM PST
@Kill Spree @Dzaster
Kill Spree
DzasteR
FL CONTENDER MATCH
10-20 lines
House rules
Check in due Wednesday 11:59 PM PST
Verses due Friday 11:59 PM PST
@Kill Spree @Dzaster
Last edited by Donald Trump; April 2nd, 2017 at 12:04 AM
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Check. How many lines we doing? Says 10-20 but what we matching
10-12 keep it simple
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@Dzaster you able to sign in bro?
I can't sign in under my original account. Idk what happened. Can we extend til tomorrow?
@Donald Trump @Notti I'm cool with this I just ok'd him telling him his password to his account we retrieved
I'm here. I got in on the original account. I'm bout to key up a verse.
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I’d bury him with a quick key, punches fly faster than bullets so make way
It’s hard to believe that all the shots you throw don’t land much, Aye K?
How Sway? This guy’s a mod too? Bet everyone on the board hates this bum
I got a Storm Bruin, you'll catch 12 to the chest – & really rep the state you from
I'm a true Patriot - see nobody here likes him..and I’m betting he’s a phony
I'll embarrass you til everybody wanna Bouquet…....like wedding ceremonies
Why you even here? Just pull a no show – I’m something you just can’t touch
I’d tell you to just run-on….…..but it seems ya punches do that enough
Long ass lines, ya opponents should be awarded for their patience and suchOriginally Posted by Kill Spree
Cuz KS is literally the joke gone wrong…..and we’re still waiting for the punch
You can kiss your career goodbye, cant catch a break even with a fishing nets
And see every kiss begins with K........and this here is the kiss of death
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Teams of Massachusetts, 12 = Tom Brady - 12 lines
Originally Posted by His bar vs Late BloomerOriginally Posted by DzastR vote in my battle vs ScriptorrOriginally Posted by Dzaster1
Listen faggot....
You beat a few heads...fact its only dudes? is a sign of gay
Sex Ed you thought of Late Bloomer..cos Girls dont spring tuh give you the time of day
& that vote^^^ I had you thinkin you dope..this joke is choking
I took the top off Script.. now do the same thing & die from Overdosing
Or this beat downs ya own ass fault! You making hits? Stop it
We'll never see Detour But I'll guide the faggot down a road to quick loses
Punch dude in the cheek have this alias Broke in the knees
Ironic you Cap D/R in ya name.. cos thats the highlight of every vote you've received
Spree sharp W/the punches, Gut shots cos you the worst on the site
Soon as one Lancet will feel like ya sturnums got cut open W/a surgical knife
Shoulda kept your account deleted, cos ya life is soon ta go
If you blame Trumpets a joke, But I'll make sure one plays @ yuh funeral
D
, punches fly faster than bullets so make way
It’s hard to believe that all the shots you throw don’t land much, Aye K?
Im not really feeling these first initial np attempts to me i just dont think its creative
How Sway? This guy’s a mod too? Bet everyone on the board hates this bum
I got a Storm Bruin, you'll catch 12 to the chest – & really rep the state you from
Ok decent wordplay good personal flip
I'm a true Patriot - see nobody here likes him..and I’m betting he’s a phony
I'll embarrass you til everybody wanna Bouquet…....like wedding ceremonies
Again Boo K yes u tried to be more fancier with the np but still its very basic and non creative to use the first initial of a name and try to create a nameplay
Why you even here? Just pull a no show – I’m something you just can’t touch
I’d tell you to just run-on….…..but it seems ya punches do that enough
Played
Quote Originally Posted by Kill Spree
Every verse from you needs a touch up, You'll say its not fair
You'll never champ, But if you put Not On ya back? I'll blast ya head off in a massage chair
Long ass lines, ya opponents should be awarded for their patience and such
Cuz KS is literally the joke gone wrong…..and we’re still waiting for the punch
Basic flip no impact here
You can kiss your career goodbye, cant catch a break even with a fishing nets
And see every kiss begins with K........and this here is the kiss of death
Played
KS
Listen faggot....
