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Thread: B Dot LESNAR vs. Plethora[BROKE WINS)

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    B Dot LESNAR vs. Plethora[BROKE WINS)

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    Re: B Dot LESNAR vs. Plethora

    Check.

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    Re: B Dot LESNAR vs. Plethora

    B Dot LESNAR aka Broke Lesnar aka ALIENS

    Quote Originally Posted by B Dot LESNAR View Post
    I consider myself a vet because I've been around the text battle scene since 1995. That's 22 years

    Damn ur old..

    u use a walking stick to get around, til i put it thru this geezers face
    gonna see a Cain go right thru Lesnar that'll take u back to his ufc days
    got that Aliens name from looks, not being active handlin' ratchets
    closest we seen to an Alien shootin during drill time was sam cassell in practice
    hide in the back for the right time to attack, then beat him down
    so when u see a nigga Lie in Wait, aint joe boston saying he's only 300 pounds
    fag came back around for textcee love ❤, from dudes thats brand new
    so when you see Ink going down the middle of Lesnars chest, its not a tattoo
    axe thru B Dot throat til its pieces of corned beef, something gory
    so once i cut open his head Anecdotal know im not making up stories
    chrome in backpack. wont be Broke when i give a bag full of nickel-plateds
    gonna hear loud bangs coming from the sack, like ur girl everytime i tickle anus
    so when his fam sees blood on B Lesnars shirt it'll cause anguish
    leave red stains on BLT that ain't ketchup from a joe boston sandwich
    i hang w/ niggas that'll put Dots in a box like candy & give this Nerd the .40
    so it aint star gazing when the scope blows Dot up like griffith observatory
    if we beef'n, u'll get that trigger noise cuz my boys armed like marines
    all you'll hear is clickin sounds when it goes down.. thats a coinstar machine


    @B Dot LESNAR
    sorry i went 18 lines. i'll edit down if u want or u can match.

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    Re: B Dot LESNAR vs. Plethora

    it's clear u love to post gay wrestling bars, me? i fancy bitches often
    ur girl thinks we're a pretty decent match, in bed she's always chanting this is awesome
    u approach gorgeous women and get denied, ur greeted with attitude
    he butthurt cuz whenever acute tendonitis pain, she gets that repeatedly slapping dude
    so just admit ur a fucking loser, ur dirt poor with significant cash debt
    bitch please ur family's estate has a barrenness even cobra wouldn't consider an asset
    knowp straight floored ur racist ass, ur white trash and an avid junkie
    since pleth's a goofy wigga who thinks he's black, i'll pull the simian blast this monkey
    btw ur forced wordplays suck, i hope this dumb/predictable lame quits
    it's ironic u called urself plethora, cuz u always drop a shitload of unoriginal nameflips

    Quote Originally Posted by plethora View Post
    if one of u bitches Lunge at me, im shooting the bazooka
    so Step Klass & see big arms waiving like joe boston doing zumba
    ur gbl finals verse was dull, tied with siq and then the voters snoozed
    talmbout bazookas in a fitness theme, this hackneyed to learn his gunbars is overused
    get right and pray to god for forgiveness, lose the ratchets and blades
    trust me pleth someday ur going to find elysian, and realize ur a stupid faggot with aids
    u flopped in the latest cypher, i won't stop til this clever dork is wowed
    shit the way u butchered all ur corny rebuttals, would even make dexter morgan proud
    notti bodied u in a fl champ match, u don't want a candid talk with me
    u sure emphasized some brutal ragdoll physics, cuz all of ur punches landed awkwardly

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    Re: B Dot LESNAR vs. Plethora[Open For Votes]

    Pleth: ufc days, anecdotal was fire, Griffith observatory.

    Vs

    Lesnar: tendinitis was dope, cobra, unoriginal name flips, Elysian lol, rag doll.


