Wk 7:Smog(2-2) Vs Letterman(2-2)[Open For Votes]

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@Smog @Letterman

[Smog]

Not again... I'm good with a 1-2 bro.. ext too

[Letterman]

Lmao bet

[Smog]

12 done bro just lemme know

[Smog]

@Letterman I sent mine to spree earlier today

[Letterman]

Your kid's sexually confused. I'll deck him cuz I hate the geek
So one punch will rock a bi baby & put your son straight to sleep
Headshot. The bang splatter brain matter & ya thoughts exposed
'Cause after the long nose blew tissues, it got rid of all the stuffy nose
We both got bitches in the ride. U got em cryin, I got em dying to stay
I hit chicks in the back of the truck for sex, you do it cuz they're tryna escape
Easy kill cuz the gun got a beam. It's nothing to smoke kids
It'll B dots on your head, & we'll be digging up more dirt for graves than Broke did
Your shorty hopped on my dick. That basic bitch let me cum inside
I saw her spirit take off, & it was a cheaper ride than that airline could provide
Sniper rifle; View you in the scope & now ur daughter can't
Cuz after I shoot the canada bitch, there will be more crying than a Barcotic rant

[Smog]

Listen Bro

U snitched on Fuk for reusin a bar, I thought u lost ur Grown Mans mind
Not cuz he recycled n u a Tattle Tail.... but u ratted on ur OWN damn kind
Proves no1 sticks together, n men r on some drag type sick shit
u took brotherhood.. n changed it to a community of fags who act like Bitches
Ur fall off proves ur wack duke, believe it, n when I kick these facts u'll see it
I just took a Loss wit a better verse.. than ANY u Won wit the past 2 seasons
N of course if u say wack shit it'll open the doors to the hate
mad they debatin ur forced plays.. but Reach so much u EVEN Forced a debate
N Ur a threat? Wit no actual wins don't EVER say ur so Godly
It's funny u ain't even beat a no name.. but have a RESUME wit No Bodies
Ur strategy is peep the roster, 4 vets but More wit 3 years or less
S'why u take concepts from 2014 n under.. cuz to the Majority here it's fresh

[Wuxia]

Your kid's sexually confused. I'll deck him cuz I hate the geek
So one punch will rock a bi baby & put your son straight to sleep

☆☆☆☆☆ dope

Headshot. The bang splatter brain matter & ya thoughts exposed
'Cause after the long nose blew tissues, it got rid of all the stuffy nose

☆☆☆

We both got bitches in the ride. U got em cryin, I got em dying to stay
I hit chicks in the back of the truck for sex, you do it cuz they're tryna escape

☆☆☆☆☆ lmfao

Easy kill cuz the gun got a beam. It's nothing to smoke kids
It'll B dots on your head, & we'll be digging up more dirt for graves than Broke did

☆☆☆☆☆

Your shorty hopped on my dick. That basic bitch let me cum inside
I saw her spirit take off, & it was a cheaper ride than that airline could provide

☆☆☆

Sniper rifle; View you in the scope & now ur daughter can't
Cuz after I shoot the canada bitch, there will be more crying than a Barcotic rant

☆☆☆☆☆

Listen Bro

U snitched on Fuk for reusin a bar, I thought u lost ur Grown Mans mind
Not cuz he recycled n u a Tattle Tail.... but u ratted on ur OWN damn kind

☆☆☆☆☆

Proves no1 sticks together, n men r on some drag type sick shit
u took brotherhood.. n changed it to a community of fags who act like Bitches

☆☆☆

Ur fall off proves ur wack duke, believe it, n when I kick these facts u'll see it
I just took a Loss wit a better verse.. than ANY u Won wit the past 2 seasons

☆☆☆☆☆ dope

N of course if u say wack shit it'll open the doors to the hate
mad they debatin ur forced plays.. but Reach so much u EVEN Forced a debate

☆☆☆☆☆ wow

N Ur a threat? Wit no actual wins don't EVER say ur so Godly
It's funny u ain't even beat a no name.. but have a RESUME wit No Bodies

