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    TRUE WISDOM

    True wisdom ain't jaded
    The fates sang it
    And saints prayed it
    This same cadence
    Illuminated ways that’s archaic

    I’m of a different sort
    Sifting through the shores
    Of what my mind is
    Cannabis and Psilocybin
    You?
    Haven’t been to realms
    That I’ve been
    I am Searching to surpass
    Perception and temporal guises
    Fine sight at
    The black of my eyelids
    And now I see my own disguises

    And I wish my name was Midas
    I’m mighty, but gotta
    Give a fuck about a stipend

    Civilization says
    “Like, save money man
    This the land of
    milk and honey and
    It’s all yours,
    Just work till
    You got bloody hands
    You Understand?
    That’ll make you happy
    Do this, do that
    And then go raise a family
    Shit, and if you don’t want to
    Then that’s just wrong dude
    You musta picked up the wrong cue
    Like who raised you?”

    Ooo, bitch, Jesús!
    I pulled up to heaven
    Before birth like “hey Zeus”
    He said “hey, I’m glad you came thru —
    Aye dude, shit down there is fucked
    They emphasize propriety
    In society and all they do is judge
    Go be a leader with the pencil led
    And do as we discussed

    So I’m here now
    All up in your ears now
    Hear, bow
    Fear, doubt
    Do either all or none of the above
    Just understand that all that matters
    Are things from up above, uh

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    Re: TRUE WISDOM

    Hey Walter! I thought this was a cool piece! Very short bars made for a quick pace read, good stuff stacking the multi though, made for an ever smoother read. Concept felt pretty free-versy but it was cool, thanks for the read
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    Re: TRUE WISDOM

    Thanks a lot for the reply!
    The ambiguity of the underlying concept is something I struggle with in most of the things I write and am working heavily on that...
    I'm really glad you enjoyed it

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