WK 7 Contenders: Barcotic(2-0) Vs Notti(2-0)[Open For Votes]

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@Barcotic @Notti

[Notti]

I SAID YOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

[Barcotic]

yao ming

[Barcotic]

ext

[Barcotic]

Dog you gettin euthanized, fast or slow death? I'll let you decide
Cuz I can take a week or Russian roulette... Either way, battlin me is suicide

☆ that np is way overused on letterman, i can't give any credit to this

Ima school you, act out, get more then a bruise too.. These ain't screen clips
Send letter home folded and stapled like "make sure your mother reads this"

☆ another overused np

letter folded is too played n so was the roulette joint...

damn there was a ton of played shit in this battle, not impressed

if old np is ur strategy, it's RIP 'cuz nerds remember
last week was Nott/Lett ...
this week try to Not Let the archive be a 3rd contender
loafted cuz my order came. do informers slang? never
last time this square had fire on the corner, Kane entered
battling me, im the obvious victor and solidly sicker
if Nott sees a compliment, voters are calling me Hitler
u might as well have 2 breasts & a V, hoe. yes ur a freak show
it aint a pampering when my low shin connects w/ your cheek bone
ur presence is weak bro, u'd fuckin sway if I breathed
so if I say u fierce Nott.. it means u'd run away if I sneezed

annnnnnd THAT is how wp/np is done folks

ur welcome

[Notti]

Mother = Ruthann Taylor

I'm finna expose you bitch, by now in your head you've said your screwed
I'm bout to F5 the shit out this faggot... That jus means I'm finna use Lesnar's move
I be pipin ya moms... But ill still kill that bitch wit no remorse, this is truth
Its ironic, ill be the one to get ruthless but you'll be the one missing Ruth
He ain't dope he's a con artist, tryna persuade US he's great.. Well I've had enough of B
One punch'll have this condescending quick, for him even thinkin he's above the league
If its war I want the blood line, show up at his family reunion... this is where its endin
Cuz once I up the sticks n sinew shots... I'm gon kill you and anyone else who is a tendon
He wanna be down sooooo bad... following all the trends tryna fit in, just be you Bar
Cuz that facade don't make us think urial, it jus makes you look like the sheep you are

[Wuxia]

if old np is ur strategy, it's RIP 'cuz nerds remember
last week was Nott/Lett ...
this week try to Not Let the archive be a 3rd contender

☆☆☆☆☆ nice

loafted cuz my order came. do informers slang? never
last time this square had fire on the corner, Kane entered

☆☆☆ i liked the bar but not how it ended with just "kane entered"

battling me, im the obvious victor and solidly sicker
if Nott sees a compliment, voters are calling me Hitler

☆☆☆☆☆

u might as well have 2 breasts & a V, hoe. yes ur a freak show
it aint a pampering when my low shin connects w/ your cheek bone

☆☆☆☆☆ dope

ur presence is weak bro, u'd fuckin sway if I breathed
so if I say u fierce Nott.. it means u'd run away if I sneezed

☆☆☆☆☆

annnnnnd THAT is how wp/np is done folks

ur welcome

Mother = Ruthann Taylor

I'm finna expose you bitch, by now in your head you've said your screwed
I'm bout to F5 the shit out this faggot... That jus means I'm finna use Lesnar's move

☆☆☆☆☆

I be pipin ya moms... But ill still kill that bitch wit no remorse, this is truth
Its ironic, ill be the one to get ruthless but you'll be the one missing Ruth

☆☆☆☆☆ dope

He ain't dope he's a con artist, tryna persuade US he's great.. Well I've had enough of B
One punch'll have this condescending quick, for him even thinkin he's above the league

☆☆☆☆☆ dope wp, i love difficult wp's

If its war I want the blood line, show up at his family reunion... this is where its endin
Cuz once I up the sticks n sinew shots... I'm gon kill you and anyone else who is a tendon

☆☆☆

He wanna be down sooooo bad... following all the trends tryna fit in, just be you Bar
Cuz that facade don't make us think urial, it jus makes you look like the sheep you are

☆☆☆☆☆ i double checked the pronounciation just to make sure and it worked, this was fire

Excellent battle, fellas. It was ripe with with fresh wp's and very creative. Not to mention close. Really fucking close. Both of you tied each other, but I do have a winner in mind. Notti, great showing. Where you fucked up is failing to capitalize on your personals. I'm assuming if you know who Ruthanne is then you know other details about his life. You should of went hard, and you should of crafted your entire verse on personals. You stepped on his throat but then lifted it and helped him back to his feet. When you have him in a compromising position like that, keep going. What settled this for me is that I enjoyed Barcotic's miss more than Notti's. BUT, I enjoyed Notti's personal more than Barcotic's. So I'm going to have to go with Notti.