☆☆☆

Ur strategy is peep the roster, 4 vets but More wit 3 years or less
S'why u take concepts from 2014 n under.. cuz to the Majority here it's fresh

☆☆☆☆☆

This ended up being a great battle. Letterman's verse was hilarious and pretty creative. Smog's verse had really harsh personals. You guys really stepped up for this and considering how you 2 have battled each other so much, you could of easily just phoned it in. But you didn't so props to you both.

v-Smog

[Amen]

Your kid's sexually confused. I'll deck him cuz I hate the geek
So one punch will rock a bi baby & put your son straight to sleep
Flip on a dated concept Bi/Bisexual/Buy/Bye WP, I liked it tho.
Headshot. The bang splatter brain matter & ya thoughts exposed
'Cause after the long nose blew tissues, it got rid of all the stuffy nose
Ehh, another dated concept tissue/flesh/tissue paper WP... Wording was atrocious. I'm need you to clean it up a bit.
We both got bitches in the ride. U got em cryin, I got em dying to stay
I hit chicks in the back of the truck for sex, you do it cuz they're tryna escape
Again, wording hurt you here. Had to read the bar 5 times just to get a clean concept of what you were trying to deliver. Clean it up.
Easy kill cuz the gun got a beam. It's nothing to smoke kids
It'll B dots on your head, & we'll be digging up more dirt for graves than Broke did
Random attempt at a fresh concept that has no real direct impact on Smog... Weak...
Your shorty hopped on my dick. That basic bitch let me cum inside
I saw her spirit take off, & it was a cheaper ride than that airline could provide
This was cool.
Sniper rifle; View you in the scope & now ur daughter can't
Cuz after I shoot the canada bitch, there will be more crying than a Barcotic rant
What? If this is an attempt at word play - I have no fucking idea what you are saying... Trash...

Listen Bro

U snitched on Fuk for reusin a bar, I thought u lost ur Grown Mans mind
Not cuz he recycled n u a Tattle Tail.... but u ratted on ur OWN damn kind
Oops... Got'em!
Proves no1 sticks together, n men r on some drag type sick shit
u took brotherhood.. n changed it to a community of fags who act like Bitches
HA! Nice.
Ur fall off proves ur wack duke, believe it, n when I kick these facts u'll see it
I just took a Loss wit a better verse.. than ANY u Won wit the past 2 seasons
Wording could have been cleaned up a bit.
N of course if u say wack shit it'll open the doors to the hate
mad they debatin ur forced plays.. but Reach so much u EVEN Forced a debate
Fire.
N Ur a threat? Wit no actual wins don't EVER say ur so Godly
It's funny u ain't even beat a no name.. but have a RESUME wit No Bodies
Got'em!
Ur strategy is peep the roster, 4 vets but More wit 3 years or less
S'why u take concepts from 2014 n under.. cuz to the Majority here it's fresh
Lol, damn... Smog went in...

v/Smog

Letterman's verse was the typical Lettermans verse with the exception of 1 or 2 bars I enjoyed which is really rare. I usually hate Letterman's style in writing because it's either Lazy, Played, Played and Lazy or a bunch of forced word plays that make no sense... Smog came correct and direct as where Letterman was more or so focusing on trying to deliver concepts... Personals over concepts any day, IMO.

[Art.]

Your kid's sexually confused. I'll deck him cuz I hate the geek
So one punch will rock a bi baby & put your son straight to sleep
We both got bitches in the ride. U got em cryin, I got em dying to stay
I hit chicks in the back of the truck for sex, you do it cuz they're tryna escape
Sniper rifle; View you in the scope & now ur daughter can't
Cuz after I shoot the canada bitch, there will be more crying than a Barcotic rant

vs


U snitched on Fuk for reusin a bar, I thought u lost ur Grown Mans mind
Not cuz he recycled n u a Tattle Tail.... but u ratted on ur OWN damn kind
Proves no1 sticks together, n men r on some drag type sick shit
u took brotherhood.. n changed it to a community of fags who act like Bitches
N of course if u say wack shit it'll open the doors to the hate
mad they debatin ur forced plays.. but Reach so much u EVEN Forced a debate

this is close.

