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    WK 1: Art. Vs Requiem[art wins]

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    Re: WK 1: Art. Vs Requiem

    Check, Ill probably be dropping Wednesday
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    Re: WK 1: Art. Vs Requiem

    @Requiem

    10 cool ?

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    Re: WK 1: Art. Vs Requiem

    Match these 10 ..


    dudes a dinosaur his substance? dead and old while mines scrumptious
    See i got this shit down to a T, Reqs just short arming all of his punches
    and his girl should stay at home, she’s begging 4 dick cant wait to bone
    i’d knock down that Hodor, but she looks like the giant from game of thrones
    roll deep with a crew? y’all the hardest? ride slow by ur whip & mark my targets
    when u see me pull aside your van DAM, I’m beaten down ur gang like the martial artist
    this was over b4 it started,the facts r basic, outclass u, this is ur graduation
    the way i was 1-0 Pre Req, you’d think i applied early for college applications
    we used to be cool.. 2 honorable vets...these days.. you're not even a threat
    but think of taking ur Bud light,&they’ll have to remove shards of that bottle from your neck


    Art... good luck homie.

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    Re: WK 1: Art. Vs Requiem

    Knockin’ off dust, but trust I still got what it takes to bust fakes.
    The fuck makes Art suck more than teenage girls doing a duck face?..
    A dick tuck, his nips rubbed, with his strip plucked getting fist pumped.
    This chump’s neck deep, have Art imitating life like Kathy Griffin did Trump.
    Go ahead & jump, no one gives a fuck if you die, suicide is no joke;
    Except when it’s Art, those heart strings need to be tied tight around your throat.
    Art’s got no hope in getting past with those sad lines, it’s bad timing
    Dali painted The Great Masturbator…. that Art later came all over while crying.
    I wont deny its been some time since Ive got mixed in a battle of wits & lip service
    But if creativity takes courage, than this bitch a flake that stays nervous


    Been a long time. Good luck Art
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    Re: WK 1: Art. Vs Requiem[vote now]

    easily the best battle of the tourney so far....

    dudes a dinosaur his substance? dead and old while mines scrumptious
    See i got this shit down to a T, Reqs just short arming all of his punches
    and his girl should stay at home, she’s begging 4 dick cant wait to bone
    i’d knock down that Hodor, but she looks like the giant from game of thrones
    this was over b4 it started,the facts r basic, outclass u, this is ur graduation
    the way i was 1-0 Pre Req, you’d think i applied early for college applications

    vs


    Knockin’ off dust, but trust I still got what it takes to bust fakes.
    The fuck makes Art suck more than teenage girls doing a duck face?..
    A dick tuck, his nips rubbed, with his strip plucked getting fist pumped.
    This chump’s neck deep, have Art imitating life like Kathy Griffin did Trump.
    Art’s got no hope in getting past with those sad lines, it’s bad timing
    Dali painted The Great Masturbator…. that Art later came all over while crying.



    both verses were structurally sound and well worked... kind of a hard choice to pick a winner here... I was almost gonna vote a tie but decided that would be fucked up... I gotta go with Art because of Requiems closer was a let down.... pretty evenly matched basically...good work by both

    v- ART
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    Re: WK 1: Art. Vs Requiem[vote now]

    dudes a dinosaur his substance? dead and old while mines scrumptious
    See i got this shit down to a T, Reqs just short arming all of his punches
    this was over b4 it started,the facts r basic, outclass u, this is ur graduation
    the way i was 1-0 Pre Req, you’d think i applied early for college applications
    we used to be cool.. 2 honorable vets...these days.. you're not even a threat
    but think of taking ur Bud light,&they’ll have to remove shards of that bottle from your neck

    vs.

    Knockin’ off dust, but trust I still got what it takes to bust fakes.
    The fuck makes Art suck more than teenage girls doing a duck face?..
    Go ahead & jump, no one gives a fuck if you die, suicide is no joke;
    Except when it’s Art, those heart strings need to be tied tight around your throat.
    Art’s got no hope in getting past with those sad lines, it’s bad timing
    Dali painted The Great Masturbator…. that Art later came all over while crying.

    WOW! First battle I've read in awhile that was neck and neck.. Art, that champ match you had was amazing, I kinda expected the same intensity for this match but honestly - its a different opponent, never heard of Req so this was a litle different and was evenly distributed. Req had some pretty decent bars, multis really pushed the flow of the verse well and I dig that. First time seeing anything from him and that was a dope read. Cuz I have them both at 3-3, I'm gonna have to really distinguish presentation here with literally everything else - so ima go with Art because even though flow, delivery, punches, multis, np & wp was even, I think Art presented a better read when I read it over. His verse had an edge more quality to it with the few bars I quoted above compared to the quality of Req's bars that I quoted. Great job guys!!

    v/ Art

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    Re: WK 1: Art. Vs Requiem[vote now]

    Art: game of thrones and college applications

    Vs

    Requiem: heart strings

    Vote: art

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    Re: WK 1: Art. Vs Requiem

    Quote Originally Posted by Art. View Post
    Match these 10 ..


