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Thread: Joe Boston VS. DamOhOhOh[Joe Wins

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    Joe Boston VS. DamOhOhOh[Joe Wins

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    Re: Joe Boston VS. DamOhOhOh

    He cant outrun the speed of these hollows hes not built with the endurance
    So ill put one through this Manchester see an explosion worse than an Ariana Performance 
    Your appearance here has no importance
    I'll off u quick and dispose the body
    You'll see visions of light in an orb form quicker than a Trump visit to Saudi
    His bars are oddly constructed those trash verses have their own assigned bucket
    Runs around and claims hes the shit, id be surprised if he witnessed his first Golden Nugget
    I'll smash your broad in public put her on display and watch u panic
    After i bust all over her Jo No Se nothing just fucked her like a Hispanic
    Your relationships are a sunken Titanic those heartstrings have broken chords
    Soft faggot! Hopes his Heart will go on 20 yrs later like Celine at the Billboard Awards

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    Re: Joe Boston VS. DamOhOhOh

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    Re: Joe Boston VS. DamOhOhOh

    Joe will buckle under the weight, I will knock of his head when it's screwed on straight
    His a monument to bad taste, I love music but he makes me want a more quiet space

    I am giving you the silent treatment, joe seems like his the type who goes back on an agreement
    A major inconvenience like all his life timE achievements this will be an unfortunate turn of events

    It's hard to imagine, this fake g.i joe being a man of action
    With a heated passion, I can't help but Burst out laughing,
    his wearing last years fashion, would your mother approve?
    I don't think so, If I told her this would turn into a family feud

    One simple background check, shows that you're a son of a bitch
    And have a character defect, you would make number one on the top ten retarded list

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    Re: Joe Boston VS. DamOhOhOh

    Quote Originally Posted by Joe Boston View Post
    He cant outrun the speed of these hollows hes not built with the endurance
    So ill put one through this Manchester see an explosion worse than an Ariana Performance 

    ☆ I get the Manchest but don't know where the "er" fits in. Would have been dope if the wp worked.

    Your appearance here has no importance
    I'll off u quick and dispose the body
    You'll see visions of light in an orb form quicker than a Trump visit to Saudi

    ☆☆☆☆☆

    His bars are oddly constructed those trash verses have their own assigned bucket
    Runs around and claims hes the shit, id be surprised if he witnessed his first Golden Nugget

    ☆☆☆

    I'll smash your broad in public put her on display and watch u panic
    After i bust all over her Jo No Se nothing just fucked her like a Hispanic

    ☆ lol how do you fuck somebody like a hispanic?

    Your relationships are a sunken Titanic those heartstrings have broken chords
    Soft faggot! Hopes his Heart will go on 20 yrs later like Celine at the Billboard Awards

    ☆☆☆☆☆

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    Quote Originally Posted by DamOhOhOh View Post
    Joe will buckle under the weight, I will knock of his head when it's screwed on straight
    His a monument to bad taste, I love music but he makes me want a more quiet space



    I am giving you the silent treatment, joe seems like his the type who goes back on an agreement
    A major inconvenience like all his life timE achievements this will be an unfortunate turn of events



    It's hard to imagine, this fake g.i joe being a man of action
    With a heated passion, I can't help but Burst out laughing,



    his wearing last years fashion, would your mother approve?
    I don't think so, If I told her this would turn into a family feud



    One simple background check, shows that you're a son of a bitch
    And have a character defect, you would make number one on the top ten retarded list


    Joe took this rather easily. His misses were better than anything in Dam's verse, plus he had a couple solid bars. Dam could improve by using punchlines at least once or twice in a verse.

    v-Joe

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    Re: Joe Boston VS. DamOhOhOh

    He cant outrun the speed of these hollows hes not built with the endurance
    So ill put one through this Manchester see an explosion worse than an Ariana Performance
    Nice bar
    Your appearance here has no importance
    I'll off u quick and dispose the body
    You'll see visions of light in an orb form quicker than a Trump visit to Saudi
    okish
    His bars are oddly constructed those trash verses have their own assigned bucket
    Runs around and claims hes the shit, id be surprised if he witnessed his first Golden Nugget
    Not bad
    I'll smash your broad in public put her on display and watch u panic
    After i bust all over her Jo No Se nothing just fucked her like a Hispanic
    wording a bit fucked here lol fucked her like a Hispanic? not sure how that makes sense
    Your relationships are a sunken Titanic those heartstrings have broken chords
    Soft faggot! Hopes his Heart will go on 20 yrs later like Celine at the Billboard Awards
    good ender

