You and Bounds...

[143]

I could yell at you... go tell on you
Or ride to the end and die, go to hell with you
But I can tell with you, shit would swell with you
Overfill pails with swallowed ale then bail with you
Hell I like the way we play, make mail with you
Struggle through hard times, pull tooth and nail with you
The booth is stale with you not here, losing the smell of you
And you can tell in my lyrics, your choice, so the hell with you
I can't take the revolving door, craving solvents galore
Molly lollypop dreams, removing the polished restored
On many occasions I thought you fall for suave persuasions
Like the ocean raising levels to wash away your abrasions
You turning the waves into tsunamis trapped in reverberation
Thinking that the blind caring of you was disturbing, hating
Now you disturb the peace in resting in sectioned grounds
We should have been testing love instead of testing bounds....
Good Night

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[Venom]

The technical side of this is dope as fuck and honestly probably one of the more orthodox pieces I've seen you do, you really dedicated yourself to a set scheme here, sorry you're gonna hear me go on and on about rhyme scheme and different patterns and sounds as long as I'm posting, kind of my bread and butter, anyways I really enjoyed this piece bro, so fuckin slept on though.