    dudes a dinosaur his substance? dead and old while mines scrumptious
    See i got this shit down to a T, Reqs just short arming all of his punches

    ☆☆☆☆☆

    and his girl should stay at home, she’s begging 4 dick cant wait to bone
    i’d knock down that Hodor, but she looks like the giant from game of thrones

    ☆☆☆☆☆

    roll deep with a crew? y’all the hardest? ride slow by ur whip & mark my targets
    when u see me pull aside your van DAM, I’m beaten down ur gang like the martial artist

    ☆☆☆☆☆

    this was over b4 it started,the facts r basic, outclass u, this is ur graduation
    the way i was 1-0 Pre Req, you’d think i applied early for college applications

    ☆☆☆☆☆

    we used to be cool.. 2 honorable vets...these days.. you're not even a threat
    but think of taking ur Bud light,&they’ll have to remove shards of that bottle from your neck

    ☆ i actually liked this bar but i thought you could of flipped "but think of taking ur bud light" better


    Art... good luck homie.


    Quote Originally Posted by Requiem View Post
    Knockin’ off dust, but trust I still got what it takes to bust fakes.
    The fuck makes Art suck more than teenage girls doing a duck face?..



    A dick tuck, his nips rubbed, with his strip plucked getting fist pumped.
    This chump’s neck deep, have Art imitating life like Kathy Griffin did Trump.

    ☆☆☆☆☆

    Go ahead & jump, no one gives a fuck if you die, suicide is no joke;
    Except when it’s Art, those heart strings need to be tied tight around your throat.

    ☆☆☆☆☆

    Art’s got no hope in getting past with those sad lines, it’s bad timing
    Dali painted The Great Masturbator…. that Art later came all over while crying.



    I wont deny its been some time since Ive got mixed in a battle of wits & lip service
    But if creativity takes courage, than this bitch a flake that stays nervous




    Been a long time. Good luck Art
    Art had a solid verse with just a single misstep. He was creative with his nameplays and references. Requiem had a couple nice bars however the rest didn't really hit for me. He was kind of off a bit.

    v-Art

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    Re: WK 1: Art. Vs Requiem

    Art

    dudes a dinosaur his substance? dead and old while mines scrumptious 
    See i got this shit down to a T, Reqs just short arming all of his punches
    This was ok i felt the finisher couldvd hit better

    and his girl should stay at home, she’s begging 4 dick cant wait to bone
    i’d knock down that Hodor, but she looks like the giant from game of thrones
    Lol cool wp

    roll deep with a crew? y’all the hardest? ride slow by ur whip & mark my targets
    when u see me pull aside your van DAM, I’m beaten down ur gang like the martial artist
    Lol played van dam wp but the finisher was a cool flip

    this was over b4 it started,the facts r basic, outclass u, this is ur graduation
    the way i was 1-0 Pre Req, you’d think i applied early for college applications
    Nice good np

    we used to be cool.. 2 honorable vets...these days.. you're not even a threat
    but think of taking ur Bud light,&they’ll have to remove shards of that bottle from your neck
    Nah weak wp

    Req


    Knockin’ off dust, but trust I still got what it takes to bust fakes.
    The fuck makes Art suck more than teenage girls doing a duck face?..
    Nah weak metaphore here

    A dick tuck, his nips rubbed, with his strip plucked getting fist pumped.
    This chump’s neck deep, have Art imitating life like Kathy Griffin did Trump.
    Lol current hit nice


    Go ahead & jump, no one gives a fuck if you die, suicide is no joke; 
    Except when it’s Art, those heart strings need to be tied tight around your throat.
    Dope

    Art’s got no hope in getting past with those sad lines, it’s bad timing
    Dali painted The Great Masturbator…. that Art later came all over while crying.
    Wording fumbled here didnt like the finisher

    I wont deny its been some time since Ive got mixed in a battle of wits & lip service
    But if creativity takes courage, than this bitch a flake that stays nervous
    Nah

    Well req,had two decent hits the kathy griffin bar was nice and the heart string bar was dope. Art had more consistency even in his misses. Van dam was played but he flipped it harsh. The two np attempts were ok also. Art took this for slightly more consistency.

    V/Art
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    Re: WK 1: Art. Vs Requiem[vote now]

    and his girl should stay at home, she’s begging 4 dick cant wait to bone
    i’d knock down that Hodor, but she looks like the giant from game of thrones
    roll deep with a crew? y’all the hardest? ride slow by ur whip & mark my targets
    when u see me pull aside your van DAM, I’m beaten down ur gang like the martial artist
    this was over b4 it started,the facts r basic, outclass u, this is ur graduation
    the way i was 1-0 Pre Req, you’d think i applied early for college applications


    Vs


    A dick tuck, his nips rubbed, with his strip plucked getting fist pumped.
    This chump’s neck deep, have Art imitating life like Kathy Griffin did Trump.
    Go ahead & jump, no one gives a fuck if you die, suicide is no joke;
    Except when it’s Art, those heart strings need to be tied tight around your throat.