Letterman had better creativity and execution . Smog had the personals. the thing i didn't likee about smogs verse it was very statementish yeah i got the personals but at the same time no real misdirections or anything no real word plays either.. Letterman had a couple of cool bars Canada Bitch... Can At A Bitch,, aint that hard Amen, cmon dude.. thought it was cool though I've seen something similar.. this can really go either way... I'm going Smog just because i felt some of the impact hit harder, where as letterman had some misses i and more of the humor factor... going back and forth read this again going to go with Smog.. reasons above.

Think the BOTB was the such a force, forced a debate bar... a lot closer than the votes show though.

Vote SMOG.

[GrimmZReaper]

U snitched on Fuk for reusin a bar, I thought u lost ur Grown Mans mind
Not cuz he recycled n u a Tattle Tail.... but u ratted on ur OWN damn kind
Ur fall off proves ur wack duke, believe it, n when I kick these facts u'll see it
I just took a Loss wit a better verse.. than ANY u Won wit the past 2 seasons

vs
Your kid's sexually confused. I'll deck him cuz I hate the geek
So one punch will rock a bi baby & put your son straight to sleep
Headshot. The bang splatter brain matter & ya thoughts exposed
'Cause after the long nose blew tissues, it got rid of all the stuffy nose

cool verse from both...think I seen that dirt on graves/broke lesnar thing in some other guys verse before...
I think each had personals in there and it probably is gonna come down to personal preference... I think Smogs downfall is that by the end everything kinda started to falter and dwindle...and he kinda kept on the same type of topic which made it a bit redundant...

v- LEttrman

[Sizurp]

Your kid's sexually confused. I'll deck him cuz I hate the geek
So one punch will rock a bi baby & put your son straight to sleep
-Not feeling this.Really just the wp in general
Headshot. The bang splatter brain matter & ya thoughts exposed
'Cause after the long nose blew tissues, it got rid of all the stuffy nose
-I like the concept. The wording left it flat
We both got bitches in the ride. U got em cryin, I got em dying to stay
I hit chicks in the back of the truck for sex, you do it cuz they're tryna escape
-This was dope
Easy kill cuz the gun got a beam. It's nothing to smoke kids
It'll B dots on your head, & we'll be digging up more dirt for graves than Broke did
-This was ok, execution was alil off but cool
Your shorty hopped on my dick. That basic bitch let me cum inside
I saw her spirit take off, & it was a cheaper ride than that airline could provide
-Not feeling this
Sniper rifle; View you in the scope & now ur daughter can't
Cuz after I shoot the canada bitch, there will be more crying than a Barcotic rant
-Nice finish

vs

U snitched on Fuk for reusin a bar, I thought u lost ur Grown Mans mind
Not cuz he recycled n u a Tattle Tail.... but u ratted on ur OWN damn kind
-In context im assuming he's recycled? if so this was ok
Proves no1 sticks together, n men r on some drag type sick shit
u took brotherhood.. n changed it to a community of fags who act like Bitches
-Not a stinger but the execution and wording was cool. This was ok
Ur fall off proves ur wack duke, believe it, n when I kick these facts u'll see it
I just took a Loss wit a better verse.. than ANY u Won wit the past 2 seasons
-Not feeling it. Somethings alil off
N of course if u say wack shit it'll open the doors to the hate
mad they debatin ur forced plays.. but Reach so much u EVEN Forced a debate
-This hit hard
N Ur a threat? Wit no actual wins don't EVER say ur so Godly
It's funny u ain't even beat a no name.. but have a RESUME wit No Bodies
-This could have been sooo dope... wording kinda off'd it. Makes it ok at best
Ur strategy is peep the roster, 4 vets but More wit 3 years or less
S'why u take concepts from 2014 n under.. cuz to the Majority here it's fresh
-i like this

v/Smog. I like the personals. They were straight forward but it kinda made his opponent look like a joke. Alil more harsh. Nice read gents

