...... BR@IN$TØRMĪNG ......
...... BR@IN$TØRMĪNG ......
What up self! Oh man just another quality gem here! Cool background design to your piece too. You kind of started off apocalyptic, like a George romero film lmao. Your metaphors and imagery were killing it man! In always excited to read a new self activate piece cause I just know the type of quality writing your going to drop surpasses many. This maybe one of the best pieces ive read since your last drop so props on keeping the interest level high, your writing leaves a lot for the imagination to ponder and brings striking images to mind. I think my only gripes with this piece are a few of the word choices felt imballanced with the rest as it felt so cohesive at the start, wasnt really feeling the shia lebouf reference or the gallon/pint of blood lines. You had a strong start though and just another reminder that your a dope writer, one of my favorites! Thanks for the read self!
Last edited by _Lyrics; May 27th, 2017 at 07:14 AM
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yooo the presentation's crazy!! how'd u do that? Anyways, this is that fight music lyrics that i fucks with. you already.
OAN, son, this shit was made for a beat. you planning to do it up?
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Damn... This reads ridiculously smooth. The flow is not for interpretation and shit seems destined for the battle-scene.
Dope