10 lines due tonight.
@Dzaster let's get it done son. goodluck
OG Maestro
Dzaster
10 lines due tonight.
@Dzaster let's get it done son. goodluck
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I got enough firepower to make the Earth Quake, bout a hundred rounds
Soon as they clear the scene, it's only Natural Dzaster is found Underground
But yo, some advice?
Stay away from too many nameplays, cause that's not what niggas need
It's bad. Ya last battle you mentioned a Bomb more than Kim K's twitter feed
Bro.
I KNOW being on RB writing rhymes has got you feeling right at home,
But it's needs to stop, embrace your profile pic.... & Leave The Mic Alone
Let ya career Rest In Peace, or have ya body look like what's inside urns
I'm packin' HEAT. Fuck a hair cut, I got enough clips to give ya Side Burns
Hol up,
These last 2 bars for you fake ass rappers. I'm puttin' every body on a muhfuckin platter.
I can't stand you bastards. fuckin' health hazards. I'm only here for my 3rd FL belt, niggas know what I'm after.
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Well I made it here sooo...
.
.
Get to know me, cuz I'll be the last you remember before I put you in a hearse & coffin
Dead this bitch on site.....& My Sonoma credentials... like a college service login
I stay schoolin niggas.. just cuz you taught Klass a lesson don't make you a menace
& ya last champ match...
well, that was 1st & last we saw Maestro, Authentic in the same sentence
Fraudulent rapper.. anything you talk about in ya rhymes is false...I'll enjoy this match
Cuz in a real bout punches will fly, its an automatic Target on ya chest - like an employee badge
When I swing, I never miss...see my hits easily find its mark as soon as I'm taking position
While your punches always tryin to find a way to land - like piloting navigation systems
Showed respect for your open mic piece..Justin would be proud - tho it might be ironic
Cuz you asked for this murder... and that Blue Ocean Floor... get ready to sleep on it
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I got enough firepower to make the Earth Quake, bout a hundred rounds
Soon as they clear the scene, it's only Natural Dzaster is found Underground
Ok^
But yo, some advice?
Stay away from too many nameplays, cause that's not what niggas need
It's bad. Ya last battle you mentioned a Bomb more than Kim K's twitter feed
Good1
Bro.
I KNOW being on RB writing rhymes has got you feeling right at home,
But it's needs to stop, embrace your profile pic.... & Leave The Mic Alone
Decent
Let ya career Rest In Peace, or have ya body look like what's inside urns
I'm packin' HEAT. Fuck a hair cut, I got enough clips to give ya Side Burns
Ok^
Hol up,
These last 2 bars for you fake ass rappers. I'm puttin' every body on a muhfuckin platter.
I can't stand you bastards. fuckin' health hazards. I'm only here for my 3rd FL belt, niggas know what I'm after
Nah..^
Vs
Well I made it here sooo...
.
.
Get to know me, cuz I'll be the last you remember before I put you in a hearse & coffin
Dead this bitch on site.....& My Sonoma credentials... like a college service login
Ok^
I stay schoolin niggas.. just cuz you taught Klass a lesson don't make you a menace
& ya last champ match...
well, that was 1st & last we saw Maestro, Authentic in the same sentence
Good1^
Fraudulent rapper.. anything you talk about in ya rhymes is false...I'll enjoy this match
Cuz in a real bout punches will fly, its an automatic Target on ya chest - like an employee badge
Ok^
When I swing, I never miss...see my hits easily find its mark as soon as I'm taking position
While your punches always tryin to find a way to land - like piloting navigation systems
Ok^
Showed respect for your open mic piece..Justin would be proud - tho it might be ironic
Cuz you asked for this murder... and that Blue Ocean Floor... get ready to sleep on it
Decent^
So yea, I had this battle nearly even in connected bars and overall it was a decent drop from both parties; no outstanding misses minus the sub par self glory closer by OG and that was the deciding factor.
V/Dz
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got enough firepower to make the Earth Quake, bout a hundred rounds
Soon as they clear the scene, it's only Natural Dzaster is found Underground
( TERRIBLE opener and predictable angle....would have to come with a spin to make it original)
But yo, some advice?
