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    Fucka rhymescheme

    Crush a perc down
    Snort a line up
    I figure you figured that I was doin fine huh?
    That I been working steady just trying ta
    Get my money high enough to escape the prison that binds us.
    No luck tho
    I been spending penny's to put petrol in the truck bro.
    You think habits that are this ingrained
    Are gonna leave me now like I flipped my brain
    To it's off position?
    I'll cough this instant
    An I'll bet you my mom's prescription
    That I'll hack up 4 percs and 2 vikes on the wall in the kitchen!
    I got lawless visions mixed with
    Awful convictions
    Fucked up beyond recognition fallin in the halls cuz I'm judging the wrong dimensions
    In each step
    I'm 1 deep breath away from hittin this peak
    This death.
    So peep this mess
    I'm too deep to be depressed
    So I keep one P to sleep and regress
    I mean,
    if I treat these keys like seeds at these depths
    I'll never have weed to beat the weak breaths.
    So fuck your opinion
    I don't mean to be step
    Daddy to a kid that needs me to be less.
    I'm tryna be grateful but the peeps are gettin left
    Behind for the moment while I prove that D's the best.
    I.P.

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    Re: Fucka rhymescheme

    This was nice little self hype piece. Yo i wasnt bashing anything if the title is a shot towards me lol. I was implying in concious type pieces using metaphorical expression and good vocab content makes it stand out. This right here tells me your a punchline writer i am so myself. This had a great flow and the ryhme scheme and how u transitioned it was dope.
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    Re: Fucka rhymescheme

    Lol no shot at you bro I just can't tell how this is formatted cuz my phone has all the text enlarged. Appreciate the feed tho man good to see you around still
    I.P.

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    Re: Fucka rhymescheme

    Them back to backs though lmao
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