5 bars Due tomorrow night(Monday)\
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@Dzaster
Bomb Bard
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5 bars Due tomorrow night(Monday)\
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@Dzaster
Checkin in
I'll drop today
cool ext til tomorrow night
you said that yesterday and the night before.
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Its funny how we hardly ever see this dude battle…….in fact, where’s Bomb?
Oh there he is…asking for more extensions....than women in a black hair salon
is that REALLY your rec? I’ll make you register this L since that's what you leaning towards
See I’ll leave Bomb at 7-11….…like I made terrorist threats to a convenience store
Leave you bleeding whore...girls don't even holla at you - D have 'em all singing
See last I heard of Bomb making bitches scream....well that happened in England
This nigga’ll get destroyed – watch him take off on a bad note – bitch I’m hard core
I’ll lay his ass out…..and stomp all over this bitch til BB Flat – like a Guitar chord
I flow toxins, and Bard? No one believes he's ill - what dude's avoiding him?
At this rate, we'll never see B. Cereus......unless we all caught food poisoning
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B. Cereus = bacillus cereus - illness commonly caught from food poisoning
Its funny how we hardly ever see this dude battle…….in fact, where’s Bomb?
Oh there he is…asking for more extensions....than women in a black hair salon
( this coulda & shoulda been worded much better)
is that REALLY your rec? I’ll make you register this L since that's what you leaning towards
See I’ll leave Bomb at 7-11….…like I made terrorist threats to a convenience store
( this doesn't rhyme)
Leave you bleeding whore...girls don't even holla at you - D have 'em all singing
See last I heard of Bomb making bitches scream....well that happened in England
(terrible)
This nigga’ll get destroyed – watch him take off on a bad note – bitch I’m hard core
I’ll lay his ass out…..and stomp all over this bitch til BB Flat – like a Guitar chord
(this isn't bad...again..wording affects the punch, I like the connection between the first & second line)
I flow toxins, and Bard? No one believes he's ill - what dude's avoiding him?
At this rate, we'll never see B. Cereus......unless we all caught food poisoning
( that's a stretch to make it rhyme, but decent closer I guess)
overall not a good verse...in a 6 bar battle, 3 of your bars had punches comparing things to other things....it strained on the attempt at wit & comedy that never actually connected...keep at it though...
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Its funny how we hardly ever see this dude battle…….in fact, where’s Bomb?
Oh there he is…asking for more extensions....than women in a black hair salon
This nigga’ll get destroyed – watch him take off on a bad note – bitch I’m hard core
I’ll lay his ass out…..and stomp all over this bitch til BB Flat – like a Guitar chord
hate no shows... but these were my favorite bars of yours.... seen you drop better had some misses these 2 bars though could have hit a bit harder... the BB flat was a cool flip but idk something was missing not your best but worked out ya got the W. way to show up..hit the champ match when you get a chance.
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