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Thread: DzasteR vs. Boyznblack[Open For Feed]

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    DzasteR vs. Boyznblack[Open For Feed]

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    heading to work so i'll be back to check in. should be able to post a verse today.

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    Re: DzasteR vs. Boyznblack

    checking in

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    Re: DzasteR vs. Boyznblack

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    I'm always teaching these kids lessons daily like this a teen summit
    They say Boyz will be Boyz.........cuz he's used to gettin punished
    I beat kids for fun - its either that or you get smoked like the best ganga
    Either way, I'll leave this Bad Boy laid out......like Diddy at the Met Gala
    I'll plant punches in his chest til he start believing his roots
    Cuz I'll smash him til Boyzn buried..........like a European Fruit
    This bitch whines in the front lines chat - damn Boy get ya self a diary
    Cuz if i wanna experience a bitch & wine.....I'd take ya mom to a winery
    This dude should do the RB Mag....Its obvious you write like an expert
    your opinions are meant to be acknowledged....for a women's network
    He should be a cast member for a talk show - its time he face the facts
    See I make all my opponents cast members - and you'll need to brace for that
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    Re: DzasteR vs. Boyznblack

    @Boyznblack

    you need an extension?

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    Re: DzasteR vs. Boyznblack

    I just saw this.... Didn't u notice I never checked in... That means I'm not aware of the battle
    Thank you for posting! Your post will not be visible until Boyznblack has fucked your moms

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    Re: DzasteR vs. Boyznblack

    Quote Originally Posted by Dzaster View Post
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    I'm always teaching these kids lessons daily like this a teen summit
    They say Boyz will be Boyz.........cuz he's used to gettin punished



    I beat kids for fun - its either that or you get smoked like the best ganga
    Either way, I'll leave this Bad Boy laid out......like Diddy at the Met Gala



    I'll plant punches in his chest til he start believing his roots
    Cuz I'll smash him til Boyzn buried..........like a European Fruit

    ☆ (dope idea for a nameplay, but poor execution. boysenberry was nice, but boysenberried makes absolutely no sense and doesn't work, plus you could have flipped it better than "like a European fruit".)

    This bitch whines in the front lines chat - damn Boy get ya self a diary
    Cuz if i wanna experience a bitch & wine.....I'd take ya mom to a winery



    This dude should do the RB Mag....Its obvious you write like an expert
    your opinions are meant to be acknowledged....for a women's network



    He should be a cast member for a talk show - its time he face the facts
    See I make all my opponents cast members - and you'll need to brace for that


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    Not a very good verse. Really amateurish. That Bad Boy wordplay is pretty damn old. And Boyz will be Boyz was awful. I will say this, you have the right idea, the template was what you want, you just need to be creative. You had the right idea with boysenberry, but u ruined the nameplay by going with buried instead of bury. And using the simile was ill-advised.

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    Re: DzasteR vs. Boyznblack[Open For Feed]

    I'm always teaching these kids lessons daily like this a teen summit
    They say Boyz will be Boyz.........cuz he's used to gettin punished
    I beat kids for fun - its either that or you get smoked like the best ganga
    Either way, I'll leave this Bad Boy laid out......like Diddy at the Met Gala
    I'll plant punches in his chest til he start believing his roots
    Cuz I'll smash him til Boyzn buried..........like a European Frui

    next half fell off in my book ... bunch of name flips was actually going to say it was a bunch for a battle but dude never showed up so i guess your good to go... thought these were dope though.. good shit way to drop.

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    Re: DzasteR vs. Boyznblack[Open For Feed]

    I'm always teaching these kids lessons daily like this a teen summit
    They say Boyz will be Boyz.........cuz he's used to gettin punished

    Decent set up, w/ a decent Np n finish.

    I beat kids for fun - its either that or you get smoked like the best ganga
    Either way, I'll leave this Bad Boy laid out......like Diddy at the Met Gala

    Decent current affairs punch wit but poor setup.

    I'll plant punches in his chest til he start believing his roots
    Cuz I'll smash him til Boyzn buried..........like a European Frui

    I fwi


    This was an overall decent drop, ok structure, ok punches, some attempts at personals..


    This bitch whines in the front lines chat - damn Boy get ya self a diary
    Cuz if i wanna experience a bitch & wine.....I'd take ya mom to a winery

    This was actually my favorite punch, I just would've used a synonym in the opener to make 'wine' stand out more.
    Good drop tho n fk these no respect,no showing cowards w/ a sick dick, as has been said. Overall 7/10 on a scale.


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    Re: DzasteR vs. Boyznblack[Open For Feed]

    If that includes you then.. yo fault.

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