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    Cool New at this

    Whats up folks? This is literally my first day and first post on this site. I love to write and used to write raps when i was younger. Im going to throw some bars out. Feel free to battle back or spit back whichever you prefer, or comment with your thoughts. Alright here goes nothing:

    You can insult/poke fun/rhyme with, or grow some/ First day on this forum, have those booze? Poor em/
    Not here to bore em'/never been a big rapper or went tourin'/across the globe but my style can be laid back, hot or cold, as I spit rhymes, my style unfolds, I was told that when I write lines, that theirs a story inside a real man thats cried, been through shit and at times been terrified, R.I.P. to the true MC's that died and to the soldiers that sacrificed and diced there lives.

    When an MC writes rhymes/recites lines/or spits versus there has to be a purpose/battle MCs shouldn't be nervous/confident and make opponents feel worthless/winning is winning/i know yall heard this/never want to walk out pissed off and shirtless/I think when rhymes come from the heart/its worth this/rap at times is like a game of poker/deal the wrong hand/and your career is over/

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    Wulverine Wuxia's Avatar
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    Re: New at this

    Okay, honestly? First thing you have to do is change your username. Nobody is going to take you serious. Secondly you need to take all those lyrics you typed including the slashes you used and drown those motherfuckers in greasy dishwater.

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    Re: New at this

    Appreciate the criticism. Ill keep it in mind.

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    Re: New at this

    No problem, bud. You have potential.

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    Re: New at this

    So I just need to format a bit better? I dont think the rhymes were not bad.

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    Re: New at this

    Quote Originally Posted by twdnegan17 View Post
    So I just need to format a bit better? I dont think the rhymes were not bad.
    You have a typical delivery. Fast-paced. Not super fast but direct and easy to follow. They actually seem more audio-oriented. I don't know if you make tracks, but if you don't, you shouldn't write this way if you intend to text battle. Go to the "FrontLines" forum and see how they do it. Fix your format. Worry less about flow and more about content. Your lyrics are 1990-ish.

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    Re: New at this

    Understood, I couldn't really think of any other username to be honest lol. But I will go to the front lines forum and check it out. I dont make tracks at all. Haven't in years actually. But I been out of it a long time so I am rusty.

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    Re: New at this

    Welcome man!

    If you go to this section you can drop your writtens:
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?5-Open-Mic

    If you go to this section you can drop freestyles (keystyles):
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?21-Cypher

    And if you go here you can drop audios:
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/forumdis...Audio-Showcase

    Stay up.
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    Re: New at this

    Thanks man, appreciate the welcome I plan to check this stuff out. Seems like a cool site.

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    Re: New at this

    Welcome to the site buddy, Stay Active & Have Fun.
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    Re: New at this

    Hello, how are you? what are you doing?
    welcome to the site!

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