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[143]

HE DID IT WITHOUT MY PERMISSION
LIKE THE SEVERITY OF IT ALL WOULD BE MUTED WITHOUT ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
ABOLISHING THE VERY STANZAS THAT WILL RECUPERATE MY SOUL
SELFISHLY BLIND
BITCH
YOU FUCKING ASSHOLE
HOW DARE YOU LEAVE WITHOUT A CALL
MAKE ME FEEL LIKE I HAVE TIME WHEN YOU ALREADY BROKEN THE HOURGLASS
FUCKING ASSHOLE
AND YOU WONDERED HOW I COULD HATE YOU FOR SO MANY YEARS
HOW I CAN SPITE YOUR WAYS EVEN THOUGH THE PUBLIC EYE HAS DON YOU WITH WHITE ROBES OF INNOCENSE
THEY DON'T KNOW THE DIRTY INNUENDOES YOU PULLED TO FUCK THE SYSTEM IN YOUR FAVOR
BUT LOVE YOU UNCONDITIONALLY AND YOU PULL THIS SHIT SO THAT YOU CAN BE AT PEACE
WHAT ABOUT US YOU MOTHERFUCKING SELFISH PRICK
YOU BITCH MADE SUCKER
THE WEIGHT OF YOUR WORDS CAN NEVER STICK TO MY MEMORY
FIGHT YOU SAY
BUT YOU TAPPED OUT
LITERALLY
YOU MUTHERFUCKA
I HOPE THAT IT WAS WORTH IT
LEAVE PAIN IN THE TRAILS YOU BLAZE
FUUUUUUCCCCCCKKKKKKK YYYYOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUU

[Emily]

This breaks my heart.
It speaks loud and clear, there really is no misunderstanding of emotions.
And you've got some amazing lines.
And the fact that it's all shouted makes it so in ya face, such a slap, if it were a slap,
it'd be a massive back-hander.

I wanted to break it down, and I did, and I wondered if I was being too open, if you know what I mean,
and then suddenly all the feed just disappeared. So I figured that maybe I'd take a different approach.
I'm finding it hard to feed this atm. In fact I found it hard not only to feed but to read as well.
I think it's tearing up emotions.

What stood out to me was the sheer frustration at the situation. Your anger and resentment and rage
and temper was on show in this piece. It was well done. Those emotions were well done 143.

Thank you for this piece, and I'm sorry.