Basic M (0-0) vs Sword Nation (1-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

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@basic m @sword nation

[Sizurp]

10 is good

[SwordNation]

10 is cool

Want to do a pic battle?

[Sizurp]

10 is cool

Want to do a pic battle?

Nah, reg is fine. My 10 is done, just at me when you're ready

[SwordNation]

Lol OK

[SwordNation]

Lol OK

[SwordNation]

Last dude no showed for a reason, so I'm glad you got that ten ready
racing to be a champ, but the closets he gets his writing faster than Mario Andretti
And let me just say, in another sense, he's a word for a lame
he would turn for the fame, you lost here dog like a backbacker in Spain
Fucked his skank gf last week behind a dumpster no tease or flirt
So I'm pretty sure Mayweather was talking about both of yall when he said point to the easy work
You make sure you look back on this and take it as a lesson
Cause this BM got I's on me, but he's average n small, I'm in the 95% I'll Body this Mass INdex any section.
probably talk like he got guns, post it up son, then we can stamp that
fucka duce duce, ill hit'em w/ that 12 12 n he'll experience the worst 24 like this weeks champ match

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Backpacker*

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@basic m

[Sizurp]

You get zero pussy. We know your suspect n its obvious, fam.
This aint king arthur but we’ve heard stories of sword gettin lifted by a muscular man.
Its pure target practice. You’re beyond dead if you try n act violent.
This battles like the trump election. This’ll be the 2nd time we see a nation divided.
I voted on one of ya battles. The shit was so awful i hope u duck, clown.
You probably should of let joe frazier punches cuz you were seriously gettin KTFO.
My cock’ll shift ya bitch. Her heart almost stopped beating, son.
She claimed fuckin at that pacemaker crazy cuz she’s in dire need of one.
You dont have what it takes to hang with M. i’ll leave u flatlined, ya feel me?
The way you’re gettin steamrolled this week, Wolffs law has got to be the joke of the century.

[Smog]

Last dude no showed for a reason, so I'm glad you got that ten ready
racing to be a champ, but the closets he gets his writing faster than Mario Andretti
To bland here, got tie ins but just comparing him to writing faster than a race car driver softened this bar

And let me just say, in another sense, he's a word for a lame
he would turn for the fame, you lost here dog like a backbacker in Spain
Ok,

Fucked his skank gf last week behind a dumpster no tease or flirt
So I'm pretty sure Mayweather was talking about both of yall when he said point to the easy work
Coulda been nice with a better execution

You make sure you look back on this and take it as a lesson
Cause this BM got I's on me, but he's average n small, I'm in the 95% I'll Body this Mass INdex any section.
Bad wording.. great idea but execution killed it

probably talk like he got guns, post it up son, then we can stamp that
fucka duce duce, ill hit'em w/ that 12 12 n he'll experience the worst 24 like this weeks champ match
Lmfaooooo..


Basic

You get zero pussy. We know your suspect n its obvious, fam.
This aint king arthur but we’ve heard stories of sword gettin lifted by a muscular man.
Cool

Its pure target practice. You’re beyond dead if you try n act violent.
This battles like the trump election. This’ll be the 2nd time we see a nation divided.
Cool again

I voted on one of ya battles. The shit was so awful i hope u duck, clown.
You probably should of let joe frazier punches cuz you were seriously gettin KTFO.
Seen alotta of these phrase ur lines

My cock’ll shift ya bitch. Her heart almost stopped beating, son.
She claimed fuckin at that pacemaker crazy cuz she’s in dire need of one.
Ok

You dont have what it takes to hang with M. i’ll leave u flatlined, ya feel me?
The way you’re gettin steamrolled this week, Wolffs law has got to be the joke of the century.
Ok


Overall M had the better hits here.. felt sword had great ideas but lacked on executing them.. clean it up a bit n ull start landing harder bro.. m was more consistent here n landed better punches.. that closer was funny af tho sword.. cool read but basic got this


Basic m

[Wuxia]

Last dude no showed for a reason, so I'm glad you got that ten ready
racing to be a champ, but the closets he gets his writing faster than Mario Andretti

☆

And let me just say, in another sense, he's a word for a lame
he would turn for the fame, you lost here dog like a backbacker in Spain

☆ really bad simile

Fucked his skank gf last week behind a dumpster no tease or flirt
So I'm pretty sure Mayweather was talking about both of yall when he said point to the easy work

☆

You make sure you look back on this and take it as a lesson
Cause this BM got I's on me, but he's average n small, I'm in the 95% I'll Body this Mass INdex any section.

