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  1. #1
    Soule
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    The Fight

    Glass disintegrates
    in an act of perfect rage
    as love becomes hate.

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    Re: The Fight

    Glass disintegrates
    Loving the word 'disintegrates' here along with the word 'Glass'.
    It's not an easy picture to imagine but it's powerful wording.
    in an act of perfect rage
    Oh yes. Not rage, but perfect rage. That's great.
    as love becomes hate.
    I love that. It's simple and clean and hits the reality spot beautifully but still with
    an element of poetic touch.

    Great haiku here Johnny.

    I like it a lot.

    Great stuff.

    Good title for it btw.
    Last edited by Emily; May 30th, 2017 at 11:58 PM


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    Cause A Fuss Truth Iscariot's Avatar
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    Re: The Fight

    Glass disintegrates
    in an act of perfect rage
    as love becomes hate.

    Truly wish your haikus in the league were more like this one. Sadly you quit. But this was good. I liked each line. Very untraditional with the rhyme but it's cool I liked it. Sorry for the short feed but it's only 3 lines.

    AI

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