Medical Procedure

[Conceptual]

[Horrocore Remix]



first off.. I'll say it's too blatant
to have patients chained up in basements
I rather show em the pain of erasement

despair gives off a faint scent, kind of fresh
a time to test, how to dissect a mind from flesh
I'm inclined to press.. all known bounds of biology
mind to matter reveals the grounds of psychology

observe heart rates no longer oscillating stable
relax, this doctor is able at the operating table
vital organs functioning by propagating cables

off to a blissful start, check the list of parts
don't resist, be smart, just lay still as wrists departs
your legs are shaking dude, guess I have to break em too
I'm simply removing the source of misery like aching tooths

it may be cruel, yet I need to induce more harm
as the pale skin is teared off along with your forearms
surgery success so far, four limbs reduced to four scars

I placed em in some old jars where I dumped some feet
anatomically speaking.. currently your're a lump of meat
the patient is a clump of beef - that's a proper diagnostics
it seems noxious, as I rip out those optics by the sockets

blood sucking tubes and wires keeps things functioning
your chest is where the juncture is, the lungs puncturing
and now I gotta chisel at your face like a drunk sculpturist

facial structure rifts
the scalpel works
so the pain starts

I hear crying, gotta remove that lame talk with a chain saw
through a plain straw, faint breathing, noises in weird forms
the last thing you ever hear before I chip away your eardrums



stuck in the cerebrum, a distressed consciousness, it's cold serious
this medical experiment made physical agony your sole experience
you want to die desperatley, sorry.. please don't take it personally
your brain linked to a machine observing stress levels for eternity..

[_Lyrics]

hell yeah! Conceptual this was a pretty wicked read right here. thought the flow read real slick, and definitely my type of pace of things, the internal multis were definitely carrying things on quite smoothly, sadly, I really wasnt a fan of the structure, all the breaks and the 4 line 3 line play offs, it was a little confusing and left me wanting a 4th to wrap up the double bar, anyways thats just some petty picky shit, but if you continued a deep rhyme scheme into 4 lines fully developed it makes some great impact as a reader, and translates great into audio. as far as the topic and the content, you kept it pretty true to sick hostel type of vibe, and I definitely fucked with some of the dark imagery displays. your 2nd, 3rd and 7th stanzas definitely stuck out to me as the highlights of this write and brought a deeper level to this twisted dive in, especially the psychology aspects. a preserved brain subjected to pain lol, sounds like a 1950s movie, thanks for the read!!

[mal diction]

procedure

[Conceptual]

hell yeah! Conceptual this was a pretty wicked read right here. thought the flow read real slick, and definitely my type of pace of things, the internal multis were definitely carrying things on quite smoothly, sadly, I really wasnt a fan of the structure, all the breaks and the 4 line 3 line play offs, it was a little confusing and left me wanting a 4th to wrap up the double bar, anyways thats just some petty picky shit, but if you continued a deep rhyme scheme into 4 lines fully developed it makes some great impact as a reader, and translates great into audio. as far as the topic and the content, you kept it pretty true to sick hostel type of vibe, and I definitely fucked with some of the dark imagery displays. your 2nd, 3rd and 7th stanzas definitely stuck out to me as the highlights of this write and brought a deeper level to this twisted dive in, especially the psychology aspects. a preserved brain subjected to pain lol, sounds like a 1950s movie, thanks for the read!!

Thanks for the feedback man! It's some wacky structure indeed.

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procedure

You're indeed right my main elephant dude!

[A Disciple]

Omg I wanna throw up �� Good post but dang

[Emily]

I need time to feed this tomorrow.
Its late and im exhausted. had a long day at work and wasnt able to log on.
It's too good to not touch base with it at least.

Ill do it tomorrow.

[seness]

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[A Disciple]

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