God or Man

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A pension for pestilence withering evidentiary cognizance
Fogging opulence to opaque cemeteries of abolishment
Chasing Catholicism down a bottomless commonness
Then the pompousness fraudulently support dominance
Now consciousness follows an ominous omnibus
Who prophetess prominence is profitless in somnolence
Lacking the populace confidence, religious lose watchfulness
And the consequence is the populus hiding wantonness

Shivving Leviticus, life's brittleness is bibulous
Fickleness imminence is limitless with insolence
Acidulous to simpleness, its singleness is sinfulness
Frivolously villainous, stimulus contain pure wickedness
Invoking diffidence as if it was a resilient dissident
Time minuteness is diligence's impotence caught in blissfulness
Various Pythonesses creates a spiritless synthesis
Where vigilance willfulness has embraced wistfulness......

What's biblical is no longer bridgeable
This state is clinically criminal yet pivotal
The minimal subliminal are cryptically critical
Miserable imbeciles can dispatch the difficult
Livable miracles can have us reach the pinnacle
Our actions must be biddable not fictional
Removing the quizzical nature from being cynical
Will make the thinkable invincible against the despicable

Watch how these idea's corrasion erase damnation
Flames of the devil quelled in caissons of frustration
Invoke cessation of the complacent nation.....
Maven's dissuasion being the answer to the equation....

We are of God or not Man...

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Wooooo! there is some high level writing going on in om, why have i been sleeping lmao. bro, your language usages are fucking crazy, i cant believe how you twisted some of it up, ominous omnibus, lmao forreal? i am really impressed 143! this is one of your better pieces of creative wording showcases, as it was all for the most part tangible to the topic and using extensive vocab to bring some interesting points to life. As far as the vocab running deep, without having a seasoned diction, it would be a struggle to read through something like this to a smooth effect, you are mr. vocab though and the rhymes ran well. the last two stanza really brought a bit more directness into scope and kind of tied the heavy contemplations together a bit. thanks for the read!

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Wooooo! there is some high level writing going on in om, why have i been sleeping lmao. bro, your language usages are fucking crazy, i cant believe how you twisted some of it up, ominous omnibus, lmao forreal? i am really impressed 143! this is one of your better pieces of creative wording showcases, as it was all for the most part tangible to the topic and using extensive vocab to bring some interesting points to life. As far as the vocab running deep, without having a seasoned diction, it would be a struggle to read through something like this to a smooth effect, you are mr. vocab though and the rhymes ran well. the last two stanza really brought a bit more directness into scope and kind of tied the heavy contemplations together a bit. thanks for the read!

Thanks this was a venting piece on the situation that I was dealing with. Really wanted to have a heavy laden verse of multi syllable wording with a true meaning and not just show that I can rhyme with them all. Then next one will make this one look like a nursery rhyme....