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Thread: Bomb Bard Vs DzasteR OPEN FOR FEED

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    Bomb Bard Vs DzasteR OPEN FOR FEED

    5 bars Due tomorrow night(Monday)\

    Check

    @Dzaster

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    Re: Bomb Bard Vs DzasteR

    Checkin in

    I'll drop today

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    Re: Bomb Bard Vs DzasteR

    Quote Originally Posted by Dzaster View Post
    Checkin in

    I'll drop today
    ext till tomorrow night pleae

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    Re: Bomb Bard Vs DzasteR

    cool ext til tomorrow night

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    Re: Bomb Bard Vs DzasteR

    Quote Originally Posted by Bomb Bard View Post
    @Dzaster I'll have my verse tonight
    you said that yesterday and the night before.

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    Its funny how we hardly ever see this dude battle…….in fact, where’s Bomb?
    Oh there he is…asking for more extensions....than women in a black hair salon
    is that REALLY your rec? I’ll make you register this L since that's what you leaning towards
    See I’ll leave Bomb at 7-11….…like I made terrorist threats to a convenience store
    Leave you bleeding whore...girls don't even holla at you - D have 'em all singing
    See last I heard of Bomb making bitches scream....well that happened in England
    This nigga’ll get destroyed – watch him take off on a bad note – bitch I’m hard core
    I’ll lay his ass out…..and stomp all over this bitch til BB Flat – like a Guitar chord
    I flow toxins, and Bard? No one believes he's ill - what dude's avoiding him?
    At this rate, we'll never see B. Cereus......unless we all caught food poisoning
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    B. Cereus = bacillus cereus - illness commonly caught from food poisoning

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    Re: Bomb Bard Vs DzasteR

    Its funny how we hardly ever see this dude battle…….in fact, where’s Bomb?
    Oh there he is…asking for more extensions....than women in a black hair salon
    ( this coulda & shoulda been worded much better)


    is that REALLY your rec? I’ll make you register this L since that's what you leaning towards
    See I’ll leave Bomb at 7-11….…like I made terrorist threats to a convenience store
    ( this doesn't rhyme)


    Leave you bleeding whore...girls don't even holla at you - D have 'em all singing
    See last I heard of Bomb making bitches scream....well that happened in England
    (terrible)

    This nigga’ll get destroyed – watch him take off on a bad note – bitch I’m hard core
    I’ll lay his ass out…..and stomp all over this bitch til BB Flat – like a Guitar chord
    (this isn't bad...again..wording affects the punch, I like the connection between the first & second line)

    I flow toxins, and Bard? No one believes he's ill - what dude's avoiding him?
    At this rate, we'll never see B. Cereus......unless we all caught food poisoning

    ( that's a stretch to make it rhyme, but decent closer I guess)


    overall not a good verse...in a 6 bar battle, 3 of your bars had punches comparing things to other things....it strained on the attempt at wit & comedy that never actually connected...keep at it though...

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    Re: Bomb Bard Vs DzasteR OPEN FOR FEED

    Its funny how we hardly ever see this dude battle…….in fact, where’s Bomb?
    Oh there he is…asking for more extensions....than women in a black hair salon
    This nigga’ll get destroyed – watch him take off on a bad note – bitch I’m hard core
    I’ll lay his ass out…..and stomp all over this bitch til BB Flat – like a Guitar chord

    hate no shows... but these were my favorite bars of yours.... seen you drop better had some misses these 2 bars though could have hit a bit harder... the BB flat was a cool flip but idk something was missing not your best but worked out ya got the W. way to show up..hit the champ match when you get a chance.

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