    V/Art, this was real close...requiem had some nice bars i quoted if he had one more like that.
    he coulda took this, art had a real solid verse hodor was nice, he had one more bar that hit, props to both.
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    Re: WK 1: Art. Vs Requiem

    Quote Originally Posted by Art. View Post
    Match these 10 ..


    dudes a dinosaur his substance? dead and old while mines scrumptious
    See i got this shit down to a T, Reqs just short arming all of his punches
    --heat
    and his girl should stay at home, she’s begging 4 dick cant wait to bone
    i’d knock down that Hodor, but she looks like the giant from game of thrones
    --good shit too
    roll deep with a crew? y’all the hardest? ride slow by ur whip & mark my targets
    when u see me pull aside your van DAM, I’m beaten down ur gang like the martial artist
    --old
    this was over b4 it started,the facts r basic, outclass u, this is ur graduation
    the way i was 1-0 Pre Req, you’d think i applied early for college applications
    --ok
    we used to be cool.. 2 honorable vets...these days.. you're not even a threat
    but think of taking ur Bud light,&they’ll have to remove shards of that bottle from your neck
    --clunky


    Art... good luck homie.
    Quote Originally Posted by Requiem View Post
    Knockin’ off dust, but trust I still got what it takes to bust fakes.
    The fuck makes Art suck more than teenage girls doing a duck face?..
    --nah
    A dick tuck, his nips rubbed, with his strip plucked getting fist pumped.
    This chump’s neck deep, have Art imitating life like Kathy Griffin did Trump.
    --this was good tho
    Go ahead & jump, no one gives a fuck if you die, suicide is no joke;
    Except when it’s Art, those heart strings need to be tied tight around your throat.
    --heart strings is old the flip didn't revive it enough for me here
    Art’s got no hope in getting past with those sad lines, it’s bad timing
    Dali painted The Great Masturbator…. that Art later came all over while crying.
    --gross
    I wont deny its been some time since Ive got mixed in a battle of wits & lip service
    But if creativity takes courage, than this bitch a flake that stays nervous
    --i wasnt a fan


    Been a long time. Good luck Art
    Req seems like he has an older style. Idk i never seemed to be a huge fan of it and he also had wording issues with some old stuff that was just too old tk stand alone without a relevant flip. Art had a solid verse with some wording and old flip problems of his own but his hits were strong enough to muscle him through.

    Good battle bros

    V art


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    Re: WK 1: Art. Vs Requiem[vote now]

    Quote Originally Posted by Caged View Post
    Art: game of thrones and college applications

    Vs

    Requiem: heart strings

    Vote: art
    You need to explain your vote better. This doesn't count

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    Re: WK 1: Art. Vs Requiem[vote now]

    Art: BEST PUNCH: i’d knock down that Hodor, but she looks like the giant from game of thrones

    SECOND BEST PUNCH: the way i was 1-0 Pre Req, you’d think i applied early for college applications

    Vs

    Requiem: Except when it’s Art, those heart strings need to be tied tight around your throat

    Overall: not a great battle, req has some decent concepts they just don't hit that hard. I'd like to see what he cooks up next week tho for sure. Art took this because more experience and he can form a punch better with SOMETIMES better concepts.

    Vote: art

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    Re: WK 1: Art. Vs Requiem[vote now]

    dudes a dinosaur his substance? dead and old while mines scrumptious
    See i got this shit down to a T, Reqs just short arming all of his punches
    Cool flip
    and his girl should stay at home, she’s begging 4 dick cant wait to bone
    i’d knock down that Hodor, but she looks like the giant from game of thrones
    Dig the GoT flip, quality shit
    roll deep with a crew? y’all the hardest? ride slow by ur whip & mark my targets
    when u see me pull aside your van DAM, I’m beaten down ur gang like the martial artist
    Not feeling this, though
    this was over b4 it started,the facts r basic, outclass u, this is ur graduation
    the way i was 1-0 Pre Req, you’d think i applied early for college applications
    I feel the flip here
    we used to be cool.. 2 honorable vets...these days.. you're not even a threat
    but think of taking ur Bud light,&they’ll have to remove shards of that bottle from your neck
    Killer flip here
    4/5

    VS

    Knockin’ off dust, but trust I still got what it takes to bust fakes.
    The fuck makes Art suck more than teenage girls doing a duck face?..
    I respect the flip but I'm not feeling it
    A dick tuck, his nips rubbed, with his strip plucked getting fist pumped.
    This chump’s neck deep, have Art imitating life like Kathy Griffin did Trump.
    DOPE
    Go ahead & jump, no one gives a fuck if you die, suicide is no joke;
    Except when it’s Art, those heart strings need to be tied tight around your throat.
    Cool flip
    Art’s got no hope in getting past with those sad lines, it’s bad timing
    Dali painted The Great Masturbator…. that Art later came all over while crying.
    I feel this approach to a name flip
    I wont deny its been some time since Ive got mixed in a battle of wits & lip service
    But if creativity takes courage, than this bitch a flake that stays nervous
    Kind of a weak ender IMO

    Art was just a little more consistent but this was a really cool read. Good stuff.

    v/ Art

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