[Notti]

Your kid's sexually confused. I'll deck him cuz I hate the geek
So one punch will rock a bi baby & put your son straight to sleep
Easy kill cuz the gun got a beam. It's nothing to smoke kids
It'll B dots on your head, & we'll be digging up more dirt for graves than Broke did
Your shorty hopped on my dick. That basic bitch let me cum inside
I saw her spirit take off, & it was a cheaper ride than that airline could provide

vs

N of course if u say wack shit it'll open the doors to the hate
mad they debatin ur forced plays.. but Reach so much u EVEN Forced a debate
N Ur a threat? Wit no actual wins don't EVER say ur so Godly
It's funny u ain't even beat a no name.. but have a RESUME wit No Bodies

I guess I'm jus not a fan of Smog's style cuz I usually see the voters love his shit and it jus never resonates wit me. He had these 2 punches I really like and the rest was jus blahhh to me. Letterman had the opener which I enjoyed and finished fairly strong as well except for that forced ass closer. Overall tho, I got letterman wit 1 more quotable

v/ letterman

[Foul]

Your kid's sexually confused. I'll deck him cuz I hate the geek
So one punch will rock a bi baby & put your son straight to sleep
good bar imo
Headshot. The bang splatter brain matter & ya thoughts exposed
'Cause after the long nose blew tissues, it got rid of all the stuffy nose
loaded lux wp...played
We both got bitches in the ride. U got em cryin, I got em dying to stay
I hit chicks in the back of the truck for sex, you do it cuz they're tryna escape
not bad
Easy kill cuz the gun got a beam. It's nothing to smoke kids
It'll B dots on your head, & we'll be digging up more dirt for graves than Broke did
i dont get the reference but i understood the wp..decent
Your shorty hopped on my dick. That basic bitch let me cum inside
I saw her spirit take off, & it was a cheaper ride than that airline could provide
dece again
Sniper rifle; View you in the scope & now ur daughter can't
Cuz after I shoot the canada bitch, there will be more crying than a Barcotic rant
if barcotic is canadian this bar def hit, canada bitch= can at a bitch i understood it

Cool verse

Vs
U snitched on Fuk for reusin a bar, I thought u lost ur Grown Mans mind
Not cuz he recycled n u a Tattle Tail.... but u ratted on ur OWN damn kind
once again im not getting the personal since i wasnt here for it but others are saying it hit so im guessing theres some truth here...good opener
Proves no1 sticks together, n men r on some drag type sick shit
u took brotherhood.. n changed it to a community of fags who act like Bitches
wish i aint miss out on rb for a long time but ill repeat the same thing i said for this bar, good angle
Ur fall off proves ur wack duke, believe it, n when I kick these facts u'll see it
I just took a Loss wit a better verse.. than ANY u Won wit the past 2 seasons
not feeling it too statementish
N of course if u say wack shit it'll open the doors to the hate
mad they debatin ur forced plays.. but Reach so much u EVEN Forced a debate
another personal i missed out on
N Ur a threat? Wit no actual wins don't EVER say ur so Godly
It's funny u ain't even beat a no name.. but have a RESUME wit No Bodies
ive seen lettermans shit hes bodied a few ppl before lol
Ur strategy is peep the roster, 4 vets but More wit 3 years or less
S'why u take concepts from 2014 n under.. cuz to the Majority here it's fresh
good angle, i did see a few played lines in his verse so solid closer

To me it came down to the "execution" of the bars...smog definitely took the right angles in this battle but his phrasing lacked in areas whereas lettermans read smoother to me and so his punches had a little more pop even if not "personal" smog. This shitcomes down to preference and letterman took it for me. I'm not buddy buddy with either of these guys i just know both of them from this site so my vote is completely unbiased.

