Wk 6: Letterman(2-1) Vs Notti(1-0)[open for votes]

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@Notti @Letterman

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[Letterman]

14-16

[Notti]

Ight

[Notti]

Extension

[Letterman]

Ok.

[Notti]

Dog you gettin euthanized, fast or slow death? I'll let you decide
Cuz I can take a week or Russian roulette... Either way, battlin me is suicide
Ya girl told me you lame asf, and that you either gay or prude cuz in the bed you scary
Its either add some Spicer watch her walk away from the house like the press secretary
first lesnar dissed you, then you paid homage.. This dudes pie... me? I woulda let a few fly
The way you had 'Broke dick' in your hand, i thought you was reenacting that scene from 'The New Guy'
Ima school you, act out, get more then a bruise too.. These ain't screen clips
Send letter home folded and stapled like "make sure your mother reads this"
Ill fuck ya bitch, then gun butt the bitch.. Or let the blade carve her, see
I could turn ya girl into a squirter.. Wen I pull my knife out her carotid artery

[Letterman]

Joe said you're more creative & your wordplay's advanced
That's a paralyze.. i'll use it as a crutch to make sure this lame dont stand a chance
He introduced me to wifey. She's fat as fuck but the meeting was just a blur
Didnt wanna address the elephant in the room, so I waited til she left before discussing her
If your "goons" come w/ da beef, then it's bodybags & bodies covered in fleeces
So tell your boys go ahead with the bull.. or ill make sure that your minotaur into pieces
Arguments w/ ya bitch - normal. We give em space & come back to tap coochie
Cuz every man knows girls trip, yet this fag apologizes with front row seats to that movie
This dick getting headshots. Tryna fuck up ur features hoe, be scared
But the bullets'll do more than leave Nixon his face, after I raise arms & let the piece air

[GrimmZReaper]

Ima school you, act out, get more then a bruise too.. These ain't screen clips
Send letter home folded and stapled like "make sure your mother reads this"

vs

He introduced me to wifey. She's fat as fuck but the meeting was just a blur
Didnt wanna address the elephant in the room, so I waited til she left before discussing her
If your "goons" come w/ da beef, then it's bodybags & bodies covered in fleeces
So tell your boys go ahead with the bull.. or ill make sure that your minotaur into pieces
This dick getting headshots. Tryna fuck up ur features hoe, be scared
But the bullets'll do more than leave Nixon his face, after I raise arms & let the piece air


couple misses by Nottie here... Broke dick in ya hands flopped...spicer and spice or don't sound the same either...the letter home folded bar was on point but that's about it and im guessing that's probably been used some way or other on him before
Letterman had the better intro & outro bar..not the best of verses...neither tried to really use personals...just generic bland disses that could be aimed at anyone in general really....

v- Letaman

[DzasteR]

Ya girl told me you lame asf, and that you either gay or prude cuz in the bed you scary
Its either add some Spicer watch her walk away from the house like the press secretary
Ima school you, act out, get more then a bruise too.. These ain't screen clips
Send letter home folded and stapled like "make sure your mother reads this"


vs

Joe said you're more creative & your wordplay's advanced
That's a paralyze.. i'll use it as a crutch to make sure this lame dont stand a chance
If your "goons" come w/ da beef, then it's bodybags & bodies covered in fleeces
So tell your boys go ahead with the bull.. or ill make sure that your minotaur into pieces
Arguments w/ ya bitch - normal. We give em space & come back to tap coochie
Cuz every man knows girls trip, yet this fag apologizes with front row seats to that movie

Notti was a bit hit and miss. He brought some decent concepts to the battle, I liked the shit I quoted above, the ender was alright but wasn't feeling it enough. The spicer/spice or bar was dope - and the folded letter was hilarious (gotta point that out). Letterman also came with some decent concepts, I think he came with the stronger punches and more consistency with his hits. his wp was 4 - 2 over Notti. Good battle guys but Letterman had the upperhand. He had more impact with his verse.

v/ Letterman

[Wuxia]

Dog you gettin euthanized, fast or slow death? I'll let you decide
Cuz I can take a week or Russian roulette... Either way, battlin me is suicide

☆ that np is way overused on letterman, i can't give any credit to this

Ya girl told me you lame asf, and that you either gay or prude cuz in the bed you scary
Its either add some Spicer watch her walk away from the house like the press secretary

☆☆☆☆☆

first lesnar dissed you, then you paid homage.. This dudes pie... me? I woulda let a few fly
The way you had 'Broke dick' in your hand, i thought you was reenacting that scene from 'The New Guy'

☆☆☆☆☆

Ima school you, act out, get more then a bruise too.. These ain't screen clips
Send letter home folded and stapled like "make sure your mother reads this"

☆ another overused np

Ill fuck ya bitch, then gun butt the bitch.. Or let the blade carve her, see
I could turn ya girl into a squirter.. Wen I pull my knife out her carotid artery

☆☆☆☆☆

Joe said you're more creative & your wordplay's advanced
That's a paralyze.. i'll use it as a crutch to make sure this lame dont stand a chance

