Wk 6 Champ Match: B Dot Lesnar(5-0) Vs DzasteR(4-1) [Open For Votes]

[Spree]

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@B Dot LESNAR @DzasteR

Good luck yall. Props to gettin here

[Wuxia]

Check. Going 12.

[DzasteR]

checkin in..

12 it is

[Wuxia]

Going to need the extension bro.

[DzasteR]

ext granted for us both. i'll drop tomorrow.

going 16 lines instead. match.

[Spree]

ext granted for us both. i'll drop tomorrow.

going 16 lines instead. match.

Ext verses are due tonight bro.

- - - Updated - - -

ext granted for us both. i'll drop tomorrow.

going 16 lines instead. match.

Ext verses are due tonight bro.

[Wuxia]

#truth: u ain't upper tier or alpha, stay behind & listen closely
ur still green with a big question mark, i'm wastin time on a riddler trophy
this random nobody folded spree? look i'll coax dude to quit
i could dox yer fuckin glucose levels, even joe would be totez cool with it
nah real talk he dense af tho, vets swerve to battle with him
cuz this noobs a fuckin cakewalk, ur slower than networth's metabolism
ur bars got no value bruh, mine?, it's a privilege to flaunt shit
u couldn't polish off a handful of gems, if u had a thanos infinity gauntlet
damn b ur chrome got a laser sight? nice shots drop his ass
if my visor get lit up with a red beam, ur dying from a cyclops optic blast
u were boss at monopoly kid, now ur section 8 & ration food
for real ur rentin cheaper property than baltic and mediterranean avenue
ur crush work 2nd shift in a brothel, u pay to bonk her gentle
it's killer how u drop serious coin every visit: john wick at the continental
her loose snatch haggard yo, i mean it sort of seems official
cuz that trashy skank can fit any taepodong, even north korean missiles

[DzasteR]

Yea, faggot shit. You going to harass this nigga to write verse and drop and then nigga drops and you pull some corny shit like this?
I mean, I just call it how I see it, bro...

I don't get your argument here. It took me 1 day to finish my verse. It took him 4. I was prepared for both him and Unfuk. I'm not playing games here, bro. I know you're being defensive because of what I did to your friend, but stop being an emotional bitch. Don't even vote in the battle either. I know you want to. I know that you want to hold Nolan in your arms and tell him everything is going to be alright. You want to tell him that you're sorry Nick died. Your sorry that I did this to him. But don't. Because nobody gives a shit.

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You actually spent time writing long paragraphs?? you crazy for that
You even cite your sources........next time don’t forget the APA format
This nigga 5-0. coincidence? He does better cop work than they do
Les Hands over Tips so much...he's just use to jerking gay dudes
B fallin off is music to my ears – you’ll really get beat out of spite
You wouldn’t have that Spotify take it… & stream your death on that site
Dot was trembling vs Packed, Superstitious much? Fate’s ya conclave
Now Believe and hear dead.......& i’ll just place him beyond Graves
[B leavin here dead]

I remember first meeting up with you on NC ages ago, but you from wayyyy back right. where the hell you keep disappearing to??

I really don't take text battling as serious as I did when I first started out. It's fun to drop in and mingle with some of the newer folks for a while, but as an adult I have so many freaking obligations that this stuff is a guilty pleasure for me. I can walk away pretty easily.

He stalked PG..yet he don't take text serious.. he meant those quotes???
Funny, B been more Pressed for cheats and secrets..….than Nintendo codes
His whole life’s a lie online.... he’s just a wannabe, always profiling
Its like Dot’s an Aleutian….until he’s seen dropped off at that island
Ya girl hit me up like “Hey Big Head”…its big!!! She loves when I’m cumin wit her
And when she calls you big head…well, we know your shirts come with zippers
Read between the lines man…..you know I’m no joke where I’m from
I always put Dots between my Lines….thats a sign, ima choke him with one
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16.

[GrimmZReaper]

#truth: u ain't upper tier or alpha, stay behind & listen closely
ur still green with a big question mark, i'm wastin time on a riddler trophy
her loose snatch haggard yo, i mean it sort of seems official
cuz that trashy skank can fit any taepodong, even north korean missiles


vs

This nigga 5-0. coincidence? He does better cop work than they do
Les Hands over Tips so much...he's just use to jerking gay dudes
B fallin off is music to my ears – you’ll really get beat out of spite
You wouldn’t have that Spotify take it… & stream your death on that site


weird battle TBH.....thought Lesnar approached this one diiferent then his last match..seemed uninspired.. even wasted a bar that really went at Net instead of Dzaster. kinda went up & down with the bars..i hated your closer and thought Lesnars was better...after a thorough read I think Dzaster used Lesnars tactics to edge him..the personals, especially with what happened in the PG battle and incorporating his 5-0 record in there, always good to drop truth and shit the site can relate to....Pretty even battle, I think Lesnar took Dzaster a lil light, compared to how much he seemed to have invested in his last match and Dzaster came prepared better

v- Dzaster...

