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    different highs, different haze
    Same lies by different snakes
    if my eyes precipitate
    it's cause i cannot dissipate
    but i been a great
    Riding my bike
    cross the interstate
    climb to the skies
    with a sinner's weight
    beg Mother Mary
    for a dinner date

    yeah,
    Whereby i was denied
    she said my buzz ain't mine
    man i must be fried
    to think i'm one of a kind

    But,
    i woke up one morning
    family was in mourning
    and i was but an aura
    six feet beneath the flora

    found that death is only that deep

    Actually, thats what I get
    For driving from the back seat
    Too fastly,

    i learned it late,
    but you don’t get out of life alive
    So do not live your life a lie
    The price of time
    Is sight from hind
    So answer this,
    Give into a vice sometimes
    Or make the afterlife a time of light?
    The sun arises after night
    But then night comes again
    So come again?
    Nah trust me, the son’s your friend
    (I did intend)

    Rethink that shit you think you know
    Our thoughts are only seasonal
    A sea of thoughts, and we can float
    That’s why I wrote..

    Look,
    I survived
    sixty eight seasons
    seventeen suns
    i've been seasoned
    by the seasons
    before age twenty one
    prophets, plenty come
    or maybe not in
    century twenty one

    but rest assured
    that if i were one
    id be heard
    like God's first son

    Appointed, anointed
    Nah probably neither
    I’m just a writer
    Who fell in love with the cypher

    Although I do move tree and
    the millennial generations
    Via perennial sensations
    from extraterrestrial vibrations, shit

    I probably came from a spaceship
    man's mind is as spacious as space is
    but what is the human race racing ?
    Aside from the concepts of ancients
    and inclinations to Satan
    The rich and the famous
    Both victims to anguish

    Yeah, Maybe not now but later for sure
    Lay in the clouds, Ima stargazer for sure
    The pen is my sword, so call my Arthur
    Cuz whenever I write, its done with ardor

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    Re: THIS LACKS A NAME

    Hmm... what about just look? It's my favorite part anyway...
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    Re: THIS LACKS A NAME

    What up walkerblack! This was really nice! In not going to lie, the quick pace to the write and the slim structure was a breath of fresh air, especially with the internal and multi rhymes blending in such a short structure, it read quick and delivered some intellectual impact. This had a slightly Christian vibe to it with the mother Mary and god son lines. There were some cool spiritual lines in there I liked the poetic aspects especially in the counting seasons and suns and ending it with not having one prophet in the twenty first century was cool. I also really liked the spaceship excerpt too. This had a good mindframe behind it and felt cohesive. Thanks for the read!
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