☆

probably talk like he got guns, post it up son, then we can stamp that
fucka duce duce, ill hit'em w/ that 12 12 n he'll experience the worst 24 like this weeks champ match

☆

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Backpacker*

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@basic m

You get zero pussy. We know your suspect n its obvious, fam.
This aint king arthur but we’ve heard stories of sword gettin lifted by a muscular man.

☆☆☆☆☆ dope

Its pure target practice. You’re beyond dead if you try n act violent.
This battles like the trump election. This’ll be the 2nd time we see a nation divided.

☆☆☆☆☆

I voted on one of ya battles. The shit was so awful i hope u duck, clown.
You probably should of let joe frazier punches cuz you were seriously gettin KTFO.

☆☆☆☆☆

My cock’ll shift ya bitch. Her heart almost stopped beating, son.
She claimed fuckin at that pacemaker crazy cuz she’s in dire need of one.

☆☆☆☆☆ nice

You dont have what it takes to hang with M. i’ll leave u flatlined, ya feel me?
The way you’re gettin steamrolled this week, Wolffs law has got to be the joke of the century.

☆☆☆

This really wasn't a contest for basic. Sword isn't Networth bad, but his showing was really tame and uninspiring. There wasn't anything that struck me as exciting his verse. Basic's 2 nameplays were fire, the sword/muscular man and nation divided quotables. They alone were better than anything in Sword's verse.

v-basic

[DzasteR]

probably talk like he got guns, post it up son, then we can stamp that
fucka duce duce, ill hit'em w/ that 12 12 n he'll experience the worst 24 like this weeks champ match

vs

You get zero pussy. We know your suspect n its obvious, fam.
This aint king arthur but we’ve heard stories of sword gettin lifted by a muscular man.
Its pure target practice. You’re beyond dead if you try n act violent.
This battles like the trump election. This’ll be the 2nd time we see a nation divided.
My cock’ll shift ya bitch. Her heart almost stopped beating, son.
She claimed fuckin at that pacemaker crazy cuz she’s in dire need of one.

Sword there was a lot of punches you coulda executed well. They just didn't come out hard. The BMI coulda been hard if you worded it better. The Mayweather bar coulda been hard too if you worded it better. The wording was iffy so it failed you on the punches, and it just didn't connect well. Basic didn't come to play. He actually had some decent bars. The nation divided was pretty cool, impact was there so its worth a quotable. The king Arthur bar was a dope opener. Good shit, consistent through out your verse, better punches, you put in effort to make the impact sting with your bars, sword keep elevating. You got the concepts, you just gotta execute them better than this.

v/ BM

[GrimmZReaper]

probably talk like he got guns, post it up son, then we can stamp that
fucka duce duce, ill hit'em w/ that 12 12 n he'll experience the worst 24 like this weeks champ match


vs

You get zero pussy. We know your suspect n its obvious, fam.
This aint king arthur but we’ve heard stories of sword gettin lifted by a muscular man.
My cock’ll shift ya bitch. Her heart almost stopped beating, son.
She claimed fuckin at that pacemaker crazy cuz she’s in dire need of one.


decent battle for 2 new to join the LLL...not much in the personals though, think ya should aim for some of that... a lil bit more nameflips maybe... Basics wording and flow were better here...not a bad showing... keep at it @ both

V- Basic

[Joe Boston]

Sword:

Gotta work on wording and overstretched bars my man. The spain backpacker couldve had some potential if u displayed that similie creativity. The closer wasnt bad. Just try to make your finishers short n sweet and too the point with some creativity and harsh impact.

BM

King Arthur lmao
Pace Maker was nice

Joe Frazier bars little played my man as well as trump but overall the hit was ok.

V/Basic m

Overall the two bars he had were more creative and had more impact.

[Unfukwitable]

Nothing

vs.

King Arthur
Divided Nation
Pacemaker

One just aint have it u need to start from scratch get u a angle/concept and see how u can string along better hittin punches for ya opponent... the other came with a solid verse it was a easy slaughterfest here.. v/ Basic

[Barcotic]

the only 2 bars worth mentioning in this battle ..

king arthur
pacemaker

v/bmjr