Dzaster had a couple of good concepts but some of the wording fucked the impact that they coulda had. you went overboard with the quotes, especially the really long one of him explaining himself..

[Smog]

B

Opener was cool
Glucose levels was Ehh
Cake walk was ehh..
Polish gems was ehh
Red beam was oooooook
Cheap property was also oooooooook
Drop coin was cool
Closer was cool


Diz

Opener was ok
Hands over tips was cool
Spotify too played
Believe and hear t dead was ehh
Nintendo codes played but the personal tie made it land
Aleutian was ehh
Big head was ehh
Closer was light


Iunno I expected a better match.. felt like diz took the right approach with the personals but threw in a couple weak joints too.. dot just wrote Barz mostly with alotta tv references, n seemed lazier or rushed more then what I've been accustomed to seein... both landed equal amounts but imo felt the approach diz took won this for him.. decent read y'all


Diz

[plethora]

#truth: u ain't upper tier or alpha, stay behind & listen closely
ur still green with a big question mark, i'm wastin time on a riddler trophy
^coulda been worded better but it was good
this random nobody folded spree? look i'll coax dude to quit
i could dox yer fuckin glucose levels, even joe would be totez cool with it
^same as first bar
nah real talk he dense af tho, vets swerve to battle with him
cuz this noobs a fuckin cakewalk, ur slower than networth's metabolism
^lol
ur bars got no value bruh, mine?, it's a privilege to flaunt shit
u couldn't polish off a handful of gems, if u had a thanos infinity gauntlet
^ok i see u
damn b ur chrome got a laser sight? nice shots drop his ass
if my visor get lit up with a red beam, ur dying from a cyclops optic blast
^noo
u were boss at monopoly kid, now ur section 8 & ration food
for real ur rentin cheaper property than baltic and mediterranean avenue
^Huh? Nooo
ur crush work 2nd shift in a brothel, u pay to bonk her gentle
it's killer how u drop serious coin every visit: john wick at the continental
^ok
her loose snatch haggard yo, i mean it sort of seems official
cuz that trashy skank can fit any taepodong, even north korean missiles
^lol dope


Vs

You actually spent time writing long paragraphs?? you crazy for that
You even cite your sources........next time don’t forget the APA format
^solid opener
This nigga 5-0. coincidence? He does better cop work than they do
Les Hands over Tips so much...he's just use to jerking gay dudes
^ok
B fallin off is music to my ears – you’ll really get beat out of spite
You wouldn’t have that Spotify take it… & stream your death on that site
^mad played.. even allen knight thinks so
Dot was trembling vs Packed, Superstitious much? Fate’s ya conclave
Now Believe and hear dead.......& i’ll just place him beyond Graves
^ehh
He stalked PG..yet he don't take text serious.. he meant those quotes???
Funny, B been more Pressed for cheats and secrets..….than Nintendo codes
^dope
His whole life’s a lie online.... he’s just a wannabe, always profiling
Its like Dot’s an Aleutian….until he’s seen dropped off at that island
^creative but mehh
Ya girl hit me up like “Hey Big Head”…its big!!! She loves when I’m cumin wit her
And when she calls you big head…well, we know your shirts come with zippers
^lol
Read between the lines man…..you know I’m no joke where I’m from
I always put Dots between my Lines….thats a sign, ima choke him
^rhyme-wise was off a little. Not feeling the punch anyways





at first read i thought dz won but after breaking it down i felt b dot was more consistent with 2 clear misses a piece for each