☆ overused wordplay

He introduced me to wifey. She's fat as fuck but the meeting was just a blur
Didnt wanna address the elephant in the room, so I waited til she left before discussing her

☆ overused idiom

If your "goons" come w/ da beef, then it's bodybags & bodies covered in fleeces
So tell your boys go ahead with the bull.. or ill make sure that your minotaur into pieces

☆☆☆☆☆

Arguments w/ ya bitch - normal. We give em space & come back to tap coochie
Cuz every man knows girls trip, yet this fag apologizes with front row seats to that movie

☆☆☆☆☆

This dick getting headshots. Tryna fuck up ur features hoe, be scared
But the bullets'll do more than leave Nixon his face, after I raise arms & let the piece air

☆ I've seen a ton of nixon wordplays

This battle had an unhealthy mix of redundant np's and wp's. Notti only fucked up twice with his np's while letterman's verse suffered from having 2 played wp's and a cliched that is decades old. I thought Notti had the stronger verse.

v-Notti

[Smog]

Notti

Spicer, broke dick lol, closer

Those the three I liked.. letter folded is too played n so was the roulette joint...


Letter

Elephant in room, minotaur, girls trip, closer played but flip was cool


Close af, iunno I feel it was 3-31/2 letter, but if notti stayed away from the overused letter plays n landed one more he's a took this..felt letter had some played material also bit closer kinda hit well with the flip which edged this too him imo.. iunno could go either way tbh but I got let barely here.. good shit


Letter

[Amen]

Dog you gettin euthanized, fast or slow death? I'll let you decide
Cuz I can take a week or Russian roulette... Either way, battlin me is suicide
- Played wordplay concept but wording was choppy. Had you executed this with clean wording - would have been good.
Ya girl told me you lame asf, and that you either gay or prude cuz in the bed you scary
Its either add some Spicer watch her walk away from the house like the press secretary
This was dece.
first lesnar dissed you, then you paid homage.. This dudes pie... me? I woulda let a few fly
The way you had 'Broke dick' in your hand, i thought you was reenacting that scene from 'The New Guy'
Have never seen "The New Guy" and don't care to google to confirm - it wont change the fact that I still think this was light.
Ima school you, act out, get more then a bruise too.. These ain't screen clips
Send letter home folded and stapled like "make sure your mother reads this"
Garbage.
Ill fuck ya bitch, then gun butt the bitch.. Or let the blade carve her, see
I could turn ya girl into a squirter.. Wen I pull my knife out her carotid artery
Wack with too much filler.

Joe said you're more creative & your wordplay's advanced
That's a paralyze.. i'll use it as a crutch to make sure this lame dont stand a chance
The fuck? A Paralyze/Pair 'a Lies concept in 2017? You have got the be fucking KIDDING me... This was dope back in '04.
He introduced me to wifey. She's fat as fuck but the meeting was just a blur
Didnt wanna address the elephant in the room, so I waited til she left before discussing her
Light.
If your "goons" come w/ da beef, then it's bodybags & bodies covered in fleeces
So tell your boys go ahead with the bull.. or ill make sure that your minotaur into pieces
Minor reach - would be Men are torn into and not men 'a tore into... Lazy execution... You could have made this work nice had you executed differently.
Arguments w/ ya bitch - normal. We give em space & come back to tap coochie
Cuz every man knows girls trip, yet this fag apologizes with front row seats to that movie
Light.
This dick getting headshots. Tryna fuck up ur features hoe, be scared
But the bullets'll do more than leave Nixon his face, after I raise arms & let the piece air
Meh...

Both were light, IMO. I think one barely edges the dub here.

v/Letterman

[plethora]

Dog you gettin euthanized, fast or slow death? I'll let you decide
Cuz I can take a week or Russian roulette... Either way, battlin me is suicide
Ima school you, act out, get more then a bruise too.. These ain't screen clips
Send letter home folded and stapled like "make sure your mother reads this"
Ill fuck ya bitch, then gun butt the bitch.. Or let the blade carve her, see
I could turn ya girl into a squirter.. Wen I pull my knife out her carotid artery


Vs.


If your "goons" come w/ da beef, then it's bodybags & bodies covered in fleeces
So tell your boys go ahead with the bull.. or ill make sure that your minotaur into pieces
This dick getting headshots. Tryna fuck up ur features hoe, be scared
But the bullets'll do more than leave Nixon his face, after I raise arms & let the piece air



Got this 3-2 in favor of notti. Felt letterman was a bit lazy in this battle

[Barcotic]

spicer

vs

girls trip

damn there was a ton of played shit in this battle, not impressed. im going with notti here for 2 reasons
1. his quotable was better than letterman's quotable
2. he had a couple attempts that were decent & not played but still missed, where as letter's misses were ALL played cept one (minotaur was just forced)
v/notti

[Art.]

Notti had the spicer
Send a letter home

Vs

Girls trip

Battle kind of let down , notti had the better verse the extra quote and less harsh misses let seemed rushed

Vote notti