v-Notti

[Sizurp]

if old np is ur strategy, it's RIP 'cuz nerds remember
last week was Nott/Lett ...
this week try to Not Let the archive be a 3rd contender
-All around good
loafted cuz my order came. do informers slang? never
last time this square had fire on the corner, Kane entered
-This was slick
battling me, im the obvious victor and solidly sicker
if Nott sees a compliment, voters are calling me Hitler
-Like the wp, not a stinger but this was ok
u might as well have 2 breasts & a V, hoe. yes ur a freak show
it aint a pampering when my low shin connects w/ your cheek bone
-Consistency, this hit tok
ur presence is weak bro, u'd fuckin sway if I breathed
so if I say u fierce Nott.. it means u'd run away if I sneezed
-Kinda funny

Vs

I'm finna expose you bitch, by now in your head you've said your screwed
I'm bout to F5 the shit out this faggot... That jus means I'm finna use Lesnar's move
-Kinda winded on the wording here
I be pipin ya moms... But ill still kill that bitch wit no remorse, this is truth
Its ironic, ill be the one to get ruthless but you'll be the one missing Ruth
-Read the expo, ouch
He ain't dope he's a con artist, tryna persuade US he's great.. Well I've had enough of B
One punch'll have this condescending quick, for him even thinkin he's above the league
-Nothin fresh but worded well.. Its light
If its war I want the blood line, show up at his family reunion... this is where its endin
Cuz once I up the sticks n sinew shots... I'm gon kill you and anyone else who is a tendon
-Not feeling this one
He wanna be down sooooo bad... following all the trends tryna fit in, just be you Bar
Cuz that facade don't make us think urial, it jus makes you look like the sheep you are
-This was decent. Havent seen that b4

V/Barcotic... pretty consistent. Not a bad drop from either. The concise wording made his verse hit better

[Smog]

Bar


Opener dope
Fire on the corner dope
Nazis dope play light hit
Pampering dope
Closer cool play but a bit corny

Notti

Opener dope
Missing Ruth harsh
Condescending was nice
Wasn't digging the sinew joint much
Closer was pretty cool too

Dope match imo... I felt u both missed on 1 but overall I feel bar connected harder with better wording.. notti if u tighten it up a little bro ur shit would land nasty n ud be tuff to beat.. I liked this verse but at times got choppy or overworded.. I know what it's like to rush n def felt u showed up but I got bar landing harder hits here.. that Ruth shits mean tho.. props to both


Bar

[Art.]

if old np is ur strategy, it's RIP 'cuz nerds remember
last week was Nott/Lett ...
this week try to Not Let the archive be a 3rd contender
loafted cuz my order came. do informers slang? never
last time this square had fire on the corner, Kane entered
u might as well have 2 breasts & a V, hoe. yes ur a freak show
it aint a pampering when my low shin connects w/ your cheek bone

vs

I'm finna expose you bitch, by now in your head you've said your screwed
I'm bout to F5 the shit out this faggot... That jus means I'm finna use Lesnar's move
I be pipin ya moms... But ill still kill that bitch wit no remorse, this is truth
Its ironic, ill be the one to get ruthless but you'll be the one missing Ruth
e ain't dope he's a con artist, tryna persuade US he's great.. Well I've had enough of B
One punch'll have this condescending quick, for him even thinkin he's above the league
He wanna be down sooooo bad... following all the trends tryna fit in, just be you Bar
Cuz that facade don't make us think urial, it jus makes you look like the sheep you are

think notti got him... notti had some new stuff cool personal flip bar had some cool lines as well, ender was real corny gotta agree w/ smog i wasn't a fan of it. re read the verses again, dope battle notti had some wording issues but i thought his concepts were better, where as barcotic had the cleaner read but not as hard.. i could have quoted the hitler line, but idk something was off to me.

I'm going notti. felt he was a bit more creative.

[Joe Boston]

Barcotic

Open was cool nice personal tie. 2nd bar was a nice reference. Hitler bar was nice good wordplay usage. Low shin bar was fucking fire lol nice direct hit. Fierce knot pretty cool wp i can picture cats,calling a,slight reach but we already had this convo about wp pronunciation this,worked.

Notti

No offense but condescending sinew facade ive seen done not sure why people dont reserch shit. Barc if u lose ur getting robbed here. Like i said Notti ive been here enough not downing you but i like i said these arent fresh new wps and shit. Ruth bar was ok personal. But yall motherfuckers need to research ive seen exact same material on NC and here catz,is chomping in their own wayz rewording shit to cover up.

V/Barcotic

[plethora]

if old np is ur strategy, it's RIP 'cuz nerds remember
last week was Nott/Lett ...
this week try to Not Let the archive be a 3rd contender
^simple and light
loafted cuz my order came. do informers slang? never
last time this square had fire on the corner, Kane entered
^coulda been fire with better wording
battling me, im the obvious victor and solidly sicker
if Nott sees a compliment, voters are calling me Hitler
^nazi is mad played but his name usage made it ok
u might as well have 2 breasts & a V, hoe. yes ur a freak show
it aint a pampering when my low shin connects w/ your cheek bone
^ur best line
ur presence is weak bro, u'd fuckin sway if I breathed
so if I say u fierce Nott.. it means u'd run away if I sneezed
^tried to make a similar two word connection like last weeks ice smelt bar but this one was mehh


Vs.


