so heres the deal, im looking for some feedback
do the vocals sound ok?
is the beat and vocals mixed well?
do you think the song is dope?
what are your feelings about the hook?
any tips on where to get better sound effects?

heres this song i did and i wanted to create a story type of song and when i made this beat it gave me a caniving thievery type of vibe so in essense the song is about a robbery taking place where each verse is somebody elses point of view...youll just have to listen to get it ...

http://www.soundclick.com/html5/v3/p...&q=hi&newref=1