Stay away from too many nameplays, cause that's not what niggas need
It's bad. Ya last battle you mentioned a Bomb more than Kim K's twitter feed
( this is equally bad and unoriginal)
Bro.
I KNOW being on RB writing rhymes has got you feeling right at home,
But it's needs to stop, embrace your profile pic.... & Leave The Mic Alone
( this was an attempt, but not a hard hitting punch)
Let ya career Rest In Peace, or have ya body look like what's inside urns
I'm packin' HEAT. Fuck a hair cut, I got enough clips to give ya Side Burns
( this is just horrid...a haircut/side burn bar...smh)
Hol up,
These last 2 bars for you fake ass rappers. I'm puttin' every body on a muhfuckin platter.
I can't stand you bastards. fuckin' health hazards. I'm only here for my 3rd FL belt, niggas know what I'm after
( self hype and really not a punch here)
vs
Get to know me, cuz I'll be the last you remember before I put you in a hearse & coffin
Dead this bitch on site.....& My Sonoma credentials... like a college service login
(no)
I stay schoolin niggas.. just cuz you taught Klass a lesson don't make you a menace
& ya last champ match...
well, that was 1st & last we saw Maestro, Authentic in the same sentence
( this was decent here...)
Fraudulent rapper.. anything you talk about in ya rhymes is false...I'll enjoy this match
Cuz in a real bout punches will fly, its an automatic Target on ya chest - like an employee badge
( this could've been worded better..but its a played Target/target bar)
When I swing, I never miss...see my hits easily find its mark as soon as I'm taking position
While your punches always tryin to find a way to land - like piloting navigation systems
(again... played....land/navigation bar)
Showed respect for your open mic piece..Justin would be proud - tho it might be ironic
Cuz you asked for this murder... and that Blue Ocean Floor... get ready to sleep on it
( bad closer)
overvall..horrendous battle....both had tired concepts and unoriginal attempts...like old shit......DZ bar was less terrible and actually attempted some type of swings
v- DZ
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I got enough firepower to make the Earth Quake, bout a hundred rounds
Soon as they clear the scene, it's only Natural Dzaster is found Underground
I KNOW being on RB writing rhymes has got you feeling right at home,
But it's needs to stop, embrace your profile pic.... & Leave The Mic Alone
vs
I stay schoolin niggas.. just cuz you taught Klass a lesson don't make you a menace
& ya last champ match...
well, that was 1st & last we saw Maestro, Authentic in the same sentence
When I swing, I never miss...see my hits easily find its mark as soon as I'm taking position
While your punches always tryin to find a way to land - like piloting navigation systems
not the best battle not the worst.... Boys Soundin like a hater lol... OG seen you drop better , not a fan of the set ups though tbh the whole "but yo some advice" new line and then your bar... its comes off as like your trying to hide the stretched bar lol whether you are or aren't, thats just how i read it ... a couple of misses thought the opener was decent would like to see it flipped a little harder but not bad...everyone hates avatar flips but then say oh you had nothing personal lol i thought that was a cool flip nicely worded. disaster had some misses here again butt did i felt the Champ match personal was dope... same way with the set up I'm not a big fan of those 2 line set ups followed by the punch might be my personal preference just comes off as being read choppy... but i think you played it off well.. and did like the land navi punch, seen some punches like that in the past buttt it was cool...
overall close battle I'm going Dzaster. better overall verse..
Vote Dz
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I got enough firepower to make the Earth Quake, bout a hundred rounds
Soon as they clear the scene, it's only Natural Dzaster is found Underground
Cool wordplay
But yo, some advice?
Stay away from too many nameplays, cause that's not what niggas need
It's bad. Ya last battle you mentioned a Bomb more than Kim K's twitter feed
Nice
Bro.