I'm finna expose you bitch, by now in your head you've said your screwed
I'm bout to F5 the shit out this faggot... That jus means I'm finna use Lesnar's move
^seems played
I be pipin ya moms... But ill still kill that bitch wit no remorse, this is truth
Its ironic, ill be the one to get ruthless but you'll be the one missing Ruth
^nice
He ain't dope he's a con artist, tryna persuade US he's great.. Well I've had enough of B
One punch'll have this condescending quick, for him even thinkin he's above the league
^not feeling it
If its war I want the blood line, show up at his family reunion... this is where its endin
Cuz once I up the sticks n sinew shots... I'm gon kill you and anyone else who is a tendon
^nooo
He wanna be down sooooo bad... following all the trends tryna fit in, just be you Bar
Cuz that facade don't make us think urial, it jus makes you look like the sheep you are
^like it




V/ Barcotic

[Amen]

if old np is ur strategy, it's RIP 'cuz nerds remember
last week was Nott/Lett ...
this week try to Not Let the archive be a 3rd contender
Mild, but direct.
loafted cuz my order came. do informers slang? never
last time this square had fire on the corner, Kane entered
I hate WWE references lol...
battling me, im the obvious victor and solidly sicker
if Nott sees a compliment, voters are calling me Hitler
Wasn't feeling this.
u might as well have 2 breasts & a V, hoe. yes ur a freak show
it aint a pampering when my low shin connects w/ your cheek bone
Fire.
ur presence is weak bro, u'd fuckin sway if I breathed
so if I say u fierce Nott.. it means u'd run away if I sneezed
Fire.

annnnnnd THAT is how wp/np is done folks

ur welcome

Mother = Ruthann Taylor

I'm finna expose you bitch, by now in your head you've said your screwed
I'm bout to F5 the shit out this faggot... That jus means I'm finna use Lesnar's move
Extremely wordy for an average concept.
I be pipin ya moms... But ill still kill that bitch wit no remorse, this is truth
Its ironic, ill be the one to get ruthless but you'll be the one missing Ruth
Did not like this and again, mad wordy.
He ain't dope he's a con artist, tryna persuade US he's great.. Well I've had enough of B
One punch'll have this condescending quick, for him even thinkin he's above the league
Dece at best, extra wordy tho... Could have delivered with half the characters bro.
If its war I want the blood line, show up at his family reunion... this is where its endin
Cuz once I up the sticks n sinew shots... I'm gon kill you and anyone else who is a tendon
Ok - AGAIN, long winded man... The fuck...
He wanna be down sooooo bad... following all the trends tryna fit in, just be you Bar
Cuz that facade don't make us think urial, it jus makes you look like the sheep you are
Wordy but cool, I suppose...

v/Barcotic - cleaner verse. Concepts delivered a lot cleaner, as in concept transitions and delivery. Notti had some mediocre shit that was long winded and wordy... His verse is a great cardio workout, IMO lol... Barc had 2 dope punches that basically slumped every punch Notti dropped when trying to compare punch for punch. Even if I had to put quote against quote, Barc were just more effective.

[GrimmZReaper]

if old np is ur strategy, it's RIP 'cuz nerds remember
last week was Nott/Lett ...
this week try to Not Let the archive be a 3rd contender
battling me, im the obvious victor and solidly sicker
if Nott sees a compliment, voters are calling me Hitler


vs
He ain't dope he's a con artist, tryna persuade US he's great.. Well I've had enough of B
One punch'll have this condescending quick, for him even thinkin he's above the league
If its war I want the blood line, show up at his family reunion... this is where its endin
Cuz once I up the sticks n sinew shots... I'm gon kill you and anyone else who is a tendon


that short style barcotic uses takes getting used to, but it works ...for him... Notts punches became repetitive after a while..that ruthless/ missing roof bar was horrible...
not that complicated a battle and Barcs verse was enough to edge this out

[Unfukwitable]

Nott/Lett+ (this was a solid opener)
Nazi+ (nice works)
Lotion+ (this was tough)
Fear snot++ (this was crackkk!)

vs

Ruthless+ (this was dope)
Condescending++ (this was fire fire to me)
Urial++ (this was creative!)


I feel this was a good battle here one had more quotes the other had some tough bars but more misses, Its a tough call here but I think ima go one way because there was a bar I was close to quoting and the other one had a opener I didnt really feel to much maybe I missed something but it really aint hit to me .. props to whom ever comes out on top (pause) lol v/ Barcotic