- - - Updated - - -

V/letterman

[plethora]

Your kid's sexually confused. I'll deck him cuz I hate the geek
So one punch will rock a bi baby & put your son straight to sleep
^lol
Headshot. The bang splatter brain matter & ya thoughts exposed
'Cause after the long nose blew tissues, it got rid of all the stuffy nose
^cool
We both got bitches in the ride. U got em cryin, I got em dying to stay
I hit chicks in the back of the truck for sex, you do it cuz they're tryna escape
^lol
Easy kill cuz the gun got a beam. It's nothing to smoke kids
It'll B dots on your head, & we'll be digging up more dirt for graves than Broke did
^seems like ive seen this recently with someones setup
Your shorty hopped on my dick. That basic bitch let me cum inside
I saw her spirit take off, & it was a cheaper ride than that airline could provide
^lol
Sniper rifle; View you in the scope & now ur daughter can't
Cuz after I shoot the canada bitch, there will be more crying than a Barcotic rant
^dope

..funny verse

Vs.

U snitched on Fuk for reusin a bar, I thought u lost ur Grown Mans mind
Not cuz he recycled n u a Tattle Tail.... but u ratted on ur OWN damn kind
^decent opener
Proves no1 sticks together, n men r on some drag type sick shit
u took brotherhood.. n changed it to a community of fags who act like Bitches
^ehh
Ur fall off proves ur wack duke, believe it, n when I kick these facts u'll see it
I just took a Loss wit a better verse.. than ANY u Won wit the past 2 seasons
^more of a statement
N of course if u say wack shit it'll open the doors to the hate
mad they debatin ur forced plays.. but Reach so much u EVEN Forced a debate
^lmao
N Ur a threat? Wit no actual wins don't EVER say ur so Godly
It's funny u ain't even beat a no name.. but have a RESUME wit No Bodies
^nah seen these type bars before
Ur strategy is peep the roster, 4 vets but More wit 3 years or less
S'why u take concepts from 2014 n under.. cuz to the Majority here it's fresh
^damn lol

..good verse







Dope battle
Vote = Letterman

- - - Updated - - -

Your kid's sexually confused. I'll deck him cuz I hate the geek
So one punch will rock a bi baby & put your son straight to sleep
^lol
Headshot. The bang splatter brain matter & ya thoughts exposed
'Cause after the long nose blew tissues, it got rid of all the stuffy nose
^cool
We both got bitches in the ride. U got em cryin, I got em dying to stay
I hit chicks in the back of the truck for sex, you do it cuz they're tryna escape
^lol
Easy kill cuz the gun got a beam. It's nothing to smoke kids
It'll B dots on your head, & we'll be digging up more dirt for graves than Broke did
^seems like ive seen this recently with someones setup
Your shorty hopped on my dick. That basic bitch let me cum inside
I saw her spirit take off, & it was a cheaper ride than that airline could provide
^lol
Sniper rifle; View you in the scope & now ur daughter can't
Cuz after I shoot the canada bitch, there will be more crying than a Barcotic rant
^dope

..funny verse

Vs.

U snitched on Fuk for reusin a bar, I thought u lost ur Grown Mans mind
Not cuz he recycled n u a Tattle Tail.... but u ratted on ur OWN damn kind
^decent opener
Proves no1 sticks together, n men r on some drag type sick shit
u took brotherhood.. n changed it to a community of fags who act like Bitches
^ehh
Ur fall off proves ur wack duke, believe it, n when I kick these facts u'll see it
I just took a Loss wit a better verse.. than ANY u Won wit the past 2 seasons
^more of a statement
N of course if u say wack shit it'll open the doors to the hate
mad they debatin ur forced plays.. but Reach so much u EVEN Forced a debate
^lmao
N Ur a threat? Wit no actual wins don't EVER say ur so Godly
It's funny u ain't even beat a no name.. but have a RESUME wit No Bodies
^nah seen these type bars before
Ur strategy is peep the roster, 4 vets but More wit 3 years or less
S'why u take concepts from 2014 n under.. cuz to the Majority here it's fresh
^damn lol

..good verse







Dope battle
Vote = Letterman