I KNOW being on RB writing rhymes has got you feeling right at home,
But it's needs to stop, embrace your profile pic.... & Leave The Mic Alone
Good
Let ya career Rest In Peace, or have ya body look like what's inside urns
I'm packin' HEAT. Fuck a hair cut, I got enough clips to give ya Side Burns
Lol funny
Hol up,
These last 2 bars for you fake ass rappers. I'm puttin' every body on a muhfuckin platter.
I can't stand you bastards. fuckin' health hazards. I'm only here for my 3rd FL belt, niggas know what I'm after.
Okay
.
Get to know me, cuz I'll be the last you remember before I put you in a hearse & coffin
Dead this bitch on site.....& My Sonoma credentials... like a college service login
Nice
I stay schoolin niggas.. just cuz you taught Klass a lesson don't make you a menace
& ya last champ match...
well, that was 1st & last we saw Maestro, Authentic in the same sentence
Awesome
Fraudulent rapper.. anything you talk about in ya rhymes is false...I'll enjoy this match
Cuz in a real bout punches will fly, its an automatic Target on ya chest - like an employee badge
Great line
When I swing, I never miss...see my hits easily find its mark as soon as I'm taking position
While your punches always tryin to find a way to land - like piloting navigation systems
Lol nice simile
Showed respect for your open mic piece..Justin would be proud - tho it might be ironic
Cuz you asked for this murder... and that Blue Ocean Floor... get ready to sleep on it
Good closing
+1 dzazter simply because his creativity and originalness, his lines had me speechless, punch after punch
OG
I got enough firepower to make the Earth Quake, bout a hundred rounds
Soon as they clear the scene, it's only Natural Dzaster is found Underground
Played np reference been done on him.numerous times sorry
But yo, some advice?
Stay away from too many nameplays, cause that's not what niggas need
It's bad. Ya last battle you mentioned a Bomb more than Kim K's twitter feed
Lol dope reference
Bro.
I KNOW being on RB writing rhymes has got you feeling right at home,
But it's needs to stop, embrace your profile pic.... & Leave The Mic Alone
Lol funny personal not much impact but overall cool humor
Let ya career Rest In Peace, or have ya body look like what's inside urns
I'm packin' HEAT. Fuck a hair cut, I got enough clips to give ya Side Burns
Dope lol
Hol up,
These last 2 bars for you fake ass rappers. I'm puttin' every body on a muhfuckin platter.
I can't stand you bastards. fuckin' health hazards. I'm only here for my 3rd FL belt, niggas know what I'm after.
No statement
Dzaster
Get to know me, cuz I'll be the last you remember before I put you in a hearse & coffin
Dead this bitch on site.....& My Sonoma credentials... like a college service login
Wasnt feeling this
I stay schoolin niggas.. just cuz you taught Klass a lesson don't make you a menace
& ya last champ match...
well, that was 1st & last we saw Maestro, Authentic in the same sentence
Lol nice
Fraudulent rapper.. anything you talk about in ya rhymes is false...I'll enjoy this match
Cuz in a real bout punches will fly, its an automatic Target on ya chest - like an employee badge
Target bars,been done before i felt you couldve worded this better like an employee badge didnt sound good as the metaphore cuz,it could reference any employee badge maybe leave a target on ya chest thatll resemble their employee badge
When I swing, I never miss...see my hits easily find its mark as soon as I'm taking position
While your punches always tryin to find a way to land - like piloting navigation systems
Way to land and navigation bars,been done to death the metaphore in itself wasnt bad
Showed respect for your open mic piece..Justin would be proud - tho it might be ironic
Cuz you asked for this murder... and that Blue Ocean Floor... get ready to sleep on it
Ok cool reference
Dzaster had some potential lines old references and all but he couldve flipped them to hit which he faultered that target bar couldve been something. 2nd bar was cool as well as closer. Og i felt was more consistent i like the bomb kim k personal nice metaphore there. Side burns was creative and the profile pic reference had good humor was a smart witty route went with that direction.
V/OG
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Frost: kim k
Vs
Dz: college service logic, navigation systems
Overall; lol ogs misses were god fucking awful. The Kim k line was good tho.. dz was original asf. Some misses but not by much
Vote: dz
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