V/ lesnar

- - - Updated - - -

#truth: u ain't upper tier or alpha, stay behind & listen closely
ur still green with a big question mark, i'm wastin time on a riddler trophy
^coulda been worded better but it was good
this random nobody folded spree? look i'll coax dude to quit
i could dox yer fuckin glucose levels, even joe would be totez cool with it
^same as first bar
nah real talk he dense af tho, vets swerve to battle with him
cuz this noobs a fuckin cakewalk, ur slower than networth's metabolism
^lol
ur bars got no value bruh, mine?, it's a privilege to flaunt shit
u couldn't polish off a handful of gems, if u had a thanos infinity gauntlet
^ok i see u
damn b ur chrome got a laser sight? nice shots drop his ass
if my visor get lit up with a red beam, ur dying from a cyclops optic blast
^noo
u were boss at monopoly kid, now ur section 8 & ration food
for real ur rentin cheaper property than baltic and mediterranean avenue
^Huh? Nooo
ur crush work 2nd shift in a brothel, u pay to bonk her gentle
it's killer how u drop serious coin every visit: john wick at the continental
^ok
her loose snatch haggard yo, i mean it sort of seems official
cuz that trashy skank can fit any taepodong, even north korean missiles
^lol dope


Vs

You actually spent time writing long paragraphs?? you crazy for that
You even cite your sources........next time don’t forget the APA format
^solid opener
This nigga 5-0. coincidence? He does better cop work than they do
Les Hands over Tips so much...he's just use to jerking gay dudes
^ok
B fallin off is music to my ears – you’ll really get beat out of spite
You wouldn’t have that Spotify take it… & stream your death on that site
^mad played.. even allen knight thinks so
Dot was trembling vs Packed, Superstitious much? Fate’s ya conclave
Now Believe and hear dead.......& i’ll just place him beyond Graves
^ehh
He stalked PG..yet he don't take text serious.. he meant those quotes???
Funny, B been more Pressed for cheats and secrets..….than Nintendo codes
^dope
His whole life’s a lie online.... he’s just a wannabe, always profiling
Its like Dot’s an Aleutian….until he’s seen dropped off at that island
^creative but mehh
Ya girl hit me up like “Hey Big Head”…its big!!! She loves when I’m cumin wit her
And when she calls you big head…well, we know your shirts come with zippers
^lol
Read between the lines man…..you know I’m no joke where I’m from
I always put Dots between my Lines….thats a sign, ima choke him
^rhyme-wise was off a little. Not feeling the punch anyways





at first read i thought dz won but after breaking it down i felt b dot was more consistent with 2 clear misses a piece for each

V/ lesnar

[Unfukwitable]

nah real talk he dense af tho, vets swerve to battle with him
cuz this noobs a fuckin cakewalk, ur slower than networth's metabolism
ur bars got no value bruh, mine?, it's a privilege to flaunt shit
u couldn't polish off a handful of gems, if u had a thanos infinity gauntlet
ur crush work 2nd shift in a brothel, u pay to bonk her gentle
it's killer how u drop serious coin every visit: john wick at the continental
her loose snatch haggard yo, i mean it sort of seems official
cuz that trashy skank can fit any taepodong, even north korean missiles


vs.


You actually spent time writing long paragraphs?? you crazy for that
You even cite your sources........next time don’t forget the APA format
He stalked PG..yet he don't take text serious.. he meant those quotes???
Funny, B been more Pressed for cheats and secrets..….than Nintendo codes
Ya girl hit me up like “Hey Big Head”…its big!!! She loves when I’m cumin wit her
And when she calls you big head…well, we know your shirts come with zippers


I felt one had some played concepts that hurt his verse and the other had ideas that just fizzled out I think my favorite lines from the spar was the John Wick bar which was dope! and the Nintendo codes was tight wish it wouldve been a bunch of creative or more personal material that was hittin... v/ Broke

[Spree]

2-2 uppin yall

[Notti]

#truth: u ain't upper tier or alpha, stay behind & listen closely
ur still green with a big question mark, i'm wastin time on a riddler trophy
this random nobody folded spree? look i'll coax dude to quit
i could dox yer fuckin glucose levels, even joe would be totez cool with it
her loose snatch haggard yo, i mean it sort of seems official
cuz that trashy skank can fit any taepodong, even north korean missiles

Vs

You actually spent time writing long paragraphs?? you crazy for that
You even cite your sources........next time don’t forget the APA format
He stalked PG..yet he don't take text serious.. he meant those quotes???
Funny, B been more Pressed for cheats and secrets..….than Nintendo codes

I wasn't really feeling this battle too much to be honest.. Even the punches I quoted, not because they were nice but because they stood out in each verse. Either way based on quotables and consistency I.gotta give this to Lesnar.

Vote Lesnar

[Barcotic]

riddler trophy
cakewalk lol
handful of gems

vs

hands over tips
pressed for cheats

a lot of misses for it being a champ match & how many lines yall went, but the hits were dope for the most part
broke clearly got it tho, his were better and he had one more
v/broke