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    Joe will buckle under the weight, I will knock of his head when it's screwed on straight
    His a monument to bad taste, I love music but he makes me want a more quiet space
    ok
    I am giving you the silent treatment, joe seems like his the type who goes back on an agreement
    A major inconvenience like all his life timE achievements this will be an unfortunate turn of events
    like the multis you construct, but try to form punches bro
    It's hard to imagine, this fake g.i joe being a man of action
    With a heated passion, I can't help but Burst out laughing,
    not a punch
    his wearing last years fashion, would your mother approve?
    I don't think so, If I told her this would turn into a family feud
    could've did something better with this bar
    One simple background check, shows that you're a son of a bitch
    And have a character defect, you would make number one on the top ten retarded list
    could've done something with this bar too

    DamOh you got the right idea but you gotta work on throwing in some punches. This is a good start for you I believe. Keep battling, take the feedback you get in to consideration and find a style that works for you. I think you could do better if you just work on your text battling skills and hit with punchlines. You know how to construct your bars well so that's good. Joe, you played no games here obviously lol. Your opening bar was good, I have a feeling we'll see more variations of that bar. I actually just did one myself. So many ways to erupt that and I like how you constructed that bar. You had a few misses but overall your misses didn't really hurt your chances here. Good battle.
    v/ Joe Boston

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    Re: Joe Boston VS. DamOhOhOh[Open For Votes]

    JB

    He cant outrun the speed of these hollows hes not built with the endurance
    So ill put one through this Manchester see an explosion worse than an Ariana Performance 
    Ok bar overall^
    Your appearance here has no importance
    I'll off u quick and dispose the body
    You'll see visions of light in an orb form quicker than a Trump visit to Saudi
    Forced rhyme but decent hit^
    His bars are oddly constructed those trash verses have their own assigned bucket
    Runs around and claims hes the shit, id be surprised if he witnessed his first Golden Nugget
    Nah..
    I'll smash your broad in public put her on display and watch u panic
    After i bust all over her Jo No Se nothing just fucked her like a Hispanic
    Decent..
    Your relationships are a sunken Titanic those heartstrings have broken chords
    Soft faggot! Hopes his Heart will go on 20 yrs later like Celine at the Billboard Awards
    Meh...

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    DOh

    Joe will buckle under the weight, I will knock of his head when it's screwed on straight
    His a monument to bad taste, I love music but he makes me want a more quiet space
    Ok, poor setup for the punch^
    I am giving you the silent treatment, joe seems like his the type who goes back on an agreement
    A major inconvenience like all his life timE achievements this will be an unfortunate turn of events
    Nice rhyme, decent punch, sub par setup^

    It's hard to imagine, this fake g.i joe being a man of action
    With a heated passion, I can't help but Burst out laughing,
    Haha.. Not really punching tho..^
    his wearing last years fashion, would your mother approve?
    I don't think so, If I told her this would turn into a family feud
    Too short barred, no punch here but decent attempt...^

    One simple background check, shows that you're a son of a bitch
    And have a character defect, you would make number one on the top ten retarded list
    Setup could've made for a good punch, but the delivery missed, poor close here.


    So yea, I feel this was one sided overall. Joe dropped a more polished battle verse, albeit missing in many spots, while Dam seemed to rush his work, whereas it came off as more of a quick keyed verse with many more missed attempts.

    V/Joe this time.


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    Re: Joe Boston VS. DamOhOhOh[Open For Votes]

    I'll off u quick and dispose the body
    You'll see visions of light in an orb form quicker than a Trump visit to Saudi
    Your relationships are a sunken Titanic those heartstrings have broken chords
    Soft faggot! Hopes his Heart will go on 20 yrs later like Celine at the Billboard Awards

    vs

    nothin


    joe dropped decent was more than enough... Dam check out some old text battles or even newer ones to get more of a feel of how to write... stick around elevate little by little...

    vote Joe for the more polished verse.

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