    Overall: once I read pleths verse def thought he got this, but I was very wrong, if this is the same Lesnar I know then it's dope to see dude battling again.. but yea les clearly outpunched pleth threw the whole verse.. this lived up to be a dope battle don't get me wrong, but some of pleths lines fell flat, for everyone of pleths misses les had a killer personal. Dope battle tho

    Vote: b les

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    Re: B Dot LESNAR vs. Plethora[Open For Votes]

    u use a walking stick to get around, til i put it thru this geezers face
    gonna see a Cain go right thru Lesnar that'll take u back to his ufc days
    got that Aliens name from looks, not being active handlin' ratchets
    closest we seen to an Alien shootin during drill time was sam cassell in practice
    xe thru B Dot throat til its pieces of corned beef, something gory
    so once i cut open his head Anecdotal know im not making up stories
    i hang w/ niggas that'll put Dots in a box like candy & give this Nerd the .40
    so it aint star gazing when the scope blows Dot up like griffith observatory
    if we beef'n, u'll get that trigger noise cuz my boys armed like marines
    all you'll hear is clickin sounds when it goes down.. thats a coinstar machine


    vs


    u approach gorgeous women and get denied, ur greeted with attitude
    he butthurt cuz whenever acute tendonitis pain, she gets that repeatedly slapping dude
    so just admit ur a fucking loser, ur dirt poor with significant cash debt
    bitch please ur family's estate has a barrenness even cobra wouldn't consider an asset
    knowp straight floored ur racist ass, ur white trash and an avid junkie
    since pleth's a goofy wigga who thinks he's black, i'll pull the simian blast this monkey
    u flopped in the latest cypher, i won't stop til this clever dork is wowed
    shit the way u butchered all ur corny rebuttals, would even make dexter morgan proud



    really good battle here. felt B dont had a few forced wp that didnt end well imo. Plethora had some bars that didnt hit but several i liked.
    close battle and will go either way based off preference.

    v. plethora


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    Re: B Dot LESNAR vs. Plethora[Open For Votes]

    u use a walking stick to get around, til i put it thru this geezers face
    gonna see a Cain go right thru Lesnar that'll take u back to his ufc days
    dope
    got that Aliens name from looks, not being active handlin' ratchets
    closest we seen to an Alien shootin during drill time was sam cassell in practice
    lmao dude i feel like I've seen this concept before but sam cassell being ugly gets me everyrtime
    hide in the back for the right time to attack, then beat him down
    so when u see a nigga Lie in Wait, aint joe boston saying he's only 300 pounds
    wordy a bit forced here.
    fag came back around for textcee love ❤, from dudes thats brand new
    so when you see Ink going down the middle of Lesnars chest, its not a tattoo
    not bad
    axe thru B Dot throat til its pieces of corned beef, something gory
    so once i cut open his head Anecdotal know im not making up stories
    somethings off here
    chrome in backpack. wont be Broke when i give a bag full of nickel-plateds
    gonna hear loud bangs coming from the sack, like ur girl everytime i tickle anus
    missed
    so when his fam sees blood on B Lesnars shirt it'll cause anguish
    leave red stains on BLT that ain't ketchup from a joe boston sandwich
    na forced... killing joe boston here doe
    i hang w/ niggas that'll put Dots in a box like candy & give this Nerd the .40
    so it aint star gazing when the scope blows Dot up like griffith observatory
    cool i liked this
    if we beef'n, u'll get that trigger noise cuz my boys armed like marines
    all you'll hear is clickin sounds when it goes down.. thats a coinstar machine
    not much sting here decent though..


    vs

    it's clear u love to post gay wrestling bars, me? i fancy bitches often
    ur girl thinks we're a pretty decent match, in bed she's always chanting this is awesome
    cool flip
    u approach gorgeous women and get denied, ur greeted with attitude
    he butthurt cuz whenever acute tendonitis pain, she gets that repeatedly slapping dude
    nope
    so just admit ur a fucking loser, ur dirt poor with significant cash debt
    bitch please ur family's estate has a barrenness even cobra wouldn't consider an asset
    dope
    knowp straight floored ur racist ass, ur white trash and an avid junkie
    since pleth's a goofy wigga who thinks he's black, i'll pull the simian blast this monkey
    cool
    btw ur forced wordplays suck, i hope this dumb/predictable lame quits
    it's ironic u called urself plethora, cuz u always drop a shitload of unoriginal nameflips
    this coulda been better imo ... the wording was off still like the idea

