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    State of the Art

    Just a little something I did the other day for an upcoming project I'm working on



    Lyrics

    Verse 1

    I am ready and willin' to lay a killin' to a villian
    I'm ill and militant when it comes to my pen
    you know in any even I stay ready to vent
    I'm not religious at all so i will never repent
    a psychopath who raps that kills rappers on wax
    so if you ever call my name you gone feel the wrath
    I'll fill a bathtub fulla your blood then take a drink
    in the blink of an eye - this ain't Nicki Minaj
    I ain't fucking with Nas, but the flow is illmatic
    you know I'm still at it
    I am different than these other motherfuckers when they rap
    I'll be cool for a minute then poof I just snap
    I'm the proof I diminish these fools that just act
    light the fuse and then I lose it, I'm a loose cannon rappin'
    Bruce Banner on the track and I just give you what these other faggots lackin'
    I belong inside a straight jacket I embrace straight rappin'
    ain't no trappin' over here


    Verse 2

    I'm the big motherfucker round these parts of town
    I give a fuck about a bitch I'll break her heart then clown
    you see I'm colder than the Finnish in the middle of winter
    I keep my syllables killer I got fillers that are iller
    than your dopest lines, I do some coke then rhyme
    cuz when I'm rippin' I be flippin' whippin' words on the mic
    I'm like a virgin I'm tight and I ain't fuckin' with you dicks
    Nick's slicker than Rick, I get you simpletons lit
    and please believe me when I tell you little 'Cheap Tricks'
    I'm the last motherfucker that you ever wanna beef with
    bitch you better 'Surrender' cuz I can tell your "pretending"
    like you're "Learning to Crawl", you stay yearning to ball
    I stay serving you all before I murder and maul
    you ain't really got the gall to make me stumble and fall
    so boy you better listen, don't you get it twisted
    ain't no fake depictions, I am off the Richter scale


    Last edited by Nicktorious; July 6th, 2017 at 02:26 AM

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    Re: State of the Art

    Rapping sounds good. What really puts me off is production, everything is squashed so even if the verse is good it's not enjoyable.

    Noble Savege - Flatbush Zombies x Aesop Rock

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