You beat a few heads...fact its only dudes? is a sign of gay
Sex Ed you thought of Late Bloomer..cos Girls dont spring tuh give you the time of day
Wasnt feeling this display of wording on finisher landed a miss here
& that vote^^^ I had you thinkin you dope..this joke is choking
I took the top off Script.. now do the same thing & die from Overdosing
Ok good flip decent wordplay direct hit
Or this beat downs ya own ass fault! You making hits? Stop it
We'll never see Detour But I'll guide the faggot down a road to quick loses
Again these initial np attempts dont do it for me the flip off it was cool but i just find it uncreative
Punch dude in the cheek have this alias Broke in the knees
Ironic you Cap D/R in ya name.. cos thats the highlight of every vote you've received
Nah wasnt feeling this again non creative
Spree sharp W/the punches, Gut shots cos you the worst on the site
Soon as one Lancet will feel like ya sturnums got cut open W/a surgical knife
Seen this wordplay before this was a cool attempt direct hit nice flip slight forced some will say
Shoulda kept your account deleted, cos ya life is soon ta go
If you blame Trumpets a joke, But I'll make sure one plays @ yuh funeral
Set up was off as well as rhyme scheme finisher was ok as far as the wordplay
Well D had a bunch of basic initial np flips which missed for me. I just felt there was no creativeness in it. Kill Spree same with the detour and dr flips just overall basic. Script n Lancet was cool which slightly gave him the edge to make up for the misses. All i liked from D was the storm bruin bar.
V/Kill Spree slightly more consistent
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How Sway? This guy’s a mod too? Bet everyone on the board hates this bum
I got a Storm Bruin, you'll catch 12 to the chest – & really rep the state you from
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& that vote^^^ I had you thinkin you dope..this joke is choking
I took the top off Script.. now do the same thing & die from Overdosing
imho not very good for a contenders match...Kill had some decent attempts but wording killed you guys..i saw alot of regular ass wordplay,...no punches.. if youre gonna wordplay word it into a punch or harsh direct...
lacc luster battle,
vote- KS for better attempts
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I’d bury him with a quick key, punches fly faster than bullets so make way
It’s hard to believe that all the shots you throw don’t land much, Aye K?
nah
How Sway? This guy’s a mod too? Bet everyone on the board hates this bum
I got a Storm Bruin, you'll catch 12 to the chest – & really rep the state you from
dope
I'm a true Patriot - see nobody here likes him..and I’m betting he’s a phony
I'll embarrass you til everybody wanna Bouquet…....like wedding ceremonies
eh
Why you even here? Just pull a no show – I’m something you just can’t touch
I’d tell you to just run-on….…..but it seems ya punches do that enough
I don't get what your going with this my bad
Long ass lines, ya opponents should be awarded for their patience and such
Cuz KS is literally the joke gone wrong…..and we’re still waiting for the punch
I like this
You can kiss your career goodbye, cant catch a break even with a fishing nets
And see every kiss begins with K........and this here is the kiss of death
eh
vs.
You beat a few heads...fact its only dudes? is a sign of gay
Sex Ed you thought of Late Bloomer..cos Girls dont spring tuh give you the time of day
dope but wording was off
& that vote^^^ I had you thinkin you dope..this joke is choking
I took the top off Script.. now do the same thing & die from Overdosing
eh
Or this beat downs ya own ass fault! You making hits? Stop it
We'll never see Detour But I'll guide the faggot down a road to quick loses
ok
Punch dude in the cheek have this alias Broke in the knees
Ironic you Cap D/R in ya name.. cos thats the highlight of every vote you've received
good hit
Spree sharp W/the punches, Gut shots cos you the worst on the site
Soon as one Lancet will feel like ya sturnums got cut open W/a surgical knife
good
Shoulda kept your account deleted, cos ya life is soon ta go
If you blame Trumpets a joke, But I'll make sure one plays @ yuh funeral
dope
v/spree cuz he had more hits
Dzaster: I didn't get the ak reference, are u talking about Allen knight or the weapon itself.. if it's the weapon then yea it was decent. Rep the state. Bouquet was cool. Could have structured it better. Run on could have been good but the wording was bad. Wasn't feeling waiting for the punch.. kiss begins with k I've seen before.
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Ks: late bloomer I wasn't feeling.. overdosing was fire. Detour played. D/R was okay.. surgical knife was also okay. Trumpet was wack to me
Overall: this was a nice read imo... ks had some bad wording in some of his punches which really took away from what could have been a jab/or punch .. where dzasters wording was really crisp. A couple typos but I knew what he meant.. cool battle here KIR..
Vote: DZ
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