    Quote Originally Posted by plethora View Post
    if one of u bitches Lunge at me, im shooting the bazooka
    so Step Klass & see big arms waiving like joe boston doing zumba

    ur gbl finals verse was dull, tied with siq and then the voters snooze
    talmbout bazookas in a fitness theme, this hackneyed to learn his gunbars is overused
    cool
    get right and pray to god for forgiveness, lose the ratchets and blades
    trust me pleth someday ur going to find elysian, and realize ur a stupid faggot with aids
    dope
    u flopped in the latest cypher, i won't stop til this clever dork is wowed
    shit the way u butchered all ur corny rebuttals, would even make dexter morgan proud
    cool idea ,.. fell flat for me though
    notti bodied u in a fl champ match, u don't want a candid talk with me
    u sure emphasized some brutal ragdoll physics, cuz all of ur punches landed awkwardly
    not baddd


    well this was a cool battle.. broke it down both had some dope hits and some misses.... really close....

    pleth opened dope but consistency wasn't there.. thought the same for BDOT but 18 lines is a bunch your do for some misses..
    stand out lines from plethora the UFC line the Sam Cassell one and the observatory line... from bdot the opener was a cool flip the cobra and the elysian line i think was dope..

    going with consistency

    vote Bdot felt his punches connected more and had less misses... good battle.

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    Re: B Dot LESNAR vs. Plethora[Open For Votes]

    u use a walking stick to get around, til i put it thru this geezers face
    gonna see a Cain go right thru Lesnar that'll take u back to his ufc days
    axe thru B Dot throat til its pieces of corned beef, something gory
    so once i cut open his head Anecdotal know im not making up stories
    i hang w/ niggas that'll put Dots in a box like candy & give this Nerd the .40
    so it aint star gazing when the scope blows Dot up like griffith observatory
    if we beef'n, u'll get that trigger noise cuz my boys armed like marines
    all you'll hear is clickin sounds when it goes down.. thats a coinstar machine


    Bro that tickle anus and tattoo line was literally wack as a bad fuck, I felt like I paid for sex wit a prostitute and couldn't even fit my dick in or something idk-, complete misses frfr but..
    These lines I quoted were Dope, well thought out and well delivered. N honestly that coinstar punch would've been one of the best gun bars I've heard in a long time wit a better set up(something that referenced money). Overall very nice drop, 8.5/10 on a scale, with only those two misses.

    V.s

    knowp straight floored ur racist ass, ur white trash and an avid junkie
    since pleth's a goofy wigga who thinks he's black, i'll pull the simian blast this monkey
    btw ur forced wordplays suck, i hope this dumb/predictable lame quits
    it's ironic u called urself plethora, cuz u always drop a shitload of unoriginal nameflips

    The personal set up and the simian word play here was nice, as well as the rhyme scheme and attempted personal finish in the closing bar. 4/10 on a scale. The rest of you verse may have been decent versus lesser bars but pales in comparison to your opponents, like really in a skin tone battle to the darkest, you would've been Snow White to his Pocahantas or something idk.

    V/Plethora


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    Re: B Dot LESNAR vs. Plethora[Open For Votes]

    Neither verse impressed me however, I felt Plethora came a little bit wittier with his punches so.... v/Plethora

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    Re: B Dot LESNAR vs. Plethora[Open For Votes]

    u use a walking stick to get around, til i put it thru this geezers face
    gonna see a Cain go right thru Lesnar that'll take u back to his ufc days
    axe thru B Dot throat til its pieces of corned beef, something gory
    so once i cut open his head Anecdotal know im not making up stories
    i hang w/ niggas that'll put Dots in a box like candy & give this Nerd the .40
    so it aint star gazing when the scope blows Dot up like griffith observatory
    if we beef'n, u'll get that trigger noise cuz my boys armed like marines
    all you'll hear is clickin sounds when it goes down.. thats a coinstar machine


    vs


    so just admit ur a fucking loser, ur dirt poor with significant cash debt
    bitch please ur family's estate has a barrenness even cobra wouldn't consider an asset
    knowp straight floored ur racist ass, ur white trash and an avid junkie
    since pleth's a goofy wigga who thinks he's black, i'll pull the simian blast this monkey
    btw ur forced wordplays suck, i hope this dumb/predictable lame quits
    it's ironic u called urself plethora, cuz u always drop a shitload of unoriginal nameflips
    get right and pray to god for forgiveness, lose the ratchets and blades
    trust me pleth someday ur going to find elysian, and realize ur a stupid faggot with aids
    notti bodied u in a fl champ match, u don't want a candid talk with me
    u sure emphasized some brutal ragdoll physics, cuz all of ur punches landed awkwardly



    Wow! I like the intensity each battler brought. Plethora had a few bars that didn't really connect well, I think overall he had the most inconsistent bars and didn't really hit like he could've with them. The Lie N Wait bar wasn't all that great and the Joe Boston sandwich wasn't really a hit on B Dot honestly. The bars I chose above were the hardest I thought the two put out. I think B Dot had the most hits and the better punches in this battle.

    v/ B Dot

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    Re: B Dot LESNAR vs. Plethora[Open For Votes]

    Pleth


    u use a walking stick to get around, til i put it thru this geezers face
    gonna see a Cain go right thru Lesnar that'll take u back to his ufc days
    Cool wordplay usage and creative reference in finish setup couldve been better

    got that Aliens name from looks, not being active handlin' ratchets
    closest we seen to an Alien shootin during drill time was sam cassell in practice 
    Hes,ugly lol but shit anyone ugly motherfucker can be labeled as an Alien

    hide in the back for the right time to attack, then beat him down
    so when u see a nigga Lie in Wait, aint joe boston saying he's only 300 pounds
    Im 225 but i didnt really like the reference with the lie in wait wordplay

    fag came back around for textcee love ❤, from dudes thats brand new
    so when you see Ink going down the middle of Lesnars chest, its not a tattoo
    Thought the finisher was too predictable

    axe thru B Dot throat til its pieces of corned beef, something gory
    so once i cut open his head Anecdotal know im not making up stories
    Np seemed bit forced

    chrome in backpack. wont be Broke when i give a bag full of nickel-plateds
    gonna hear loud bangs coming from the sack, like ur girl everytime i tickle anus
    Lol no

    so when his fam sees blood on B Lesnars shirt it'll cause anguish 
    leave red stains on BLT that ain't ketchup from a joe boston sandwich
    Another weak reference for me i dont even like blts lol


    i hang w/ niggas that'll put Dots in a box like candy & give this Nerd the .40
    so it aint star gazing when the scope blows Dot up like griffith observatory
    Dope af such a creative hit with the np



    if we beef'n, u'll get that trigger noise cuz my boys armed like marines
    all you'll hear is clickin sounds when it goes down.. thats a coinstar machine
    Not feeling it

    Bdot


    it's clear u love to post gay wrestling bars, me? i fancy bitches often
    ur girl thinks we're a pretty decent match, in bed she's always chanting this is awesome
    Lmao nice flip

    u approach gorgeous women and get denied, ur greeted with attitude
    he butthurt cuz whenever acute tendonitis pain, she gets that repeatedly slapping dude
    Not feeling the wordplay

    so just admit ur a fucking loser, ur dirt poor with significant cash debt
    bitch please ur family's estate has a barrenness even cobra wouldn't consider an asset
    Rofl

    knowp straight floored ur racist ass, ur white trash and an avid junkie
    since pleth's a goofy wigga who thinks he's black, i'll pull the simian blast this monkey
    Dope reference

    btw ur forced wordplays suck, i hope this dumb/predictable lame quits
    it's ironic u called urself plethora, cuz u always drop a shitload of unoriginal nameflips
    Too simple


    ur gbl finals verse was dull, tied with siq and then the voters snoozed
    talmbout bazookas in a fitness theme, this hackneyed to learn his gunbars is overused
    Cool wordplay

    get right and pray to god for forgiveness, lose the ratchets and blades
    trust me pleth someday ur going to find elysian, and realize ur a stupid faggot with aids
    Lol good wp hit

    u flopped in the latest cypher, i won't stop til this clever dork is wowed
    shit the way u butchered all ur corny rebuttals, would even make dexter morgan proud
    Couldve been displayed better

    notti bodied u in a fl champ match, u don't want a candid talk with me
    u sure emphasized some brutal ragdoll physics, cuz all of ur punches landed awkwardly
    Nah

    I liked pleths opener and that dot observatory line was dope af. Only lines that really stood out. Pleth overall just had wording issues that landed into misses. I felt bdot was more creative and also had some good humor factor.

    V/b dot
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    Re: B Dot LESNAR vs. Plethora[Open For Votes]

    Punchlines- B Dot Lesnar
    Opener-Plethora
    Creativity- B Dot Lesnar
    wordplays- B Dot
    Overall- B Dot

    This is tough because both was great
    I'll give to B DOT

    Reasons: a Little more creative with worded compare to Pleth
    he had a better overall his verse connected better. and funnier.

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